GAME.chained dialogs n scenes - Page 38

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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey Kriti,

im not angry wid u riting tht part..

plz dont b upset allrite

n if u leave dis game, then even im outta here..
GET tht

Divya
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Posted: 19 years ago
Ok guys this is rewind….

Tia- doctor……kya hoa hain aashi ko…
Doc- ms.ahuja… ms.ray is having an internal wounds…unko ko andruni chot lagi hain… aur usko amnesia ho gaya hain…she just remembers two things…two people…koi yuvi aur soniya... woh mr yuvraj dev se milna chahti hain…


And this is the continuation

Ashi- hi uv
Uv- hi ashi! How r u feeling now?
Ashi- much better… but a bit low… so I was just trying to sleep…
Vrinda- ashi main abhi aati hoon…and she nods her head to say yes…and vrinda leaves
Uv- thik hain tum so jao mein baad mein aata hoon…
Ashi just grabs his hands and tells – uv… plz don't leave me alone… plz muje nind nahi aati…muje sulaao naa…
Uv- thik hain… main yahin tumhare bed ke pass bahat ta hoon…and u go to sleep
Saying this he goes and sits near ashi


you guys can have from nething u want...i have written both and u can continue from ne of it...
a.r.t.y thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
awsome u guys rok!!!!!!!
ty sooo much!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey niyati n kriti
dont b angry ok
i was not fuming on u ,its just that da story was going
ekta's serial type 😆
so kriti n niyati ,no need to go anywhere........
ok if not dis then............
i m sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry..............
now is it ok 😃



ok now niyati,as u hav given two choices 2 continue da story,then i think i ll continue frm da 1st one
so here it goes.........


tia-yuvraj dev..........oh ........doctor tia abhi usse bulati hai...
tia goes to yuvi ,yuvi on seeing tia suddenly gets up
n says
yuvi-tia.......doctor ne kya kaha.........tell me
is ashi fine or not............ 😭
tia-yuvi relax...........ashi is fine but.......
yuvi-bt .............bt ...........kya........
tia-ashi ko amnesia ho gaya hai........aur usse bas tum aur sonia aunty yaad ho...........
yuvi-watt?????????amnesia.........?????????
tia-relax yuvi.........doctor ne kaha hai ki woh tumse milna chahti hai .so tia thinks ki tumhe ab usse milna jana chahiye
yuvi-ok.........thanx tia......
yuvi goes 2 meet ashi,ashi gets up on seeing yuvi
yuvi-hi ashi..........i m sorry..........maine tumhe akele jaana diya..........{he starts crying}
ashi-.........


k guys dis was my part.........
now u guys can continue frm here.........
Edited by komal_ashiyuvi - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey komal...it's ok.u don't have to b sorry....i know it was kind of ekta's soaps....so i understood u guys and changed the topic.....now let's forget this and continue our story rite?

Ashi- yuvi tum ro kyun rahe ho….aur u don't need to be sorry….i was my fault…uv p;z don't cry…varna main bhi ro padu gin…
UV- nahi ashi…I m sorry…aur main nahi rounga… aur tum bhi mat rona…
Ashi wipes uv's tears and hugs him…
Then tia comes in
Tia- ashi…
Ashi- UV… yeh koun hain?
Tia- ashi…..mein tia…tinbo…..tum mujhe kaise bhool sakti hoon
Ashi……..
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Posted: 19 years ago
ok niyati i take my sorry back 😆
neways nice continuation ,here's mine


ashi-tia............timbo.............timbo...........
ahhhhhhhh..........timbo ahuja.........rite
tia-u still remember tia 😊
ashi-tia.....who tia.........u r timbo rite........
tia was getting angry bt yuvi luked at her telling her to b normal wid it
tia-ya........u got it rite.........i m timbo......... 😆
ashi-ok timbo .........can u plz leave me n yuvi alone 4 sumtime...........
tia-sure...........tia.......i mean timbo thodi der mein aati hai{she goes out leaving yuvi n ashi alone}


k guys now continue sum1,any1
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Posted: 19 years ago
ashi-hey uv yeh tia kaun hai
yuvi-tia is timbo n timbo is tia
ashi-i dont know nething alright
i don wanna take ne kind of stress on my mind
yuvi-ok then fine so wat do u want????
i mean do u wanna eat sumthing????
ashi-....................

guys where r u ???????
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz nitz , divs,kriti,rina n every1 out there
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue karo na plzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
n congo for the 50th page of tjis game 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
good going guys u all write better than me, maine tp poori fic hi kharab kardi this sorrrrrrrrrrrrry soooooooooorrrrrrry sorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry 😭
i will always be there to support u tell u as an audience but never get involved it 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
Ashi- ammmm….pizza…burger…and will have coke…
And then doc. Comes in
Doc- oh my god…aap yeh sab 1 month ke liye nahi kha sakti…aap sirf healty food kahengi…like soups and broccolis…salads…fruits…Mr.Dev aap khyal rakiyega…inko yehi sab khana hain…varna inki health aur bigad sakti hain…
Uv- yer doctor…turn towards ashi… ashi did u heard…no pizz and burger…for 1 month…got that
Ashi- par yuvi…tumhe lagta hain ki sirf yeh sab khane se main thik ho jaugi…aur yeh sab to kitna kadva(bitter) hota hain…and broccolis…no way…I don't like that…
Uv- hain par tumhe khana hain…and that is my order…coz sweetheart I don't want u to get more sick…
Ashi- hey bhaggu!.............

c'mon kirti now it's ur turn...

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