Alzia SS - Chapter 8 UPDATED Death is not the end, its a new beginning

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Shopau

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

RES 🥳

YAAAYYY!!!! ME FIRST!!!! Aaj toh meri bhi timing kamal hogayiii

THANKS FOR THE DEDICATION!!!!!!! LOVE YOU!!!

Going back to reading the update now

Edited by Shopau - 10 years ago

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darkwarrior200

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: Shopau
RES 🥳
YAAAYYY!!!! ME FIRST!!!! Aaj toh meri bhi timing kamal hogayiii

THANKS FOR THE DEDICATION!!!!!!! LOVE YOU!!!

Going back to reading the update now

this is combined dedication...

theres a sole one for u😃

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Shopau

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: princess200

this is combined dedication...
theres a sole one for u😃

YAYYY!!! THANKS Darling

Aur haan iss update ke baad toh mein heaven mein hoon!!! Tum sole dedication mujhe maarne ka plan bana chuki ho...

Just read the update!!! I AM IN MY DREAMWORLD RIGHTNOW... Completely mesmerized and speechless HOTNESS KA JAWAB NAHI🤬

So Detailed Comment Baadmein...

Abhi toh kamse kam 10 baar isse padna hoga nahi toh neend nahi aayegi!!!🤗

Will BE BACK!!!😉

Edited by Shopau - 10 years ago

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SHIVANGI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#124

😃
Ooo
Myyy
Goooddd !!!!!!!!

Arshia... Ye kya kiya...!!!!!!
Meri Jaan... Jiyo yaar...

Saala..ye mirza pagal pan ki had krte hain...
Jhrne me kud gye ...raat me. Ufff...inke pyaar pane k tareeke. ..!!
Lkin.. I was scared too jb razia ki halat bigad gyi..
Mirza ko kitna guilty feel ho Raha tha...
U described it so incredibly...!!!

Aur phir to...
😃

Hm apni hasi ko rok hi nhi paa rhe ...
I'm also blushing heavily like razia... 😳 😳 😳

Apne to detail me pura btaya kya...
Dikha hi diya...
Hmre ankho k samne pura update movie ki trh chal rha tha..

Ooo ..
Balle balle...!!!
Oye..oye...!!!!

Finally... Do dil ek Jaan ...
Do jism ek Jaan hue...!!!! 😳 😳

Wild romance..haaan... Guuud...!!!!
Darling... Itna boldness kaha se Lati h aap...
I admire uuu ...mohtarma...!!!

And ...waaqai...
Itna intezar ... Khaki nhi gya...
It was worth it...
Alzia ka..bhi aur hmra bhi...!!!

Luuuv luuuv luuuv ... Uuu meri Jaan.!!!
Neende uda Di hmri...kaise soyenge aaj..??!!!!

Jhrne ki trh hmra b pyar aap pr baras raha h ..
Lots & lots of PYAR.. MOHABBAT...

SHIVANGI...ur fan...

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SHIVANGI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

I LUUUV ITTT ILUUUV ITTTI LUUUV ITTTI III LUUUVVV ITTT!!!!
😃 😃 😃
😛 😛 😛
😳 😳 😳

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darkwarrior200

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Posted: 10 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Shopau

YAYYY!!! THANKS Darling

Aur haan iss update ke baad toh mein heaven mein hoon!!! Tum sole dedication mujhe maarne ka plan bana chuki ho...

Just read the update!!! I AM IN MY DREAMWORLD RIGHTNOW... Completely mesmerized and speechless HOTNESS KA JAWAB NAHI🤬

So Detailed Comment Baadmein...

Abhi toh kamse kam 10 baar isse padna hoga nahi toh neend nahi aayegi!!!🤗

Will BE BACK!!!😉

Ho gaya na qatal tera...😉😆

im still awaiting my most awaited comment...which is supposed to come from YOU !😳

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darkwarrior200

@darkwarrior200

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Posted: 10 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: lionsroar
😃
Ooo
Myyy
Goooddd !!!!!!!!

Arshia... Ye kya kiya...!!!!!!
Meri Jaan... Jiyo yaar...

Saala..ye mirza pagal pan ki had krte hain...
Jhrne me kud gye ...raat me. Ufff...inke pyaar pane k tareeke. ..!!
Lkin.. I was scared too jb razia ki halat bigad gyi..
Mirza ko kitna guilty feel ho Raha tha...
U described it so incredibly...!!!

Aur phir to...
😃

Hm apni hasi ko rok hi nhi paa rhe ...
I'm also blushing heavily like razia... 😳 😳 😳

Apne to detail me pura btaya kya...
Dikha hi diya...
Hmre ankho k samne pura update movie ki trh chal rha tha..

Ooo ..
Balle balle...!!!
Oye..oye...!!!!

Finally... Do dil ek Jaan ...
Do jism ek Jaan hue...!!!! 😳 😳

Wild romance..haaan... Guuud...!!!!
Darling... Itna boldness kaha se Lati h aap...
I admire uuu ...mohtarma...!!!

And ...waaqai...
Itna intezar ... Khaki nhi gya...
It was worth it...
Alzia ka..bhi aur hmra bhi...!!!

Luuuv luuuv luuuv ... Uuu meri Jaan.!!!
Neende uda Di hmri...kaise soyenge aaj..??!!!!

Jhrne ki trh hmra b pyar aap pr baras raha h ..
Lots & lots of PYAR.. MOHABBAT...

SHIVANGI...ur fan...

AWWW "Shivangi...MY FAN ??"

Haaaye main mar jaawan !!🤗

i am soo soo happy u liked it...i was a bit worried as to how people will react to this wild romance 😆 i was only sure of a few people liking it...bt abt the rest doubtful thi...😊

keep reading it...phir neend aajayegi and ull get wild dreams 🤣

i love u too yaar...thank u so very much for all the appreciation 🤗

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Shopau

@Shopau

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Posted: 10 years ago

#128

CHAPTER 😈HOT😈 6 UNRES

So jaana cancel hogaya so here I am with my comment

You are giving me serious competition in Besharmi🤣

ITNA HOT>>> SENSUAL>>>NERVE WRECKING UPDATE aur phir kal ka RS Episode with MIRZA unintentionally hi sahi but becoming WILD!!!

Mera painful day bhi sweet pain ke saath bhar diya☺️

So coming to the Details...

when the update started I was wanting to kill Mirza for his stupidity😡 but then you wrote it so beautifully that I was actually feeling his anxiousness, his fear and foremost his love for her.

And trust me I am quite a stubborn person when it comes to reading SS and FF... so if I don't like the character sketch or can't relate to them... i find it quite hard to like the piece of work... but with DEATH is not the END... I can't take my eyes off the screen...

I just love it yaar 🤗

So coming back to the update...

The love making scene was very well written. It was raw and hot but still innocent and pure... Its not easy to write about lovemaking with so much purity... HATS OFF TO YOU👍🏼

And its the most sensual thing when two people share pain with the same zest as they share happiness...

You wrote it possibly the best way ALZIA's PASSION and LOVE could be penned down.

CONTINUE SOON!!! I am eagerly waiting for my sole dedication NOW 🥳

LOVE YA ALWAYS... HUGGS🤗

Edited by Shopau - 10 years ago

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darkwarrior200

@darkwarrior200

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Posted: 10 years ago

#129

Only YOU can give me such intense comments...🤣

thats why i wait for it like hell 🤗

This was by far my most difficult update...i had to keep passion and innocence both in mind...thts why it took so much time and it was so long...i was scared as to how it will go down with u guys...keeping in mind mirza and razias attitudes and character sketch's

But AAPSE jab green signal mil gaya then i know i rocked it 🥳

ohh yes😈 tu bhi mujhe kam competition nahi de rahi hai besharmi mein 🤣

btw ur sole dedication is not something related to romance only as such...it is...well...ull see why i dedicated it to u...😳 dont wna break the suspense...

Death will never be these soulmates ka end...i promise u all that...death comes to all...love stays immortal❤️

Love u Shopau for all the love and support and appreciation you give me...love u loads and loads for that...🤗

Edited by princess200 - 10 years ago

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overactor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#130

First of all arshu i just love u alot , u r truly my soul sister 🤗 i feel like giving u a tight hug, seriously ur concept the way u have written and whatever u have written is my ultimate fantasy and my fav imagination for every couple i ship 😆 the cold faint heroine and the confused hero who has to save her 😛 which ever couple i have ever shipped i have imained them consummating this way😛 and well u nailed it, completely nailed it, i loved the update so much i just can't tell u, im going to save this update and gonna re read it several times, i loved it more then anything, u r fabulous, mind blowing superb and bindaas ⭐️

The way he was worried for hurting her, aw my cute mirza, i love how u kept mirza alive, the mirza i believe him to be, the one i imagine in my fantasies, the one i love with all my heart, u truly are my soul sister😆 sorry but i can't help my feelings, i love so much and really can't believe we have just met 😆, khair back to the update, i loved how he was lusty and crazy at first dying to do it, and scared to loose the very next moment, the crazy in love afraid to loose mirza running to save her life was so heart touching, and the situation the scene u set was again as i always imagine😉 i felt as i was reading one of my wild imaginations😆 then him taking her into a shade , then came my most fav part, the clothes removing, uff how i loved the part where he did it ☺️ the tension the confusion the desire, ☺️ the beattle between his inside monster and his angelic self was brilliantly written 👏 the fear of loosing her and the desire to make her his ☺️ and finally when he made the decision to take his own clothes off and he slid down with her ☺️☺️ ☺️ ☺️☺️ and then his monster gearing up again, perfect just perfect, i loved it to the core, ☺️☺️

when raz woke up and was all senti, gosh even i had tears in my eyes, alzia are perfect and u made them even more perfect in ur story 👏 and the way she gave him permission ☺️

the consummation part ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ gosh i loved everything about it was highly gutter and hottest i have ever read 👏 ⭐️ 👍🏼 i was so engrossed and was having my fingers in my mouth biting them, my heart beat raced as he kissed and gave her love bites ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ gosh it was just the best ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ and finally the last part i was scared u might give details of that too 😲 😆 mujhe chalta coz im a med student i deal with that stuff daily ☺️ but some ppl would faint here😆

i love u arshu for the best update and the best romantic read of my life u just nailed every emotion with perfection

thank u so much for writing this update🤗 , it made my day my entire week maybe coz im gona re read it so many times this was gorgeous on every level🤗

i love u my soul sister🤗 this is for u

"najane kese mile ho par jab se mile ho ache lage ho

kuch apne bhi begaane hogaye, tum begane ho k bhi apne ban gaye ho" 😃

P.S plx add a disclaimer that says read only if u r above 18, u dnt want t spoil kids na 😉 😆

P.P.S i will not read the next update, is dhuki story me hi ye update daalni thi 😡 😆