Under The Stars[AY]oneshot

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys, I am Rhea,

I used to watch remix and I am watching remix now.

My fav couple is Ashi yuvi ( I like ashi tad bit more than I like yuvi)

So before I post my oneshot I will give you guys a short intro to me

I am a typical 16year old teenager with a penchant and uncanny ability to fall into trouble what is even more alarming is also my amazing luck which always saves me in the end.

I am brutually honest .

and rudely frank. I am kind of sarcastic and diplomacy and tact was never my cup of tea.I love the crowd and the attention(no I am not a attention seeking freak but I like socialising)

I love my friends to death, they mean the world to me.

I love movies(hint username ) i love laughing and talking(mostly cute bakwaas)i love singing and dancing and i love to cook .I love having fun and hanging out with my friends.I love acting and I am really good at it(I am not bragging that's one of the few things I am good at) and I am kind of dramatic(ok extremely dramatic).I love anything that is fiction.

I aspire to become an actress(a girl can dream right) or a lawyer(my debate team captain and my teachers think so)

For me it's more like actress nahi toh lawyer hi sahi. Lol.

So you see I am basically the best of both worlds or the worst of both worlds( as few people took the trouble to point out).

I am utterly untalented when it comes to any kinds of sport. My hand and leg refuse to listen to my brain when I am playing any kind of sport and as a result I end up injuring anyone within 10 feet of me.

Ok so I will spare you guys the rest of my banter. However I will not spare you guys my oneshot.

This is my first oneshot on ashi yuvi. So please read and comment(please be nice) criticism is always welcome though.

So here goes nothing.

Under The Stars

We've all got to dream sometime, right? I mean, think about what the world would be like if nobody had dreams. There wouldn't be any airplanes, or light bulbs. There probably wouldn't be an America, and we'd all still be savages running around in loincloths hitting each other over the head with clubs.

That is, if we hadn't fallen out of existence altogether. But, what can I say? People had dreams, and here I am, Yuvraj Dev, 18 years old, up at 3 o' clock in the morning looking out my window daydreaming. Although if it's 3 in the morning, chances are I'm not really day dreaming, am I? Ok, so night dreaming- without sleeping.

Ugh, I keep thinking of Ashi, he thought.

A smile crept across the boy's face as his best friend came into his mind.

He had been thinking of her all night. Every night, and every day pretty much all the time since he was about, oh lets say 7. He was totally in love with her, and had been for as long as he could remember.

It was their last summer together before college and there was still one thing, and only one thing that Anvesha Ray Banerjee didn't know about her best friend. How he felt about her.

Yuvi sighed and leaned back against the windowsill he was sitting in. he looked upwards and saw a star shooting across the sky. He blinked and shook his head, thinking he was delirious from the present ungodly hour.

He looked at the sky again, and sure enough, another star flew by, then a third. Yuvi scrambled off the windowsill, grabbed two blankets, then quietly climbed out his window.

Anvesha woke to a soft tap on her window. The girl reluctantly rolled over and chanced a glance at her clock.

3:06 AM

She groaned and smothered her head with a pillow in a very unsuccessful attempt to fall back asleep.

Yet another tap at her window caused the girl to slowly rise to her feet, grumbling as she made her way to the window.

She searched for the cause of the rude awakening, and her eyes led her down to the backyard and a young man standing with a handful of small pebbles.

Ashi's irritation instantly dissolved, and a smile seemed to have been permanently etched upon her face.

She realized Yuvi was trying to tell her something, so she gave him a quick wave and ran to get a pair of sandals.

The teenager slipped out of her window, and with much skill and experience, easily climbed down the side of her dorm room.

She hadn't bothered to change out of her tracks, as it was only Yuvi, and she was more comfortable in his presence than in her own bed.

Yuvi ran over to her and reached out his hand to her. She took it without question and he started running, the two blankets in his other hand.

Ashi ran with him, only once questioning their destination. He had looked at her with a smile and told her to just trust him, and of course, she did.

He led her though a dark field, never letting go of her hand.

Yuvi stopped running and began lying the two blankets on the ground.

Ashi took in her surroundings. She hadn't recognized it before in the dark, but they were on an old field at the top of a hill not ten minutes from her Dorm room. She played soccer here. It was pitch black, the only light emanating from the moon and stars.

"Yuvi, what are you doing?" she asked him.

He had set the two blankets on the grass at the base of a hill, creating one big blanket, and he was now lying on his back stargazing.

He looked up at her and smiled gently.

"What does it look like I'm doing? Come here," he motioned for her to join him, which she did.

"you brought me here to look at the stars at 3 in the morning, and then you ask why I call you phsyco" I mea-

He placed a finger over her lips to stop her ramble. She ceased talking immediately, but shivered slightly at his touch.

"You look beautiful," he said, positive that he had never made a statement more true, "Are you cold?" he asked her.

Ashi couldn't find words, but shook her head slightly.

He took his finger off her mouth and pointed up at the dark sky. He laid back down.

"It's a meteor shower," Yuvi explained.

Ashi's eyes widened in anticipation.

One star began to tremble as if a leaf in the wind, then suddenly broke free and shot across the sky.

Ashi gasped, "Oh my god, Yuvi, isn't it amazing?"

Yuvi looked over at Ashi's gleaming profile and sighed.

"Yes."

Yuvi turned her head towards him and moved her shoulder into his, then looked back up at the sky, eager for more.

Ashi nudged her back, and she began to grin. He elbowed her gently, once, twice, and the 18-year-old girl began to laugh silently.

She loved the nights she spent with him. They could be doing anything from playing cards to watching movies, planning how to get timbo and thakur together or just sitting around doing absolutely nothing at all, and she always had the time of her life.

He had always been there for her. He was there from day one. And she was starting to realize just how much he meant to her.

She elbowed Yuvi back slightly harder than she meant to, and he stared back at her with an over exaggerated expression of mock hurt.

"Of course you know, this means war," he stated in a perfect imitation of Bugs Bunny.

Ashi laughed at the look on his face and wriggled into the blanket a little more, looking intently at Yuvi, ready for any sudden movements.

"Whoa, look at that one!" Yuvi pointed up to a star in the sky.

Ashi followed his gaze immediately, and Yuvi pounced, tickling every inch of her stomach that he could get his hands on.

The girl squealed and turned away from him, and curled up on her side facing away from him. She moved her hands over her sides to try to prevent him from tickling her further, but to no such luck.

Yuvi chuckled and turned over towards her. He saw her back and without making a sound, he reached a hand over and pulled a lock of hair over her shoulder and swirled her fingers around it.

He saw Ashi's body visibly relax as his tender fingers caressed the smooth waves of her red streaked hair.

She was tired and obviously ready to drift off to sleep. Yuvi stroked her hair some more, then softly pulled her closer to him.

She felt her back graze his chest and she cuddled into him, too tired to protest.

"Hey, Phsyco," came the muffled voice he knew so well.

"Hey, Wacko," he said softly.

Ashi wrapped his arms around her and they lay there for a while, fitting perfectly together like pieces of a puzzle.

Ashi's insides were bubbling and flipping over, quivering at Yuvi's touch. He felt her shiver and pulled her closer, one of his fingers skimming a bare part of her stomach where her shirt had ridden up slightly. The girl shivered again.

Yuvi loosened his arms and Ashi slid back a safe distance from him. He placed a hand on hers.

"Are you cold?" he asked her for the second time that night.

"No," she replied, secretly yearning for the feel of her skin ablaze at his touch again.

Another star shot across the sky and Yuvi was tickling her again. She shrieked with laughter and gasped for breath. Every time she moved her hands to cover the spots he was tickling, he'd move them to a new location, causing her to break down into peals of laughter once again.

"Yuvi!" she gasped for air, "Yuvi, stop! Uvvvv I swear upon Bhaggu I will kill you !"

He grinned and stopped, reclining back onto the hill, never taking his arms off the girl he had loved for years.

The Girl in question allowed herself to be pulled back against him, and snuggled into his side, leaning her head on his shoulder and closing her eyes.

"Truce?" she whispered.

"Truce," he confirmed, tightening his grip around her waist.

Ashi sighed happily and nuzzled her head into his shoulder, curling up slightly.

Yuvi closed his eyes and kissed the top of her head, letting his mouth linger on her hair, his nose taking in the scent.

"Promise me, Yuvi," Ashi said sleepily, "that we'll always be together, no matter what life throws our way."

"Promise," he agreed.

Ashi smiled pleasantly and got comfortable in Yuvi's arms, never feeling quite as warm and safe as she did that very moment.

Ashi smiled and tilted her head up to look at him.

He looked down at her with sparkling blue eyes, and Ashi felt a comforting sensation flow through her body. She felt herself lean forward slowly until her lips brushed his.

She gasped when she realized what she did, and pulled back, but Yuvi caught the back of her head and brought her in again.

Their lips reunited and Ashi's mind exploded. So many thoughts were running through her brain, but she felt her eyes close and they all disappeared. It was just her and Yuvi; not another soul anywhere. She was in a state of complete ecstasy, and she let her instincts take over completely.

Yuvi wasn't thinking; he didn't want to move too much for fear of waking up from the best moment of his life. He tightened his arms around Ashi, and pulled her body into his, a shiver going down his own spine when he touched his lips to hers.

Yuvi tangled a hand in Ashi's hair, and kissed her with all the pent up passion he had been hiding for so long.

The world around the two teenagers began to dissolve, and they fell into an abyss of warmth and tenderness that neither could have possibly imagined existed.

They pulled back slowly and Yuvi leaned his forehead against hers. She was still cuddled up next to him, and he pulled her closer, never wanting to let go.

"Ashi," Yuvi whispered.

Ashi leaned in once more and kissed him again, then rested her head on his shoulder, more content with her teenage life than she had ever been before.

"I love you," she said, just above a whisper.

Yuvi closed his eyes and melted into a world of pure glee. He leaned back again on the hill and wrapped his arms around Ashi. She snuggled her head into his chest and he whispered in her ear.

"I love you."

I know I know I have made AY childhood friends.But it's not to bad when you think about it is it?

You know what you have to do just read and comment.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey rhea this is freaking awesome... so romantic ❤️loved it yaar ... pls do write more😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG Rhea!! This is seriously soo beautiful!!!! I've no words yaar...i loved itt!! I was blushing myself reading it!☺️☺️☺️ I loveeeee it...especially how the kiss took place!☺️☺️ It is just pure magic!😍😍 God i've got no words rhea...but it is just beautiful!! I wish this had taken place in remix during AY's friendship phase when we all were dying for their patch up!☺️ And yuvi sneaking in ashi's room is just soo typical yuvi-ish!🤣☺️ I loved it like anything...it is just soo freaking awesomeeeee!!

You are seriously talented when it comes to writing rhea and i love this one shot!☺️ I loved the comfort btwn AY...yuvi tickling ashi!🤣☺️ It is just MAGICAL!😳😳 LOVE IT!! Do write more...would love to read more pieces of writing by you rhea...this one has seriously stole my heart!☺️😳

Love
Nitz

PS: Welcome to RF!🤗🤗 Keep posting!😳🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Rhea.....this was just fab yaar 👏....it was sooo cute n cuddly n romantic 😳😳.....i loved it totally.....I could imagine yuvi tickling ashi n all....it was so much fun reading it.....thanks so much for writing this Rhea...n plz do write more na 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: jen99

hey rhea this is freaking awesome... so romantic ❤️loved it yaar ... pls do write more😛

Thank you so much.😊
I am really really really glad you liked it.😃😃
Thanks a lot for commenting it really makes me want to write more.😃😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: -YaRa-Forever-

OMG Rhea!! This is seriously soo beautiful!!!! I've no words yaar...i loved itt!! I was blushing myself reading it!☺️☺️☺️

Now you are making me blush😳😳 with all the compliments.😉😉
I loveeeee it...especially how the kiss took place!☺️☺️ It is just pure magic!😍😍
Thank you so much. I loved writing it too.😳😳
God i've got no words rhea...but it is just beautiful!! I wish this had taken place in remix during AY's friendship phase when we all were dying for their patch up!☺️ And yuvi sneaking in ashi's room is just soo typical yuvi-ish!🤣☺️ I loved it like anything...it is just soo freaking awesomeeeee!!
Well to be honest I was quite happy with the way this oneshot turned out to be. Even though I was quite sure I had messed up Ashi's character a bit because she is a complex character. But cheers to you for liking it sooo much.😃
You are seriously talented when it comes to writing rhea and i love this one shot!☺️
Awwwiee thanks I love writing too.😃😃
I loved the comfort btwn AY...yuvi tickling ashi!🤣 It is just MAGICAL!
Well the comfort AY share is the highlight or strong point of their relationship be it love or frienship or even enmity for that matter.So it was really important that I use this to my advantage.
😳😳 LOVE IT!! Do write more...would love to read more pieces of writing by you rhea...this one has seriously stole my heart!☺️😳
Well thanks a lot and I promise another oneshot as soon as I find a basic plot for it.😃😆
Love
Nitz

PS: Welcome to RF!🤗🤗 Keep posting!😳🤗
Thank you and I will surely keep posting and replying to topics.

And, thanks a lot again for reading and commenting.😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashi_mania

Hey Rhea.....this was just fab yaar 👏....it was sooo cute n cuddly n romantic 😳😳.....i loved it totally.....I could imagine yuvi tickling ashi n all....it was so much fun reading it.....thanks so much for writing this Rhea...n plz do write more na 😳

Thanks a lot for liking it soo much.😊
You guys are extremely sweet.😳😳😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey babe! Okay first and foremost I have to say... i love u. seriously! I'm sitting reading ur intro thing about u and I'm like... wow! She is soo cute! Are u like my long lost younger siter or something! We could be quite a firey duo u know! rofl!
I loved every bit of ur one-shot! For 16-year-old, you have quite a vocabulary there! I love how professionally your words flow! 👏 It's definitely the debate classes! I'm damn sure of it!
Beautiful concept! And yes, a-y as childhood friends sounds like a great thing! I love how you portrayed their relationship. It was so easy going and laid back but at the same time it was very persuading. I could imagine happening!
Hats off yaar! 👏 Damn good job! I'm so glad I came back here, to my home, and saw this! Keep rocking and sending more of your lovely works at us!
Love u,
Komz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

Hey babe! Okay first and foremost I have to say... i love u.

Aww thanks so so sooooo so much, I love you too.(runs to hug you🤗)😳
seriously! I'm sitting reading ur intro thing about u and I'm like... wow! She is soo cute! Are u like my long lost younger siter or something! We could be quite a firey duo u know! rofl!
Like awwwww thats so awfully kind of you.Well hears to our fiery duo⭐️😃. So you are a lot like me huh? Thats so cool.Thnaks again for calling me cute.If you are like me then I guess you are cute too.Lolz😃😃.And I wouldnt mind being your long lost sister(It'd be great).I bet you are a great elder sister😃.And I really want to add this you are so sooo sweet and thanks for calling me your sister(hehe).😊
I loved every bit of ur one-shot! For 16-year-old, you have quite a vocabulary there! I love how professionally your words flow! 👏
Thanks a lot. You sure know how to make the Rhea happy.well I am a girl of many talents.LOl.No but seriously, I love writing so I guess, it reflects in my writing.😃😊😆
It's definitely the debate classes! I'm damn sure of it!
Oh my debate class(lol).Now thats another story.But it's another of my favourite loves. 😆😃
Beautiful concept! And yes, a-y as childhood friends sounds like a great thing! I love how you portrayed their relationship. It was so easy going and laid back but at the same time it was very persuading. I could imagine happening!
Well I had to focus on their strong point and their friendship is the most important thing about their relationship.It's the beauty of their relationship.😳😳
Hats off yaar! 👏 Damn good job! I'm so glad I came back here, to my home, and saw this! Keep rocking and sending more of your lovely works at us!
You sure know how to make the Rhea happy.Lolz.😆😆
Love u,
Love Ya lots.
Komz

Thank you so much.I am really really happy you guys liked it so much.Love ya.
Rhea(your sister)😉😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: filmfreak

Thank you so much.I am really really happy you guys liked it so much.Love ya.
Rhea(your sister)😉😉

ROFL! Yeah I think we're A LOT alike! Take sonam for example! I LOOOOOVE SONAM! rofl. Anytime sis. Big sis lil sis act here! Bring it on!
So... when are you writing again? ROFL! I don't know how great of an elder sister I am cuz I'm an only child. But I guess u can be the judge of that. ROFL. THE Rhea.
Long live the FIREY DUO! Rofl!
Love ya!
ur Komzie Sis

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