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Parachute.

@Parachute.

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Posted: 19 years ago

#11

hey thnx 4 including me!!!u write reli well!

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hellraiser

@hellraiser

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Posted: 19 years ago

#12

appy..relly gud.........
hmmmmm...veo n tia........veryyyyyyyy interestin.... 😆
n esha hurricane thingy is totally true..

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Aparna

@apple14

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Posted: 19 years ago

#13

Ok...next dose.....

i'm writing small bits, trying to remember everyone....

Mads chali ek safar pe,
Facfiction continue kiya…hellraiser ne!
Lalit aur priya bangaye visiting guest
And Sayeri de rahi hai…china mein test.

Edited by apple14 - 19 years ago

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Soumya Sen

@Mrs.Brett Lee

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Posted: 19 years ago

#14

😆 Appy keep it up. 😉 Awesum poem. Will u give me tuitions for free for teaching me how to write a poem. 😉 😃

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Aparna

@apple14

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Posted: 19 years ago

#15

No tuitons required Soumya.....when you start rhyming one members name, then automatically you can build up small stories.....

Obviously...you have to leave behind your brains in the bed!!!! 😆

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amrita

@get_amrita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#16

kool stuff!
real good poem!
😆
hope u use r names too in u're upcumin verses.
😉

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shelly

@uvcraziestfan

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Posted: 19 years ago

#17

its really gud specially lalit n priya ban gaye visting guests😆
ps--wen will i come in it??

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esha

@Coolest Esha

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Posted: 19 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: apple14
Ok...next dose.....

i'm writing small bits, trying to remember everyone....

Mads chali ek safar pe,
Facfiction continue kiya…hellraiser ne!
Lalit aur priya bangaye visiting guest
And Sayeri de rahi hai…china mein test.

gr888888 mom........i fell down my chair reading this😆 didnt any one feel earthquake in mumbai?😆
esha

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Aparna

@apple14

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Posted: 19 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: remixdbest
its really gud specially lalit n priya ban gaye visting guests😆
ps--wen will i come in it??

thank you Shelly. And dont worry....once I've figured out what rhymes with your name and a proper situation to go with it...I'll opst your poem too!!!

Will post the next part now!!! Hope everyone likes it...or rather...hope everyone understands it!😉