AY One Liner/Drabble

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey I got this idea....

this is for all those ppl who always dreamed of writing a fanfic....but never wrote any for sheer laziness 🤣 (like me) 🤣

Well....since we live in a world of instant and constant gratification...why not post one liners about AY.....you know it could be like a quote...but it ahs to be original...it has to come from YOUR head 😆

It could be about anything related to AY.....but the challenge is that...in that one line....it has to tell a story...it should be fictional.....it shouldn't be stating a fact like: "Yuvi is a casanova while ashi is a rebel..."

I know I have written "one-liner" in the title....but it can also be a para long (but no longer....it should NOT be a one-shot)...and can be a drabble. It can also be as though it is part of a longer story....


I know I ain't making any sense...so I'll start with an example:

" She had always disdained his 'Papa's Boy' delirium as immaturity.....and yet now she found herself depending upon his maturity to sail over her "Daddy" problems! "

I hope I am making sense and I hope people don't think I come from a mental institution for the psycho (not that I ain't 😉)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Before admiring yours let me posht the one i got...bina mintos khaye dimaag ki batti jali......it deserves priority treatment😉
"At one point in their respective lives both had to let go off each other....still they never stopped being THERE right THERE for each other...."
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Posted: 16 years ago
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got another got another.....kya baat hai aaj loony getting way too brainy.."proude look"
adding on to halshuuuuuuuuuuuu's quote
"He not only helped her sail through her DADDY problem but also made her see her Mommy in new light...and dis he did by loving her so so much ki she felt beautyfull like helllll from widin ....she was always proude of who she was...but he made her prouder still...she was proude to be Beautyful in HIS eyes...and then she realized thats perhaps d only pair of eyes whose attention she craved.......and dis made her shun all all her insecuirities"
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Posted: 16 years ago
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That's brilliant idea harshu and ofcourse it was obvious from your side...ms.genius!☺️🤗🤗 Gosh seeing a topic by you after ages...me got soooooooooooooo happy when i saw it!😳😳🤗 And i am totally in for this...with slight problem...i "suck" at all this!😔 Any exceptions for me?😳☺️

Originally posted by: Eloquent




" She had always disdained his 'Papa's Boy' delirium as immaturity.....and yet now she found herself depending upon his maturity to sail over her "Daddy" problems! "



Coming to this one harshu....THIS ONE IS BRILLIANT! Shit yaar...you indeed talked about this whole london phase soo beautiful...sheeee😍😍 I totally loved it harshu! God i don't actually find words re...i actually need a good, high standard dictionary to tell you how amazing this one is...but seriously its so truee!! I totally loved it!

And i'm unable to think @ top of my head which literary device you used but i know u did one...its soo english...but i suck at english! *sigh* Lekin whatever it is...i loved this statement...it is Sheer Beauty!😳😳 Totally love it harshu!☺️🤗

PS: STOP BEING LAZY! =; C'mon harshu...its been two year since you wrote Taciturn Romance now!😔We deserve a fiction from your pen NOW at least!😔😍☺️
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Okie trying something:

"She says she hates him because he hates her...He says he hates her because she hates him...while all this time...they both were doing nothing but falling in love with each other"

Am i stating the fact?😕 It is kind of a fact...but oh well this is my first time to write something like this so you all better praise me even if its bad!😆😆 Kidding!😛😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: -YaRa-Forever-

Okie trying something:

"She says she hates him because he hates her...He says he hates her because she hates him...while all this time...they both were doing nothing but falling in love with each other"

Am i stating the fact?😕 It is kind of a fact...but oh well this is my first time to write something like this so you all better praise me even if its bad!😆😆 Kidding!😛😳



Haha...nooo its good....and yea its not a fact....the thing is..you have to write it as though you are writing a story...only that story is limited to a single line or para....you can use first person POV too....

What I mean is that...you have to write from ashi or/and yuvi's POV.....

You should NOT write as YOU....you shouldn't write praises about AY.....like a typical fangirl.....you have to write ashi's thoughts or yuvi's.....

You should write what ashi feels for yuv or vice versa....you should NOT write what YOU feel for AY 🤣

Coming to yours...I likesss itssss.....you picked up my concept better than smriti did😆😆😆 yours has a bit of humour in it and thats what makes it click 😆😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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God harshu...my cheeks are much more red than ashi's red hair!☺️☺️☺️
But yeeeee I am loving this...this means i will get AY fics type in one line/para!😍😍 I like that!☺️😍 C'mon now get to work and gimme more😍 Good for lazy bumps like you and people like smriti who is "busy" to sit and write fic/shot...this is just an instant thingy!☺️😳

I AM LOVING THIS!☺️☺️

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