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Posted: 19 years ago
hey pal its gr8!! but try writin bigger parts so tht we njoy it more... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
yippppeeeeeee lubli part s'usual 😳
now u bettr cont soon or else ill cry 😭 u dont want to see me cryin do u 😳
n thts sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweet of u to dedic8 this to me as a bday gift thts sooooooooooooo awesome 😳😳😳 <:-P<:-P<:-P
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Posted: 19 years ago
tia......awesomeeeeeeee..... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
ok finally my eggjams r over... whew.....so finally i am writtin my fic....and i am gonna be regular........
so every alternate day expect a new part.....
and finally i chalked out the story....
and well its a bit too mature not the usual ashi uv remix fan fic.....
25165 thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
lavanya fluttered her eyes.....and opened them....she was in the same room onli lyin down on the sofa....she slowly got up...and saw ashi standin near the window....she walke over to her..and gently tapped on her shoulder...ashi turned quickly
wat r u doin gettin up like this...??
lavanya dint reply..she quitely said..y dint u leave??
ashi took a deep breath and looked at her once best frnd.....wat did u expect me to do...leave u and run away...?????
u did once...lavanya whispered....
i am sorry....lavanya continued....i shudnt have shouted at u like that....i dont know wats wrong with me........i am like so crnky all the time.......i am not even feelin well....i threw up thrice today....

ashi looked at her concerned....u shud go to a doc...and not to a party

lavanya smiled...parties cure me better than medicines...

some things never change...

ya they dont .....lavanya replied...so wat r u here for?

umm...my frnd got invited so i came along.......

hmmm......so wat r u doin these days ashi??

well i am a journalist...actually i just joined cnbc...

wow...

wat abt u ?

runnin my dad's business...rathore group of industries.... we erect buildings...we have a few departmental stores thats it!

thats it....?????? honey everyone knows....rathore group of industries is huge.....and ur departmental stores that is 12/7 is like the longest chain of stores...u r called the iron butterfly......

lavanya smiled...thanx...

ashi smiled back

hey i gotta go....ppl r waitin for me...besides i think i ll go home now.....

wat abt ur husband...ashi blurted out b4 she cud stop herself

lavanya turned around...a love sick expression on er face....well he is around somewhere......neways i ll go...oh i even have to say yuvi that i am leavin....i gotta find him...btw did u see him?????

ya but he did nt recognise me......

nor did i....u have changed....long hair gown and everything... u look gr8

u 2........u look just like the diva u were...

thanx....lavanya said...and slowly walked away...

just b4 leavin she turned around and said...ashi....welcome back




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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome god this mystery is killing me what happende between the 2 why did ashi leave lavanya
god u r gr8 pls continue 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
rocking part tia 👏 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon.
waiting eagerly 2 know wat happens next.

titli
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow..kewl..part 😳

loved..it 😳

good..to..see..ashi...back..in..d..reckoning 😃

now..tia..cont...soon...let's..see..if..ur..story..goes..d.. mature..way.. 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
rocking part yaar......really nice ..... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
ohh amazing!!!!..sheesh...as sume1 said...the suspense is killing...wht happend in d past fate?... im soo glad u tht ur gonna write more often...thkz... n rock on dear... 👏 👏 👏

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