My Poem for you!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok all..... I'm not a good poet but when things just start rhyming for no rhyme or reason😆..... I thought....why not make a poem about all my friends on remix IF!

now dont be cross with me if I havent included your name....its just that i wasnt able to think up something good at the moment.

By the way.... I should thank Dia as she was my inspiration.....I'm serious. Everythime I think of her...I keep rhyming her name to something else. And then things just started rhyming so quick.

First instalment:

Jab post karti hai Dia…

Toh competition deti hai Niya

Veo ne kaha… 'oh…meri Tia'

Confusion mein Fate ne kaha…'KYA ???'

Priyanka ko mila ek inaam…

Usse lene ke liye

Uthe dus girls…

Maalum pada ki sab ka ek hi naam.

next verse later......

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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice who sed ur not a good poet? 😊 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 😆 😆 Aparna...u write so well!!! 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice one appy 😆 and u r gud in everything u do or post 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok part...jsut finished the next part.

Jab Esha aati hai
Toh saath mein hurricane laati hai.
Apple & kajal karti arjun pe drool
Toh Radz ne kaha..thats 2cool
Lekin jawaab di..radz_2cool.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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do postr soon dis was awesome stuff i lubed it
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Seriously, it's too good! 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 😆 Appy u should be a peot. 😉 Omg it was awesum. More poems plzz tht also about me plzz. 😉 😳 Gr8 job. 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Veo ne kaha… 'oh…meri Tia'

Confusion mein Fate ne kaha…'KYA ???'


this was gr888888 👏 sometimes even i m in confusion whether it is fate or tia 😕

Jab Esha aati hai
Toh saath mein hurricane laati hai.

m i a strom?????? 😆 may b i can b sometimes 😉

tooooo goooooodddddd mommmmm.....keep posting
esha
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Posted: 19 years ago
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too gud aparna.....just think of somethin rhyming for me too.....soon...
warna 😆

but u r a gr8 poet....and keep writin and the best parts were
veo n tia.......
and esha n hurricane.... 😆 😆

priyaa

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