An insight on true love- a t-r fic. - Page 3

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Posted: 19 years ago
#21
😳 😳 😳 Cute part hunny...cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#22
hey kahan ho where r u?

v r w8ing

cont soon

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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
awwwwww its so cuteeeee 😳
puhlease cont fast 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#24
i am soooooooooo srry i no took long enough but kya kare?????? life badi mushkil hai!!lol sooo srry

anyways without futher delay

chappie 4
recap
talk about awkward situation..

ranveer was sooo deeply drowned in tia s eyes that he didnot see where they were or what time it was it was just tia and him , noone else nothing mattered until once again-

"jagte rahoooo"

ranveer was taken out of trance and so was tia she was soo lost in ranveer eyes that such sudden surprise had throwm her off her feet and the little gap left between them was minimized to none tia was in ranveers arms ... 😉

"tia hame lagta hai hame chalna chahiye" whispered ranveer

"haan, tia ko bhi yahi lagta hai" said tia

but neither moved both were soo content in each others arms just lying there thinking noone in this world existed except for the 2 of them ... which was just beautiful and mesmerising in boths eyes both of them thinking what it would be like to live together just the 2 of them , both happy ...


but that was not possible they both knew it and they had to get out of here cause in reality if they didnt they could be expelled not for being out so late but for the compromising situation they were in. still neither moved until 3rice this night they were interupted by

"jagte rahoo"

which got them completely out of their trances and before ranveer could say anything tia said-

"ranveer tia ko tumse kuch baat karni hai, par yahan nahi shed mein chalte hai.... theek hai??"



muhahahahahahah cliff hanger i know but you will have to wait for te next chappie to know what happened in the shed and if he agreed or not(which he did ) soo keeep waiting 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#25
fab part....pls cont soon
Edited by rhea_remix - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#26
don't keep us waiting for too long like last time
and regarding this part ......it was awesome.
if possible plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue today itself.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#27
hey well seems like your wish is coming true honey_13 well im writing today partly cause you insisted and partly cause i dont know when next ill get time soo now on with it-

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"thik hai tia to phir abhi chale??" asked ranveer

"haan abhi chalte hain" answered tia


tia knew what she was going to do very clearly she was going to confess her feelings to ranveer and thats it tia didnt care what would happen , if he would say yes or no, or if he would....slap her


but nothing could stop tia today.... so she slipped past the watchman and ranveer followed tia to the shed.

sorry guys writing a short part but promise that a tia -ranveer romantic scene coming up next . promise.luvya sanya

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Posted: 19 years ago
#28
Thanks yaar
But this was very short
And doon't say that you will continue when you get time
Plzzzz find some time and write the next part atleast tomorrow , if not today
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzz
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
#29
sooooooooooooooo small part.neway gud part.plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon asap. 👏



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Posted: 19 years ago
#30
short and swwet.it was chooo chweet..plz cont soon..

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