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Posted: 19 years ago
oh kewlllllllllll šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

plzzzz cont. asap
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Posted: 19 years ago
even i want 2 contbut still hvn't got 10 replies. may b ppl didn't like it so i won't cont . šŸ˜•
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Posted: 19 years ago
yaar continue na...forget the 10 responses...u have some dedicate fans here na...
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Posted: 19 years ago
jus read ur last part

really nice!

continue soon

Divya
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Posted: 19 years ago
here's the nxt part:

PART 14

Tia and ranveer both look at ashi as if they were hypnotised. just then yuvi enters.
Yuvi:what's up guyz tum logo ki shaklon ko jya hogaya aise ashi ko kyun stare kar rahe ho?
Ashi:kuch nahi yuvi woh maine inse poocha ki woh letter jo tia ko shed me mila tha woh kisne likha tha kyunki thakur ne to nahi likha. bas tabse yeh dono bhooton ki tarah stare kar rahe hain
Ranveer:nahi ashi
Yuvi:kya ranveer. ab yeh mat kehna ki tumhe pata nahi ki woh letter kisne likha tha.tia kya tumhe pata hai
Tia:woh yuvi tia ko nahi pata ki woh letter kisne likha tha.
Ashi: tia tum bilkul nahi badli timbo hi reh gayi ho.accha kya woh letter tumhare paas hai?
Yuvi:kaisi psycho jaisi baatein kar rahi ho tia ke paas woh letter kaise hoga?
Tia:tia ke paas woh letter hai.
(she goes and takes out a small red coloured handbagfrom her sitcase. she opens the bag and take sout the letter from it.)
Ashi:oh my god tumne yeh letter abhi tak sambhal kar rakha hai what a piece of luck.
Tia:woh tia ki aadat hai ki jo bhi special cheezein hoti hai tia unhe sambhal kar rakhti hai. iss bag mein maurya se judi tia ki kaafi memories hai.
Yuvi:maurya se judi ya ranveer se judi?(both ranveer and tia start blushing again)By the way hum yeh letter rakh lete hai aur find out karenge ki yeh kisne likha tha.
Ashi:ok ok ab tum dono ko lushkarne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. hurry up varna flight miss kar doge aur phir humairi sorry ab to ranveer ki tia darling apni mother-in-law se kaise milegi?




Ranver and tia bid goodbye to all their friends and rush to the airport . Fortunately they reach on time and board their flight.

ranveer(after they have settled down and the flight has taken off)Tia aapne maurya se judi apni saari memories us bag mein rakhi hai.(he was meaning to say humse but was feeling a bit shy)
Tia:haan ranveer tia ne tumse judi saari memories uss bag mein rakhi hai.tumhe yaad hai jab tia ko cold hua tha tab tumne tia ko woh teddy dia tha?woh bhi us bag mein hai.
Ranveer:iska matlab yeh hai ki tia aap hume itne saalon mein bhi bhula nahi paayi.
Tia:ranveer tum ekdum camel ho. itne saalon mein kya tum tia ko forget kar paaye ho? nahi na. to phir tia tumhe kaise forget kar pati.tum to tia ke dil mein rehte ho.
Ranveer:hum aapke dil mein rehte hai par aap to humara dil hai.
Tia(smiles):ranveer tumhe pata hai paris ek bahut beautiful place hai.duniya ki sabse romantic jagah hai par phir bhi tia lonely feel karti thi tia ko tumhari bahut yaad aati thi.tia tumhare bina survive nahi kar paayegi mar jaayegi
Ranveer:nahi tia ab kabhi bhi aisi baat mat karna. hum kabhi apko chod kar nahi jaayenge humeasha aapkepaas rahenge.

the time passes by like this only, both make promises to each other of being together forever and revive memories of the time they spent in maurya.

ranveer:tia ab flight land karne wali hai.seat belts band lijiye.
Tia:ranveer tia bahut nervous feel kar rahi hai.
Ranveer:kyun tia?
Tia:ranveer tia itne time bad tumhare mom se milegi isliye.
Ranveer:hum aapke saath hain.
T:(ranveer agar tum tia ke saath ho toh tia ko bilkul dar nahi lagta.tia loves you a lot ranveer)

the flight lands safely and ranveer takes tia to "their" home as he calls it now, in his mercedes which was waiting for them at the airoprt.

Ranveer:lijiye tia humara ghar aa gaya (rings the bell).
tia:wow ranveer bahut pretty hai.


the gate is opened by a maid . ranveer takes tia into his house but his mother stops them at the gate only. frankly speaking tia and ranveer both are a bit shocked as they had expected a welcome.

Ranveer:ma kya hua?
mother: ranveer vahin ruk jao ek kadam bhi andar mat rakhna


Edited by ranv_rules - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
couldn't post the nxt part as this became very long . will be posting the next part as soon as i get some comments.do tell me if u like it or not.
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Posted: 19 years ago
it was nice šŸ˜‰
continue soon
i guess ranny's mom will do something like "GRIHPRAVESH" 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Neetaldesai

it was nice šŸ˜‰
continue soon
i guess ranny's mom will do something like "GRIHPRAVESH" 😳

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nd thnxx😳
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Neetaldesai

it was nice šŸ˜‰
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i guess ranny's mom will do something like "GRIHPRAVESH" 😳

yeah obviouslyšŸ˜†

very nice cont fast😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
nice pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue fast soon asap.

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