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lalit1

@lalit1

Dazzler

Posted: 19 years ago

#301

real nice ariel lana padega itne colours mein nahla diya hain

kaun mera lux sabun sponsor kar raha hain

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foresight

@foresight

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+ 3

Posted: 19 years ago

#302

lalit....u r supposed to have so many fan...stealing u pens n all....u should get them to sponsor the lux and surf for u 😉 😛 😆

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Aparna

@apple14

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+ 2

Posted: 19 years ago

#303

Funniest & weirdest ever!!!

Poor 'L'.....dont make her walk.....bechari..... 😆

And Hellraiser....whats with the 'colorful' description? 😉
You've drenched everyone is some color or the other!

I donno wht your doin to Lalit...but he is turning out to be one of those scientists...bordering on insanity.

And Priya di.....bechari Priya di.
You know...one thing I like about my character is that despite being a high flying socialite....she still cares for Priya di who is not a hi flying socilaite!
Nice.....

I like myself 😆 😆 😆

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Ritwika

@ritz_ashiyuvi

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#304

this is the funniest fic i have read till date

i am presently rolling on the floor...dying of laughter

the swayamvar scene was too good

hey sindhu..plzzzzz do continue it soon

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hellraiser

@hellraiser

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#305

Episode 17

CHANGE OF HEART

lalit looked at his owls n silkworms..they reminded him of appy..
she had exactly same large eyes...n silky hair...
he loved appy..
a large tear squeezed thru his eye..settling on hisnose..he watched it wishin he cud remain so till the end of eternity
the door slammed open..
esha came in frantically shoutin sumthin abt rain drops on noses..
they stopped n looked at each other thru the hazy tear..
she smiled..the tear fell down lost in the dust n scorpions on the floor of lalits office..
he too smiled...

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veo sighed ..lookin out of the window...at the french river..no rivier..no rivera...wateva..he nvr cud spell the damn thing(hellraiser CAN spell it)
radz was 2 much of an angel..i mean fine 2 b sweet 2 everyone..
but now she was teachin dogs 2 ask fer food politely...
n pigeons not to flutter their wings in a hospital zone.
she had started a group called radz's angels..who went around garlading all the angel statues in paris wid marigold flowers.....
he wanted sumone devilish...sumone fun..sumone ....like esha

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appy practised her french " bon jour...je tu adore..."..
actually dat was not what she wanted 2 say 2 her but nethin wud do...all she had 2 do was confuse priya dii..who din know eng prop..let alone french..
she smirked evilly at the thought of the face tht female wud make at her high class party this aft..
ohh she cudnt wait...
aft dawned..
"bon jour priya dii...je tu adore"appy smiled superiorl
priya dii giggled.."thanx appy..i adore u 2."
"but u not knows...but i knowed only french..."appy had forgotten her english in her shock..
priya dii tied her arial sari around her waist n walked off with all pots of water on her head..
finally she had got the better of tht rich scheming socialite...

Edited by hellraiser - 19 years ago

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Aparna

@apple14

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Posted: 19 years ago

#306

😆

Oh god......Sindhu...I hope this is not censored by the dev team!!! 😆 😆 😆

poor me......my scheme has totally backfired..... 😆
Priya di got the better of me!!!!

And whats this???? I look like Owls???? 😆 😆
well....going by what all lalit has done till now....I'd say I'm not surprised that he thinks like this!!! 😆

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Aparna

@apple14

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+ 2

Posted: 19 years ago

#307

Originally posted by: hellraiser
Episode 17

CHANGE OF HEART

the door slammed open..
esha came in frantically shoutin sumthin abt rain drops on noses..
they stopped n looked at each other thru the hazy tear..
she smiled..the tear fell down lost in the dust n scorpions on the floor of lalits office..
he too smiled...

for some strange reason😉😉😉.... like this part the best!!!!😉😆

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esha

@Coolest Esha

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#308

i m in demand....party timeeeee 😆 😆
well i can just say gr88888888 part by my angle 👏 & i m more happy u cont after soooooooooooo long......luv u 😳
plzzzzzzzzzzzz dont take soooo long to cont
& yeah plz give tell us in short ab tak kya hua if u know 😆
plzzzzzz cont fast
esha

Edited by Coolest Esha - 19 years ago

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shelly

@uvcraziestfan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 19 years ago

#309

hey bhaggu dis fic is alive agn
sid wya to go!!!!!!

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Soumya Sen

@Mrs.Brett Lee

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 19 years ago

#310

I am not commenting these days hell because u forgot me tht I was in the fan fiction 😭 😭 😭 . Hell next time don't forget me otherwise I will never comment again 😭 😡 .

PS- Awesum and really very funny fan fiction. Hell u really have a nice sense of humour. 😆 😆 Keep writing 😛

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