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Posted: 19 years ago
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just posted the 3rd part above!!
sorry i was a bit late to post it though!!
tel me how it is?
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Posted: 19 years ago
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The third part is really good! Wid Timbo...I mean TIA AHUJA suggestin sumthin good! 😲 OMG!!lolz... 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
thanks for this response guys!! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i'll try 2 contd. it faster!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15
its just awesum!! 👏 👏 👏
continue faster!! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
PART - 4

Aashi nters with her shoes they hide aashi's shoes under pri's bed! Pri wakes up and the three quickly narrate the whole story to her!
Ashi then tries 2 wear her sandals but she trips and falls down as she can't manage the high heel shoes of tia!!

A- timbo in steps ko le k kaise chalti ho??ouch....... main ye nahi pehen sakti!

P- ok tum meri slipons le sakti ho!

A- haan moti roli tumhare free size shoes to thakur bhi pehen sakta hai!
ok ok ab chalo!!

P- wait a min ranveer tum jumbo ko kya kahoge ki tum girls coridoor mein kya kar rahe the?

R- hey bhagvan 1 aur musibat!!

A- ranveer tum room mein chup jao phir jab sab chale jayenge tab tum apne room vapas chale jaana!

R- ok!

the three girls then go downstairs where al students incl. jumbo r!!!
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Meanwhile in tia's room ranveer is standing beside window thinking abt the moments he spent together with tia!
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After sometime when jumbo finds that it was impossible 2 find whom the footprints were he sents back al the students 2 their particular rooms!!

tia meher(who was already there) and pri r abt 2 go in their room, aashi pulls meher n pri back n hints them 2 let tia go alone 2 her room as ranveer was there so that they can sort out the matter!

Tia who is comp.lost in ranveer's thoughts goes straight her way 2 the room without realising the absence of meher n pri!!
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tia enters in her room! ranveer who was lost in his thoughts turns n looks at tia!!!

avani

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow avani!! 👏
i was just waitin 4 this moment 2 come!! 😳 😳 😳
puhleez continue faster or else i would die!! 😆 😆 😆
n i m sure u dont want me 2 die!! 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey Avani pleazzzzzzzzzzzz cntinue faster i just don;t know when will they confess but in your fanfic let them confess and be together.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART -5 (the last part)

tia enters the room where ranveer is standing with the teddy in his hand!

R- tia kya aapko yaad hai ye teddy humne aapko diya tha!

T- haan ranveer tia ko yaad hai!

R- tia humse ye nahi hoga! hum abhi jaanna chahte hai ki aap humse mile bina kyun chali aai! aur hume ye bhi bataiye ki kya sach much aap pri aur meher k kehne par sanghaner aai thi?

T- ranveer tia ne kahan na tia tumhe baad me....

R- ...nahi tia hume apne sawal ka jawab abhi chahiye nahi to hum sanghaner wapas chale jayenge!

T- nahi ranveer aise dobara mat karna! puhleese..
thik hai tia tumhe sab kuch batati hai tia bhi tumse kuch clarify karna chahti hai!
ranveer tia mein tumse baat karne ki himmat nahi thi!agar tia tumse baat
karti to wahan se nahi ja pati!
aur tia sanghaner pri aur meher ki wajah se nahi aai thi!
these words of tia brings a smile on ranveer's face! 😊

R- to phir?

T- tia....tia tumhari wajah se wahan aai thi ranveer!
tia ne 1 baar tumhe aisi situation mein dekha hai! tia nahi chahti thi ki tum dobaraa itna pareshan ho!
ranveer remembers the time when tia helped him to come
out of that tough situation when ranveer got 2 know the reality abt his father!!


R- kya baat hai tia aap humse kuch kehna chahti hain??

T- haan ranveer.....wo....wo....tia tumse kehna chahti thi ki tia tumse...!
R- tumse kya tia?

T- wo wo..suddenly ashi burst in n yells I LUV U)!!
patienceless aashi who was standing with pri n meher bursts in!!

T- AASHI!!! 😲
A- HEY BHAGGU!!!ab timbo kitne der tak nahi bologi!! aur thakur tum?? kya arjun devil ne tumhe kuch nahi bolne k liye paise diye hain kya???
tum dono to saari life aise hi dodos type silent rahoge!! 😆 😉

R- nahi aashi hum tia se bahut pyaar karte hain par hem ye tia se sunna chahte the!

T- u camel... ye tum tia ko pehle nahi bata sakte the???
tia hugs 🤗ranveer while saying this!! 😳

R- ranveer SHOCKED smiles n says I LUV U TIA!!!!

T- tia luves u 2 ranveer!!!

aashi meher n pri in chorus say: ATLAST!!! 😆 😆 and leave the sweet n cute couple al alone!!!!!!!

......................... 😊 THE END😊........................

Edited by avani_fan - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey posted the 5th n the last part abv puhleese tell how it is!!!!!!! hope u al like it!!!!

avani 😊

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