my first ashiuv fan fic

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guys,this is my first fan fic ever.so,if it's not good,do tell me n i'll improve it.

It was a happy day for all the remix gang n their near ones as they had won the battle for remix.they were shocked by the behaviour of jumbo(their sadhu princi) bcoz he wanted to start a music section n taking a test on their passion for music..🤢🤢.. yuvi was finally out of his father's (yucky yd🤢🤢...) rule.

scene 1:

The gang was sitting in the canteen and celebrating their victory.

sid:hey guys,aakhir hum jeet hi gaye.

yuvi:yeh toh ona hi thaa sid.remix is the best and wins everybattle.

ashi:duh-uh!! par aaj jumbo jo change huya,that was amazing.

vrinda:haan ashi.i agree.humne socha bhi nahiin thaa ke jumbo sir aise change hojaaenge.

varun:okay!! ab toh sab theek ho gaya hai.tum sab ko yaad toh hai ke tumhe studies mein top results laane hain.

remix members in a chorus:haaaaaaan..

tia:ok guys,tia aur uski angels ne abhi kissi zaroori kaam ke liye jaana hai. then byee.

ranveer looks strangely at tia wen she was going looking worried.

he thought that somthin is goin on and gets up from there.varun,vrinde and sid too go 4rm there.Left are just ashi and uv..oooooooohhh..😳

😳....

they start looking in each others eyes unaware of the guys sitting in the canteen..ohhhhh😳😳😳....😳...😳..and then...

precap...ashi and uv remembering the over the gates moment....ohhooo😳

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iloveashi thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#2
nice part continue soon 👏
divya_92 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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really gud start 👏

btw, whtz ur name?

continue soon

Divz
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 👏
pls post the next part asap. 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesum part..but plzz write sumthing of tia n arnny also..and show sum romantic scenes btw ashi n uv.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i'll write soon abt tia n ranny.i didn't write now coz it's not the right time..
by the way,i'm kaveri.

Edited by snowie91 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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too gd kaveri..cont soon as possible.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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part-2
In tia"s room:
meher:kya hua tia.tum udaas lag rahi ho.
pri:haan tia,kya ho gaya?tum itni worried kyon lag rahi ho?
tia:tia lo toh worried hona hi padega.parso camel ka b'day hai aur ab tak tia ne kucch nahi socha.
meher and pri:kya,ranveer ka birthday?
tia:haan!!tia ki toh samajh nahiin aa raha hai ke woh kya kare.
meher:tia,tum worried mat ho.hamare paas kaafi time hai. socho!socho!!!
they start thinking.

Meanwhile in the canteen,ashi and uv hold their hands looking deeply into their eyes.they get up and start walking towards the campus garden.
ashi(coming to her senses):yuvi,tumhe yaad hai jab pub mein tumne mujhe propose kiya tha and kaise humne us lonely park mein time spend kiya thaa.
yuvi(remembering):haan ashi.mujhe sab yaad hai.
and they start remembering the (over the gates ) moment.
the moment came to their mind.
they hug each other tightly as if they don't want to leave each other.
ooooooooohhhhhhhhhh 😊
precap:ranveer asking tia what is going on in her mind??


hope u like it...
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Posted: 19 years ago
#9
really nice Kaveri 👏
continue soon

Divz
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey....gr8 goin.... 👏 👏 👏 and that's a very nice idea of writing the precap!!! 😛 I think even I shud implement it in my fic... 😆

Btw...wat's ur name??? 😕 😕

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