rf ramayan---part 4 pg 9

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Part 1
Bayville High: Dangerous, enter with caution
Wind ,water.earth,fire and sky—the five elements…each so different from each other…yet…..all combine to give perfection…a balance….but then y is it that we humans lack this balance…hmm….no one knows the answer…and well as we proceed lets see..if a balance is possible..if total perfection is not maddening..

Our this journey to uncover a *ahem* truth bout us humans, the so called intelligent and *social* animal….whether we r really intelligent or "kya fool hai hum" and how social.. *ahem* anti social we r …..we visit ..Bayville high..a normal institution for abnormal people….abnormal …not as in…x men…abmormal as in ur average pangs of knoe- it- all pain in the *** teenagers……
Bayville high..a pioneer school where normal sane kids become insane animals…in the rat race of competetion…in this stupid race to prove—I am the best….


The day started usually..the old students came back to learn more how to be an animal and the new students to b initiated in the rat race…
Tia ..the ultimate brat stepped out of car….
Saff a rival to tia's snootiness…was just abt to enter the premises of Bayville high…
Mads…still at home wrapped her books with utter care and packed so sugar free fat free cake for tia—her (undeserving) best friend…
Sindhuja—applied the last strokes of blush to her face …..and covered her lovely lips with dark shade of lipstick…
Shriya packed sidharth's picture up in oilcloth…
Yes ….all the "student" were comin back to Bayville high…
The moment they entered the usual bashing…bitching…and show of he newly acquired swear words started
Tia called Saff a mad cow.
Saff told Tia to go soak her head & measure her waist.
Shriya told Mads dat her name suited her perfectly, she was mad.
Mads told Shriya to shut up & let her study.(after all u cant keep quite when the teacher sks u a question)
today was special.
Today was d first day of dis new session.(to enter the lessons of being"a human")
They had now come in d 11th grade. They had "grown up."

They had new classes, new subjects, & newcomers in skool, or shud I say the latest bakhras?

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Veo entered d skool, he was nervous abt dis new skool, wat's it gonna be like? He was still not sure abt dis place.
Hmmm…nice, Tia thot,as she lowered her ray ban sunglasses…. wen she saw him. Gud looking, looks intelligent too, can keep me entertained for a while. But not perfect. Nothing was perfect.and perfection was a bore…bad boys were fun..good boys were blah…
Saff too had seen Veo almost at d same time. Wow. Good looking, looks intelligent too, perfect for me. She had heard many ppl say dat nothing in dis world was perfect. But not for her. It depends on how u take life, & for her d best was perfect since nothing cud be better dan dat.

Hey, Saff, sed someone frm behind her.
Hi, Shriya. Did u c dat guy over dere? Dat new one?
Oh, him. Yeh, I heard someone talk abt him jst a second ago.
He's cute na.
Haan, but no one can match Siddharth
Oh, no, not dat again…

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 2
The end of beginning

"Welcome, students, to d first class of dis year. Mere paas kuch announcements hain jo main aap sabko batana chahoongi. Aapke is saal new subjects jo aapne choose kiye hain who to hain hi, saath mein ek naya subject bhi humne start kiya hai.", sed d principal, ashita…a thourogly well educated qualified …dignified….the onli prsn who cud handle the "students" of Bayville high

"Ek aur naya subject. Yeh log to pakka hume maar kar chodenge.", sed Shriya.
"Oh, shut up & let me listen.", sed Mads.
"Girls, girls, plz. Stop dis. Haan, to I was saying ki yeh naya subject hai 'Acting & Cinema' aur yeh aapko padhayenge Siddharth, jo ki aap jante hi honge RDB mein the."
"WAT!!!???", sed Shriya.
"Ab hum sab mare, yeh apni stupidity shuru kar degi & we're dead.", sed Tia.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thnx for posting it tia
btw, u forgot to mention dat i wrote it too
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey ppl..this is a n if fic...written by shriya and me...mostly by shriya me added finishin touches..credit for this awesome fic goes entirely to shriya..

and ya if u comment regularly we will definetly give u a role and if u r the first one to write the comment then the next part u ll bet there!!!!!!!

hope u guys like it
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 gr8o tia
w8ing for my entry 😳
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😆 im first one to comment 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow shriya..very nice 😃 👏 👏
keep it up..w8in 4 nxt part 😛 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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cool this is nice 😃 but i am not in it 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey i hope im the first 2 comment..well its gr8...unique idea whoevr cam eup wid it...im lookin frwd 2 the next part...n shriya btw i love siddharth too...he is a damn gu dactor...muahhhhh
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey,its awesome 👏 .pls cont sooooooooonnnnnnnn 😃 😃

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