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Posted: 19 years ago
Shirin,

plz continue Soonnnnn

cant wait

Divya
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Posted: 19 years ago

Chapter 9

Uv got very worried …….

Ashi was bleeding terribly

He wanted 2 fight with d kidnapper but he din hav time coz ashi was serious………

He got d kidnapper arrested n den rushed 2 d hospital .

Ashi was sent 2 d I.C.U . ward ……..

Due 2 d loss of blood ashi bcame very weak.she needed blood desperately. By fluke uv had d same blood group as ashi , so he donated some 2 her…….

Yuvi was scared of blood , but he tried not show dat.

Aftr a while ashi was conscious . d first thing she said was YUVI !!!!!!!!!!!!

Yuvi who was sitting beside her was very happy 2 see her conscious .

Y: ashi hw r u feeling now?

A: im fine uv. Hw r u n y r u so dull? Y r wearing dat bandage?

Y: nothing ashi, im fine. U take rest il get u some water …….

Saying dat uv goes away…… n d nurse cumz…..

N: tumhara frend , tumhari bahut khayal rakta hai…itni jaldi wo tume hospital le aaya aur tumhari dekhbal karta tha , usne mujhe kuch bhi nahi karne diya . aur usne tumhare liye blood bhi donate kiya . he is a nice boy…..

A: omg uv ko to blood se dar lakta hai ….!!!!!

N: tume kaise pata?

A: duh-uh I no.

Den uv came vit d water…….d nurse was still der eavesdropping…….

A: uv tumne mere liye itna sab kyu kiya ? u din hav 2 do all dis .!

Y: ashi tumne bhi to mere liye apni life ko risk me daal kar mujhe bachaaya !!!!!!!!!!!!

B4 ashi cud say ne thing d nurse called uv so dat she cud ask him 2 buy sum medicines…….

Aftr dey came out she asked uv………

N: im sry I ws eavesdropping ……but I want 2 ask u smthing….

tum us ladki ke liye itna sab kuch kyu kar rahe ho?

Y: wo meri life hai . I cnt live without her……..

N: n I think even she cnt live without u………..

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Posted: 19 years ago
hii i posted d chapter plz tell me hw is it? shud i end d fan fic in d next prt or continue mre? plz post ur comments......so i can continue 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
its really nice 👏

(wow im the 1st to reply)😉

Yuvi donating blood 4 Ashi 😳 😳 when hez scared of it 😳 😳 awww soosoooooo sweet

contnue soon

dont end this fanfic plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

its a request

Divya
Edited by divya_92 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
amazin shirin.........ab don make me w8 till christmas 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
thnx a lot divya 😃 😳 will continue 😃 glad dat ur d 1st 1 2 reply 😳 thnx a lot vanshika will not w8 till christmas😃😆
Edited by coolpinks - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey shirin,its rocking 👏 pls cont soon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
PLZ DONT END D FIC,ITS FANTABULOUS!!!!!!!! 👏 DONT EVEN THINK OF ENDING IT! 😡 AND PLZ CONT ASAP!


SANOBER 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
well no...ure not allowed to end it!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
thnx a lot 4 all ur replies will not end it 😃 😳

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