FAN FIC-AFTER ELECTIONS

PPL DIS IS MY FIRST FAN FIC.PLEASE TELL ME HOW GUD OR BAD IT IS

CHAPTER-1

&nbs p; SCENE-ELECTIONS R OVER.YUVI HAS WON IT BY UNLAWFUL WAYS AGAINST HIS TRUE LOVE-ASHI
YUVI-VRINDA,KYA TUM NE ASHI KO KAHIN DEKA HAI?
VRIN-NAHI YUVI.MAIN BHI USE SUBHE SE DHOOND RAHI HOON.
Y-THANKS ANY WAY VRINDA
HE GOES TO D SHED AND FINDS HER SITTIN ALL BY HERSELF,CRYING
HE GOES AND SITS NEXT 2 HER AN WISPERS-'ASHI'
SHE IS STUNNED TO HEAR HER NAME BEING CALLED.SHE TURNS AROUND JUS 2 FIND-YUVI
ASHI-[WISPERING]SYCO TUM YAHAN KYA KAR RAHE HO?????
HE PUTS HIS HANDS AROUND HER SHOULDERS AND SAYS SOFTLY.............

PPL ILL CONTINUE SEEING UR RESPONSE

its awesome

plz continue NOW

OK.........
AND SAYS SOFTLY-IM SORRY

CHAPTER-2

ASHI-[PUSHING HIS HAND]WAIT-A MINUTE.TUM APNE RIVAL SE SORRY KEH RAHE HO??
Y-HAN ASHI.MAINE YEH ELECTIONS 'CHEATING'SE JEETI HAI.
A-VOH TO MUJE PATA HONA CHAHIE THA.THATS WHAT U R CHEATER
Y-THATS WHY IM HERE.MAIN TUME ES STATE MAIN NAHIN DEKH SAKTA HOON.PLEASE CHEER UP.
A-TUM KAUN HOTE HO MUJE BATANE KE LIA KI MAIN KASI ACCHI AUR KESI BURI LAGTI HOON?
Y-DEKHO ASHI.I CARE ABOUT U.ES LIA MAIN TUM SE YE SAB KAH RAHAN HOON.
A- ACCHA.TUM KABSE APNE RIVAL KO ETNA CARE KARNE LAGE??
Y-MAIN HAMESHA TUMHE CARE KARTATHA,CARE KARTA HOON AUR HMESHA CARE KAROONGA.
A-MUJHE TUM CARE KAROGE?PAR KYON?
Y-[PUSHES HER TOWARDS D WALL AND PUTS HIS ARMS AROUND HER]KYONKI MAIN TUM SE PYAR KARTA HOON.

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its nice pls put ur talent to work

u write very well.plz cont. 😊 😊

cool fan fic. plz continue 😊