deepinsidemyheart(my 1st fic.plz c prt11) - Page 11

shirin.................awesum.........but such a short one....u betta continue soon warnaaaaaa

Yeah...Warnaaaa......I'll kill you!So better hurry up! 😆 😉

k il b aware 😃 😳 thnx 4 replying all 😳 will surely continue ....sry shrt 1 😭 next 1 will hpefully b lng 😃 plz keep posting ur comments 😊

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's awesum...mind blowing 😃 😊 ...but it's small 😭 ... poor ashi... that kiddnapper main usse nahi chodungi 😡 ... neways this part was outstanding... and here is ur gift for riting such a wonderful part...
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aur ab jaldi cont. karna 😊 ...varna 😡 u r 🤢

nice 1 Shirin,

but plz bring Yuvi back 😭 😭

n continue soon

Divz

thnx a lot guyz will surely continue....... no more replies 😭

hey shirin this part wsas short but was realy sweet and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont fast cant wait to no what is gonna happen
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HEY BHAGGU!!!!!!!!

LAGTA HAI UV KI TARAH SHIRIH KO BHI KISSI NE KIDNAP KAR LIYA 😆


PLZ SHIRIN IF U R FINE THEN PLZ CONTINUE SOON

Chapter 8

A: wat???????!!!!!!! Uv kaha hai? Giv d phone 2 him. Agar uv ko kuch bhi hua na ill kill u , u undrstnd .

K( kidnapper) : uv ko to mene sula diya hai . agar tum use bachana chahathi ho to 30 lakhs aaj raat mujhe dena , warna me use hamesha ke liye sula dunga ……..

A: dnt threaten me psycho. Paise mil jayenge . lekin uv par haath mat lagaana !

K: dekhenge……..

A: ill kill u, u psycho.

K: waise to mujhe yashwant dev se paise chaiye the , lekin wo police ko layenge lekin tum mat laana aur akele aana.

A: fine.

Wid d help of hr mom ashi got d money…..

Ashi reached d venue dat nite wit d money….she luked 4 d cabin wer uv ws supposed 2 b…. she finds it n runs in……

Ashi ws so glad 2 see uv dat she drops d bag n runs n hugs uv !!!!!!!

A: r u alrite uv? Is psycho ne tume kuch nahi kiya na? o I m sooooooo gald 2 see u ….hw r u ? I missed u soooooo much …..

Y: ashi tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? Y did u cum here ? tumhari jaan ko khatra hai yaha plz go. Ashi plz …….u dnt no dem……

A: aur tum bhi to danger me ho…….

Y: nahi ashi me sambhal lunga……

Den he turns 2 d kidnapper …..

Y: wats ur problem huh? Tum dad se nahi pooch sakte?

K: chup raho warna….

A: warna kya psycho?

Den she turns 2 uv .

A : I m sry . plz 4 giv me. Its not ur fault. Mujhe tume ek chance dena chaiye tha .

Y: its k ashi. Its my fault actually.

A: no uv its mine.

Y: nahi ashi mine.

A: no uv its mine.

Y: no ashi mine.

Dey kept arguing ……….n d kidnapper got bugged

K: dono chup raho aur mere paise do warna me tume shoot karunga.

A: tumhare paise waha hai le lo k?

K: gar usme aur kuch hoga to. Tummujhe wo do.

A: hey! I m not ur servant.take it urself

K: mujhse aise baat koi nahi karta.

He picks up d gun n aims at hr……..

K: nw go get d bag.

A: here. Happy?! Nw let him go.

K: mujhe count karne do .

Y: count phir karma alrite.

Den he goes away wit ashi…….

K: but d kidnapper shoots…. But he misses it

Y: dnt mess wit me

A: uv hero bane ki koshish mat karo.

Y: ashi dnt talk in between

A: uv plz im not a baby.

Y: ashi!!!

D kidnapper loosing his temper aims d gun at uv n shoots at him…..but ashi cumz in between 2 rescue him n she falls dwn since being shot………..

plz ppl temme hw is it......its very lng but hpe fully gud.....plz post ur comments.....n btw is my fic geeting boring 😭