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just fab as usual tia!! n srkm nobody has asked u 4 ur opnions regardin da vinci code

hi fate
i am speechless 😊
this first time i read your fic
i am going crazyyy
you have the art to express your thoughts
your writing represents your great knowledge of english
as well as your ability to imagine
i have a suggestion
you should write a book
it will become more famous
add me in your friends and in your crazyyyyy fans 😊

thanx ppl 4 the complimentz........
i mean da vinci code and stuff 😳 😳 😳

thanx everyone.........
anyways here is the next part


Hey daddy….finished ruinin few other ppls life…forcing some more company into bankruptcy…..renderin some more ppl jobless?????????lavanya sweetly said with a soft smile

Yes daughter…welcome home…..samay rathore looked down at his daughter…he knew that lavanya wanted him to get angry……. shout at her..so dat she cud prove it to the world how bad a fateher he was….but then lavanya was his daughter..so he knew her moves..very well……

He held out a car key to her… I got that car for u..he said pointing at a red bmw……

Lavanya…walked to it..but instead of opening the car door she walked up to the front and opened the engine..and looked at it…not bad..she uttered..i like it….powerful …..and sleek….not bad dad ur tastes r improving…..
She smiled a lil and thot..hmm just wat I needed….to wreck this city and to get the hell out of here



Lavanya looked down from her window……and it was as if she was tumbling down memory lane………a lil girl runnin around…and her black curlz dancing behind her……she laughed a loud as a boy elder to her picked her up and swung her around…..the lil girl squeled….SHARAD……PUT ME DOWN…..GO AWAY
Just at that moment those words escaped her mouth…SHARAD…..
The name echoed around her…..she shivered….ran to the desk and lit a cigarette and while smoking it she slowly slid down the wall……

After an hour she strolled down the corridors…… she stopped at a desk and picked up the card that lay there..it was an invitation card for some kind of a party.. ..
Party????lavanya spoke to herself….now finally something intrestin…..party…..one thing I cant stayin away from

U r not goin to that party….its not good a party……
Lavanya turned around to look at her father …. She smiled…….then daddykins I am definetly goin………try and stop me

As lavanya was out of sight…..samay smiled and thot…..sweets that's exactly wat I wanted..u to go to this party..i knew u wud do just the opposite as to wat I said..hmm darling u forget I am ur daughter and I knoe u better than u knoe urself…..




I am not goin …..uv shouted….mein koi bhi stupidsi party mein nahi jaana wala hoon……..dad me aap ka koi strategy nahin banna chahta hoon…aapke votes collect karne ke liye….mein is part mein nahi jane wala hoon

Tumhe jaana hoga…yein mera decision hai….bas yuvraj…tumhe aab yeh sab sikhna parega after all tum yashwant dev ka beta ho….is bare me aab koi behes nahi hoga…..abhi taiyaar hoke gari mein aao

Lavanya scanned herself…head to toe and den leant forward and gave her reflection a kiss…..gorgeous she whispered…..hmm nice…hints at wat may lie underneath but doesnot reveal it……..its sexy but not vulgar….its not body huggin but it shows of the curves….she commented about the gown….and den descended down the stairs and then out into the lawn to get to her car……

Hey fate.......awesome part! I like d way ur developing the story n the characters cuz that is the most important part of any story.

I like the way lavanya thinks 😈 and i'm gonna enjoy her evilness!

wow its awesome fate can't wait for uv-love meeting 😉 😉 and really like the name samay rathore
sounds so dramatic yet original 😊 😊

love nd yuvi 😒 bt gr8 part..... 👏 👏 👏

fate this is not done alrite ur making me fall in luv with a girl 😛
love is jsssst soooooooo adorable re how can one person b so awesome? 😭😛
altho love n uv...noooo...😭....lets jst wait n c i guess 😉 😆
u contninue soon warna........ill ask love to take revenge on u on my behalf 😆
😛 its simply too good yaar continue soon 🤗

well, wat can i say, it's gr8 as usual, tia, it's really too cool

jus simply fantastic fate! i luv d way d story is bringin out it's hidden elements. yet it's not too draggin. it's jus awesome! i luv it n update sooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnn

hey fate....i read frm where i had stopped jus now....believ me i have no words as usual to praise u an u r writin skills an this super-duper fic 😃
like i said in of my replies tht i wud be replyin an postin my comments as soon as my xams get over but grl i jus cudnt stop myself....an also i do have a week long off....this reply will not be very long cos i wanna keep lots of stuff to write after my xams 😛

fate.....i always liked love write frm the start....though i dunno later on....but her confidence, her attitude is jus so amazin!! 😛 u know the thing in the flite....her conversation with the air-hostess is really cool, got to c yet another shade of the very misterious "love"........she's a got an aristocratic touch to her....which is again very mesmerisin 😳

abt the previous part.....a superb 1 as usual.....but fate...i don like sharad 😡 i mean i know nothins yet written abt him.....u havent even come to tht but jus tht 1 line makes me feel very bad an knda feel tht he's connected with luv's past in not a very gud way....

ok ok i'll stop....i jus cudnt help but speak out...
an now finally the two r gonna meet....every1's sounds very xcited 😛 afterall love will get to c an "INDIAN MAN" who i guess is gonna change her complete attitude abt ppl here an the country....after all its "YUVRAJ DEV".

LUVED IT LUVED IT......luv every bit of u r fic... 😛

luks like even this reply is tooo long....sorry😕