~* The Way We Were *~ pt 9 page 16! (A TiaRa ff) - Page 15

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Posted: 16 years ago
Absolutely loved 9th chap Ash👏its so well written👏👏👏everything frm Tia's pain to Sumeet's emotions deserves standing ovation but i loved Tia-Ashi part most👏its so well explained👏👏👏loved it wid capital L😳now m dying to know the truth😳oh and ya loved the "setting her whole wardrobe on fire " line😆so Tiaish😳
Natalie.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ash419

Part 9: To Love and To Lose

Tia couldn't stop crying that whole day. Her tears fell freely, barely stopping for more than a few moments at a time. She was sure she was going to drown in them ' a situation she didn't mind facing at that time. They were no longer under her control; in a parallel universe she may have actually laughed at the ridiculousness of the situation. But at that moment, nothing could have seemed less funny to her. She had never been a fan of pranks, but the dire joke that fate had played on her made her weep more than if anyone had set her whole wardrobe on fire.

For a moment she thought she would feel better, once she had accepted the truth of the matter. She didn't have the agitation and anger that she felt when she was running away from the facts. But in actual fact, she had never felt worse. Her tears were witness to the fact that she was mourning the loss of her true love.

If she really loved him, she would be happy for him whatever he chose to do with his life. But how oh how could she make such a big sacrifice?? It's true that Tia loved herself. She knew she was worth every penny of her Parisian couture, and she was never afraid to show it. But she loved Ranveer more than her life itself, and that was saying something. If he wanted to be with someone else.. then fine, Tia would just have to let him go.

So what else could she do but sob and sob? After a while she just accepted her tears and tried to get on with her work through blurry eyes. She knew she just had to leave for work that day, but it was quite impossible in her current state. She had rang up her office a few times, but hung up soon because she was incapable of saying anything comprehensible in her croaky broken voice. So she carried on working on her laptop, communicating through email with her colleagues, whilst her tears spilled onto the keyboard. She knew that her team was getting stressed out with her, as she was managing the big project they were working on at the moment. She just couldn't focus. Afterall, how was she meant to help acquire anything when she had just lost everything?

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'T-t-they...they say it's better to have love-' Tia had to pause as she was crying so hard. 'l-loved and l...lost, than to never have loved at all.' Then she collapsed into her Papa's arms.

It was late afternoon when Sumeet Ahuja came to check up on his daughter, only to find in such a state. He may not have known the details, but it didn't take a genius to know what (or rather, whom) this was about. His daughter, his dainty little bud, had blossomed into a beautiful flower. But despite all his care and nurturing, she seemed to be withering away before his eyes. He had left no stone unturned in making her life comfortable, but there were just some things out of his control. When he saw her like this, he wanted to do everything possible to make her feel better, spend any sum of money to bring a smile on his little girl's face...but he knew he was helpless. So instead he just held her tight, and let her weep on his shoulder.

Tia was his life's most precious gift and, as clich'd as it sounded, he couldn't believe how quickly his little princess had grown up. He still felt like bringing her home dolls and teddy bears, switching off his work phone to read her bedtime stories in peace, making time in hectic schedules to go and watch Tia perform in her school dance shows. It had been tough playing the roles of a father and a mother for so long... However, he knew he must have done something right, because Tia was a beautiful, talented, wonderful girl with a heart of gold. And behind her pretty, porcelain exterior lay astonishing determination, strength and courage. She had proved that in these past years... yet sometimes Sumeet felt as if she was purposely making her life difficult for herself ' like a tough puzzle she needed to solve, a challenge she needed to survive. Maybe she was trying to prove a point, but he knew that she had been essentially running away from something. Someone. And now she had faced him.

If there was another person in the world who could even come close to loving Tia Ahuja as much as her father did, it would have been Ranveer. And Sumeet would never be comfortable handing the apple of his eye over to anybody else other than him... Not only because he knew how much Ranveer loved Tia, but because he knew Tia herself would never be as happy with anyone else as she was with him.

If anyone knew about recognising opportunities and seizing them, it would be a business tycoon like Sumeet Ahuja. And he knew that it was time for Tia to sort out her problems with Ranveer. And life had presented her with the perfect opportunity.

'Princess, if he truly loved you once, he'll love you forever. Because, at heart, you'll never really change. And I wouldn't want it any other way. I may never know what happened between the two of you, but I know you need to talk to him.'

That's when it struck Tia ' She knew what she needed to do.

'Papa, can you come back here later?'

'Of course Tia.. are you sure you'll be ok for now?'

'Yes Tia will manage.'

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Half an hour later Sumeet, Sonia, Pri, Meher and Anvesha were assembled in Tia's room.

'Tia has called you all here because she has something very important to share with you. Something that you've all probably wondered about, but Tia has never told anyone before now. But all of you mean a lot to Tia, and now she feels that she has to let you know...'

On hearing these words, Ashi felt confused.. and a little awkward. She meant a lot to Tia? Should she be here right now? Tia had probably called her by mistake. She began to slowly edge her way out of the room.

'Wait Anvesha' Tia had spotted her.

Tia looked at her in the eye, and something rare and wondrous passed between them: understanding. Its true they were nothing like each other: Tia was the anti-Ashi; Ashi was the anti-Tia. Yet they both had that spark in them. Most of the time the sparks only led to combustion upon meeting, but occasionally they formed a connection. An astrological connection. After all, they may not have shared the same blood, but they did share the same birthday. They were born under the same constellation, which made them cosmic sisters. The stars had aligned for them and brought them closer and closer. And now they were officially family.

Anvesha stayed.

'Tia trusts you all with this. She doesn't know how well she will be able to explain it, because a million things were going through Tia's mind at the time... But she'll try her best. Oh and, um, make yourselves comfortable...this could take a while.'

It had dawned upon Tia that she could no longer carry the burden of secrets any longer. They weighed her down and worried her (and she for one didn't want premature wrinkles). She wanted to be free; she wanted to fly again. It had been a day of revelations for Tia. Now she wanted to reveal what had happened between her and Ranveer.



awesum awesummm awesummmm...!!!!👏
wat a descriptionnn mannnnnnn... m stunnnnedd as alwayssssss..!!! ur fabbbbbbbb..!!🤗🤗
goshhh.. ur sooo perfect in givin tht real touch of expression😍... godd.. ur superbb..!!🤗
the way u expressed tia's feelingss... wat all was goin thru her mindd... i luvedd ittt.. simplyy brilliant it wasss..!!
i swear i wished i also had tht imagination power.. of putting thoughts into wordss.. words tht cud create magic.. but .. unfortunately.. m nt gud at it...😭
nt a bigg deall yaa😳.. atleast v have u🤗.. whos doing the imagination part for uss☺️.. nd also gifting us wid beautiful wordss😍 which are soo expressive of the feelings nd emotions😍.. the tumult of sadness they're goin thru...😭!! i dun hv wordss to praise ur wordss😕.. ur mind blowing yaa..!🤗🤗🤗
ven i was readin the tia-summeet prt.. i was actually imagining tia cryin on sumeet's shoulder nd summeet goin thru all the thoughts as u describedd😛... goshh.. those father-dotty scenes were all afreshhhh yaa.. thanx to uuu..!!😛🤗
nt onli ranveer-tia.. u bring afresh the memories of all the precious relations they shared.. parents-dotty bonding😍.. ashi-tia's sisterly love😉.. FrIEnDsHIp😃...!!
ur too gudd yaa... 🤗🤗🤗
eagerly waitin for ur next part.. wanna knw.. wat separated our love-birds... two soul-matesss...☺️soul mates nt onli for lyf.. but for eternityy☺️☺️☺️

P.S.: Go ahead wid the book idea.. nd regarding the characters nt being ur own.. they r nt trade marked..😉 still if u wish.. seek permission frm Goldie or Srishti
😉...m sure they'll b honoured to have a continuation of their story.. nd tht too.. a brilliant continuation..!! m sure.. it'd be a bestseller..😉😉😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
yeah i agree with you payal.. iam sure its gonna be a best seller👏 iam in so much in love wth ashmis writting.. its not because ita tr fic..
"""""Afterall, how was she meant to help acquire anything when she had just lost everything? """""""

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who woudnot be when its filled with lines like this😳????her.style of writting is superb..and the language.... short and crisp....⭐️
i wish i had words to express how happy her fic makes me.😳.
cant wait for the suspense to unfold i know itsgonna be.. the toughespart so.... all the best ashmi..!!!!!
ps never thought tia would confine in ashi( surprising turn of events).. expected she w would share with her step mom soniya..
sorry did not notice your tr siggi earlier..loved it..
thanks for sharing your wondful talent with us..terrific writer and very talented sigii maker ..(you remind me so much of lamina😳)
can we lookforward to a vmix😳
Edited by aparna_1988 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey asmi hers link to shweta and karan sensuous dance.. in znd finale ... https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/remix/1045768/shweta-n-ksgs-dance-promo-added-performance-vid posted by nirali shah
do watch😳.
Edited by aparna_1988 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey ashma reli nice udpate w8in for next udpate rlei w8in2 know wats store ind next parttt nice one keep it up

lvu ash
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_huda

Absolutely loved 9th chap Ash👏its so well written👏👏👏everything frm Tia's pain to Sumeet's emotions deserves standing ovation but i loved Tia-Ashi part most👏its so well explained👏👏👏loved it wid capital L😳now m dying to know the truth😳oh and ya loved the "setting her whole wardrobe on fire " line😆so Tiaish😳
Natalie.

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Hi Natsie! Thanks so much doll!😊😳😳 reeli means a lot to me that u commented despite being busy!!
I luvd writing that Tia-Ashi part..i truly believe they have a connection, in a strange yet sweet way😊
Love
Ash
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: palo rani

awesum awesummm awesummmm...!!!!👏
wat a descriptionnn mannnnnnn... m stunnnnedd as alwayssssss..!!! ur fabbbbbbbb..!!🤗🤗
goshhh.. ur sooo perfect in givin tht real touch of expression😍... godd.. ur superbb..!!🤗
the way u expressed tia's feelingss... wat all was goin thru her mindd... i luvedd ittt.. simplyy brilliant it wasss..!!
i swear i wished i also had tht imagination power.. of putting thoughts into wordss.. words tht cud create magic.. but .. unfortunately.. m nt gud at it...😭
nt a bigg deall yaa😳.. atleast v have u🤗.. whos doing the imagination part for uss☺️.. nd also gifting us wid beautiful wordss😍 which are soo expressive of the feelings nd emotions😍.. the tumult of sadness they're goin thru...😭!! i dun hv wordss to praise ur wordss😕.. ur mind blowing yaa..!🤗🤗🤗
ven i was readin the tia-summeet prt.. i was actually imagining tia cryin on sumeet's shoulder nd summeet goin thru all the thoughts as u describedd😛... goshh.. those father-dotty scenes were all afreshhhh yaa.. thanx to uuu..!!😛🤗
nt onli ranveer-tia.. u bring afresh the memories of all the precious relations they shared.. parents-dotty bonding😍.. ashi-tia's sisterly love😉.. FrIEnDsHIp😃...!!
ur too gudd yaa... 🤗🤗🤗
eagerly waitin for ur next part.. wanna knw.. wat separated our love-birds... two soul-matesss...☺️soul mates nt onli for lyf.. but for eternityy☺️☺️☺️

P.S.: Go ahead wid the book idea.. nd regarding the characters nt being ur own.. they r nt trade marked..😉 still if u wish.. seek permission frm Goldie or Srishti
😉...m sure they'll b honoured to have a continuation of their story.. nd tht too.. a brilliant continuation..!! m sure.. it'd be a bestseller..😉😉😉

Omg now i dont have words to express just how happy I feel when I read comments like urs payal! Well i just try my best.. and its something i luv doing.. writing! the truth is ive never written a full-fledged story before.. always start some and never finish! But this is something i reeeeli hope to do with this story.. its been such a great experience and way to pass time over the summer!
oh myyy ive having a tough time carrying on now! But I promise I'll try my best😃😳
Ash
PS- Haha like Goldie or Srishti entertain some random girl who wants to write a book on remix! 😆 But anyhow, if i do write a book, u can tell everyone that u were one of the first ppl to read this authors work 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna_1988

yeah i agree with you payal.. iam sure its gonna be a best seller👏 iam in so much in love wth ashmis writting.. its not because ita tr fic..

"""""Afterall, how was she meant to help acquire anything when she had just lost everything? """""""

----------------------------------------------------------------

who woudnot be when its filled with lines like this😳????her.style of writting is superb..and the language.... short and crisp....⭐️
i wish i had words to express how happy her fic makes me.😳.
cant wait for the suspense to unfold i know itsgonna be.. the toughespart so.... all the best ashmi..!!!!!
ps never thought tia would confine in ashi( surprising turn of events).. expected she w would share with her step mom soniya..
sorry did not notice your tr siggi earlier..loved it..
thanks for sharing your wondful talent with us..terrific writer and very talented sigii maker ..(you remind me so much of lamina😳)
can we lookforward to a vmix😳

Ohh Appy thanks so much for saying u liked that line, its made me so happy! actually i wanted someone to spot it out, as silly as that sounds 😳😳 I always look forward to ur comments, not onli bcoz they're so sweet, bt also because u actually make me feel like what ive written matters.
Oh gawd, i need that luck! Cant figure out how to proceed now!
And thank u agen!! I just LOVE that blindfold dance, its amazingggg, so beautiful (apart from when he leaves her at the end :( ) And well i dont no who lamina is, but im sure its a compliment, so thnak u appy 😊 which ff has she written? dyu have a link?
and as for a vmix, haha i dnt think im competant enough for that! Il leave that to the pros😆
Ooo thanks for this! ive commented on the thread where rachel posted it.. It luks soo good! cant wait to watch it!
Love
Ash


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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: animateash

hey ashma reli nice udpate w8in for next udpate rlei w8in2 know wats store ind next parttt nice one keep it up

lvu ash

Thanks so much for the comment darling 😃
Truth is, the next part is getting hard to write! But im trying my best😳😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Dear Angels,
I began writing this ff, because i luv to write and because i needed something to do over the summer.. and after posting it online, well i cudnt imagine that id get such a wonderful response! I honestly didnt think id be writing for so long.. i was actually meant to have finished by now..
because now my summer holidays have come to a close now, and Im off to university tomoro!! Which means... indefinate hiatus from me😭😳 I mean, i have no idea how busy or free il be, but il definately be doing more things than i am at the moment (including cooking my own food!!)
I'm sooo sorry for doing this to you at a crucial part of the story, bt i will try my best to not be away for too long.. i might not even be away for long at all! I just thought i shud let you know..
Right now Im so nervous about tomoro!!!!!!!!!! But will try and take a little bit of Tia attitude with me😊 she'll always be such an inspiration for me😊😊
Byee dolls!
Much love,
Ashma

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