Alzia SS 'The Malik Of Sultan's Heart' last part pg 32 - Page 23

Wow really nice chap
Alzia ka romance 😳
kaash aap cvs k team me hoti
kya banta serial ⭐️
Aww altu is so good, kind n loving
he will help her now to get back Kingdom that's
so nice of him
raz is equally deewani as mirza is
Hamam part was also good 👏
waiting for nxt chp 😃
wish me bhi apke tarah koi story bana paati
bt meri story to 10 lines me hi khatam ho jaati 😆
I m vry bad at story writing

Ah the morning after the consummation is the best of its kind in its own way waking up with each other next to each other in each others arms semi dressed 😳 peaceful...happy...and shy😳

Originally posted by: princess200

Ah the morning after the consummation is the best of its kind in its own way waking up with each other next to each other in each others arms semi dressed 😳 peaceful...happy...and shy😳

razia must have never felt more womanly before 😆😆 like the way she felt in the morning...stretching...feeling the warmth of the sun...recalling last night 😳 blushing to herself...

mirza hugging her from behind...the warmth and feeling of being so complete 😳 neck kisses...☺️amaa chain name no cheez he has 😆

razia bloody liar...bas bhi kijiye and all bhaav eating purposely 🤣

he ran behind her i knew though he would after u wrote 'hum jaa rahe hai ghusal karne' only scrolled down to confirm my happiness 😃

besharam flirt...removed his gown in front of her...right..hes her husband now...besharmi kaisi...and pulled hers also☺️...sharam name no cheez really i cant stop thinking over the fact that how naughty he is...😆 though the gown didnt come off then...but him carrying her in the water...with him topless...is hell romantic...hell hell hell romantic...☺️ even somewhat more than him removing off her gown in water and saying a the epic flirty and seductive dialogue 'hamari mohobbat ki garmi aapke liye kaafi nahi hai kya' ??😈

my fav line as i always have one -

aap humse bach k kahin nhi jaa skti samjhi aap😈😃

and ya...when he ran behind her n caught her...tht episode came in my mind...after they both cleared their MU and he chased her for a kiss then...😳

and and this also "woh turk aapko nuksaan pohochaye ussey pehle yeh aashiq khud aapko UTHA laya"

uthaaa laya...my fav words...u already knew that na...😉

jo hukum hamare dil ki sultana 😃

this update was wayy too hawt n flirty and seductive even though u left some to my imaginations.. 😡 ,,,,,nevertheless is was still amazing 🤗🤗

P.S - I hate Razia yet again for breaking the kiss😵...and him for promising her tht he will win back Delhi for her😒

Comment for ch 12
Razia aur Mirza swing par lete hue! It directly reminded me of the scene from the show about her dream jahan ruksaar begum aakar dono se complain karti hai ki unke bacche usse budhi something bula rahe hain!!! It was how show mein Razia ne apne future ke baare mein imagine kiya tha and here in the story they were planning their future on the swing as well. Awesome connection!
"aur RAzia aur Altunia, alzia"
Woow, simple dialogue par itna accha laga!
Alzia . I love this word!

Fight scene mein kya patka Mirza ne Yakut ko! Terrace se sedha zameen par... Bohut haawa mein udd raha tha.. Sahi jagah par patka Mirza! Well done..! 😆 aur karo shikayat apni sultan se ... Bada aaya kahin ka!

sbse pehle to tumhari ye na
paak zaban hi kaatni hogi
Mere mann mein aaya ki shubh kaam mein deri kaisi Mirza... Aaj kaat hi daalo.. Bohut bolta hai aaltu faaltu baatein! 🤣

Ending chapter ki bohut sad thi. I can imagine from the show jab Mirza bina kuch bole, bina nazre milaye delhi se bhatinda chala jaata hai.. Hope they unite soon!!

For ch 13
Itni paak mohobbat humne aaj tak
sirf afsanon me sunni thi aaj dekh k yaqeen hi nhi hta
Kitni baar socha hai ye maine! Kitni baar! Like sach mein kabhi Alzia exist karte the! Kabhi sach mein itni paak mohabat thi asliyat mein, kitabon se bahar, haqiqat ki duniya mein! Kabhi sach mein Mirza aur Razia the! Woh mohabbat, woh nafrat (or may be narazgi), woh junoon, sab sach hai!!

Mujhe ek baat kabhi samajh nahi aayi. Atigin ne Mirza ko kyun bhadkaya tha!!? May be I am missing something obvious.! Is it for political reasons ki he had issues with a female ruler or something else!!!?

he pulled her cheeks
Altunia; awwllee lle hamari pagli razo
Main rohit ko pankhuri ke cheeks aise khicte hue imagine kar karke hi hasi se pagal ho rahi hun! What if during the show dono ki aisi koi offscreen photo upload hoti 🤣

Shazia aur Atigin ki shaadi ka kissa kya hai? Like forcefully hui thi ya one sided love ya koi political reasons ya phir kuch aur?!!!
Emotions se bhara update! Super like! Awwesome writing Sonu..!! 😃

Aage ke chapters par bhi jald comment karungi! Story is Going great dear! 😃

Originally posted by: ..radiance...

Aage ke chapters par bhi jald comment karungi! Story is Going great dear! 😃

For ch 14
he licked his lips, Razia's mouth opened in shock,
how could he, she kicked him on his stomch, he
moved back but didn't fall

Probably ye padhke baki logon ka reaction shayad mujhse alag hoga but for me it was a stupid mini proud moment when she kicked him ! I always imagine her as a brave n strong woman. Considering the scene from her point of view, yeh toh banta tha..!! 😆 love you for this, Sonu!! 😃

Yaqut-ruby.. wooah.. I didn't know before!

Yaqut ko kya maara! Tadpa tadpa ke. Itna ki finally khud usse apne katil se apne katl ki guzarish karni padi 😆 dil ko thandak pahunch gayi.

"Raz..ia Su..sultan pp...pe s..si..sirf
aa..aapka haq he M...mal...malik...Al...altun..ia" 🤣
Padke kafi time baad dobara YPM ki yaad aa gayi! They should have read this 🤣

For ch 15
My favourite line from the chpter
"ama apne nazron k teeron se hamen roz ghayal kren aap, aur zalim hen hum? jung k maidan me agr hum talwar ki jagah phool le k khade honge tab to ho chuka" 😆

he smiled at the thought and closed his eyes, trying to imagine his married life.
Just wondering if his dreams were more of wild passion or of soft romantic moments !! 😃

Romance in hamam..! Ahm ahmm...! 24 gante bhi nahi hue jab mohtarma haath mein shamsheer liye jang ke maidan mein Altunia ke khilaf khadi thi aur itni jaldi Mirza ki aashiqui ka hangover chadne laga! 😆 hamam aur jalebi yeh do aisi chizen hain jinke alzia ke saath mention hone se hi dimag kisi aur hi duniya mein kho jata hai ...!!

Originally posted by: overactor

catch up fast babes tu to bht peeche reh gai hai😆

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