Ok Rach i completed last question and update it: if u could modify the breakup scene in such a way that tia won't lie abt the bet thing and instead dey don't breakup at all....how would u do that?..i mean after tia comes to know abt ranveer from vrinda..wat she should have done acc to u?...write d scene accordingly
This scene comes after ranveer watches tia dancing with nakul .And he asks her yeh kya ho raha hai,and he drags tia from there and pins her against the wall .Ranveer is angry watching tia dancing with nakul and also ignoring him before when he tried to speak to her.
Ranveer asks Tia'''''.Kya hogaya hai aapko ? '''''''''''. Kya hogaya? Hum yaha sab ke samne yeh kahne aaye te ke tia" I Love you". Tia is shocked and she is trying to control her feeling s after listening this from ranveer .She is still thinking what to believe? what ranveer is saying or what vrinda said .Ranveer touches her face and asks her Tia yeh games bund kigeyeh . Tia gets angry after listening this and she looks at ranveer and tia replies games ,games tia khel rahi hai tumhare saath ,yah tum khel rahe ho tia ke saath ranveer? Ranveer is shocked after listening this .His expression are like what ?Ranveer ask tia kaunsi game yeh aap kya baat kar rahi hai hume kuch samaj nahin ahraha hai ?............................ oh wow really ab tumhe tia ki baatein bhi samaj ah nahin rahe hai .Ranveers say tia aap ko jo kehna hai saaf saaf kahiye kyunki hume aap ki baat samaj nahin aa rahe hain?.Samaj nahin aa raha to phir tia tumhe explain karti hai, party mein aane se pehle tum kaha gaye te ranveer? Ranveer is little shock and he say humne aap ko kaha tha hume kisi kaam se jana tha .Tia says Haan ranveer tumne kaha tha tumhe kisi kaam se jana tha per tumhne yeh nahin bataya ki woh kaam tumhe ira se tha? After hearing this ranveer ko thoda gussa aajata hai, he holds tia's arm and push her against wall and asks tia aap ko yeh kisne baataya aur aap hum per spy kar rahi hai ? Tia says tia ko chodo aur tia tumhari thara nahi hai jo spy karti hai ,kisne ne tumhe ira ke saath dekha tha aur ushne tia ko bataya after hearing this ranveer leaves tia. Ranveer say kisine ne aap ko bataya aur aapne believe kar liya tia? Tia says tia ko pehle believe nahin hua ranveer ki yeh sach hai but jishne tia ko yeh baataya woh tia ke bahut achi friend hai woh tia ko lie nahin karegi '''' ranveers say oh to hum aap se lie kar rahe hai? Aap ko hamari baato per vishwas nahin hai tia? Tia says tia tumhari baato per believe karna chati hai ranveer per kya tum explain kar sakte ho assa bhi kya urgent kaam tha ki tumhe raat ko ira se milna tha ? Ranveer say woh ira bahut dino se school nahi aaye thi to humne socha ki kahi woh humare waje se to school avoid nahi kar rahe thi '''''..tia says accha aur ishiliye tum ushke ghar raat ko milne gaye the ''''..yeh tum phone per bhi puch sakte the aur tumne to kaha tha ki tumne uske saath break up kar liya hai '''''''.ranveer replies haan tia humne kaha ta per aap hume janti hai hum dosro ki bhare mein kitna care karte hain ishliye sirf hum unsey puchne gaye the ki woh kaise hai aur yeh batane ki hum aap ko date kar rahe hai '''''''''. Tia say really '' '''..isliye tum dono hug kar rahe the ''''.. ranveer gets frustuated and says tia jab hum waha gaye to ira ne hume hug kiya tha hume nahi kiya tha . Tia says tia yeh kaise man le ki tum sach bol rahe ho ? Ranveer says Tia hum assa kya kare jishe aap hume believe kar sake ki hum sach bol rahe hai? .Tia is avoiding to listen ranveer and she is not looking towards him she is so hurt she doesn't know kya sach and kya jooth hai ? Ranveer touches her face and ask her tia please hum aap se bahut pyar karte hain aur yeh aap achi thara janti hai or hum yeh bhi jante hai ki aap bhi humse pyar karte hai , phir bhi aap hum pe believe nahi karti ? Thik hai tia hum aap ko believe karvate hai ki hum aap se pyar karte hain aur kisi se nahin aur hum koi game nahi khel rahe hai aap ke saath . Tia looks at ranveer after hearing this .Ranveer takes tia's hand and he takes her towards the stage where everyone was waiting that tia will be singing so everyone claps but ranveer says sorry guys but hum aap log se kuch kehna chate hai . Tia thinks what is ranveer going to announce? Ranveer says hum aap sab ko yeh batana chate hai ki hum tia ahuja ko date kar rahe hai aur hum unhe bahut like karte hai '''''''..Hum tia ko tubse like karte hai jab hum ne unhe pehle bhar dekha tha ''''''''tia is remembering the day she saw ranveer first time and even she liked him''''..and then she comes out of her thought '''.aur jab bhi hum tia aap koi problem yeh trouble mein dekte hain to hum aapne aap ko rokh nahin pate hai aap ko help karne se ''''''''''' aur jab aap kisi aur ko date karti hain to hume bilkul pasand nahin aata ''''''jab hum aap ko dekte hain to bus aap ke bhare mein hi sochte rahte hai ''''.hume raaton ko so nahin paate hai aap ke waja se '''..aur aaj hum in sab ke samne aap se yeh kahne chate hai Ki Tia "I love you " hum aap se bahut pyar karte hain aur karte rahege phir aap humse pyar kare yeh na kare ?After telling this ranveer leaves the stage and goes from there''listening all this tia eyes are field with tears and she thinks oh tia's god what did I do ? yeh meine kya kiya ranveer per shak he likes me so much and mein itne stupid kaise ho sakte hu .Tia gets down from stage she follows ranveers .Ranveer goes to his room and tia follows him She enters his room and goes near ranveer and says ranveer "tia is sorry ranveer" puhleezeeee tum tia ko maaf kar do tum to jaante ho na tia Kabhi kabhi kitne childish,stupid and immature behave karti hai aur tia swears ki tia, tia tum pe kabhi shak nahi karege and tumhari har baat per believe karegi ''''''. Ranveer is not paying attention to her and not looking at her''''.Ranveer puhleezeeee tia ko forgive kardo '''''''ranveer says tia aap humesha aase karti hain ,hum se jhada aap logo per believe karti hai'''. Tia says ranveer this is the last time assa hua hai is ke baad assa nahi hoga tia swears ''''''''..tia with her innocent face in front of him and her eyes filled with tears '''.ranveer sees her and kind of feel sad and say aacha tia aap rona bund kigeye aap ko pata hai hum aap ke ankhon mein anson nahin dekh sakte hain so please stop crying '''''.to tumhne tia ko maaf kar diya ''''''''. Ranveer wipes off her tears and smiles and says haan'' per next time humne aap ko us nakul ke saath asse dance karte hua dekha to pata nahin hum kya karege'.tia says ok baba tia was angry with u ishliye assa kiya tia ne tia assa wapis nahi karege after saying this ''''tia hugs ranveer .They both are hugging for like almost 5 minutes and there is knock on the door and aman comes there ,he say to agar tum dono ka patch up hogaya hoto party mein wapas chaloge aur waise bhi meher na kaha ki tia koi song gaane wali hai ''''.. tia and ranveer smiles at eachother and they go with aman .
When they enter the room were party is taken place. Meher sees tia entering and she calls her tia ,tia come on lets sings .Tia goes to stage and says she is singing this song specially for ranveer since she has written this song while keeping him in her mind. She starts singing
"la la la la hmmmm la la la la..hmmmm.la la la la la..hmmm oyeyeeeee .ohhhhh
Kahani mein jo suna
Kitabon mein jo padha
Khayalon mein jo mila
Kya tum wahi ho.....
Hui na pehle kabhi
Ajab si hain yeh khushi
Labhon pe kyun hain hasi
Kya tum wohi ho........
Yeh jo.....mera.. sapna hain tho
Mujh ko.. yuhin... so lene do.....
Dil ne kahan..
Kahani mein jo suna.
Kitabon mein jo padha..
Kya tum wohi ho........"
Aman looks at ranveer and ranveer is looking at tia singing and smiling while listening the song .
Edited by Annu13 - 15 years ago