Suraj hua madham Parud FF Last part-pt16 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Jasmine
oh kalaba kadhalan its really a good film
liked all the scenes you have made in your story
you have done the pics and songs so much
you are a fab writer dear
waiting for the update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting start. I hope the sister will get that feeling out of her head and respect her sister.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very Nice start
Laila is going to be the villain
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow...parud ff...I have always loved Sanaya and even started loving Ashish since siya ke ram so it is a treat to read...😃 really the girl playing Laila...I have seen her in Chkravartin Ashok Samrat and also in Devanshi.,...never knew she was in RangRasiya as well...but I love her marvellous acting everytime...the ff is sooo good , the start itself is wonderful , their marriage , romance and cuteness was a treat to read...well the wedding night was too passionate...😉 what will happen next , Laila as the villian??? But I suppose , she isn't a big villian and opposite Barun...great yaar...waiting for next episode...LOve you...be happy...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi. Your story has begun well. Eagerly Waiting for update. Different story, laila always villian
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I am really thankful to all of u for giving such amazing comments in detail.plz keep supporting me.

Suraj hua madham...The sun has dimmed...Part3 and Part4

Part-3...

Rudra wakes up from the bed.He sees Paro coming out from the bathroom in yellow saree.Her wet hair makes her more attractive.She takes the cup of tea.
P:Rudra..have tea.
He walks towards her rolling his eyes on her.She blushes.When he reaches closer to her she shakes her wet hair sprinkling water on him.He felt nice water drops falling on him from her hair.He pulls her closer in a naughty manner.
Rudra:How come you are so beautiful Paro?You are glowing.
She blushes.

He loves towards her face with his lips.She pushes him shyly.
P:I need to go to kitchen.I just made tea.I have to break breakfast too.
He holds her hand and pulls her closer and embraces her from behind.

Rudra:My dear lady love..no need of cooking.I have made arrangements to go to Goa.We will leave now and will have food at the airport.
P:What?Goa?
R:Yes..for our honeymoon.
Paro is excited:Really?I am so happy.Thank you so much.
She embraces him in excitement.He smiles.






Rudra-Paro go 2 Goa 4 honeymoon.They stay in a hotel.
RUDRA:Paro,cum out.its getting late
Paro cums out of the room.
RUDRA:sari?
PARO:ya.why?
RUDRA:no no
PARO:why?I always put it
RUDRA:ya,but we r going 2 the beach.so u cant wear this
PARO:then what shud I wear?
Rudra smiles & goes inside the room and takes a cover.
RUDRA:put this
Paro opens it.She was shocked 2 see shorts in it:I shud wear this?
RUDRA:ya
PARO:no no
RUDRA:why not?see I've also worn shorts
Paro luks at him properly:that's ok.but I cant wear such small dress.i don't wear this
RUDRA:Oh!u shud wear dresses according 2 the situation.now we've 2 go 2 the beach.so u've 2..

PARO:but...

After sumtime,
RUDRA:Paro..
Paro cums out.she is really uncomfortable with the small skirt.
Rudra pulls her closer passionately:u r luking so pretty.very hot
Paro is shy.

Parud go 2 the beach.there she see half naked foreign women.
PARO:what kind of dresses!
RUDRA:here ur dress is the longest one.so r u relieved?
Parud laugh.Rudra throws water on her.
PARO:Rudra!whats this?
Rudra pushes her into 2 the water.They both enjoy in the sea water.

They reach back.
Paro:u said,u'l take me 2 ur house.but u did'nt.actually do u hav a house?
Rudra is ruf:what do u mean?now we r in my house
PARO:that's true.this is ur family house.but I meant the house where u stay in mumbai
Rudra is angry:so u doubt.then hear..i don't hav a house there
Paro is shocked at the behaviour.



Part-4..Paro:why r u getting angry?do u get angry like this?
Rudra was ruf:yes,I become angry
PARO is upset:but its 4 the 1st time u became angry after our marriage.
RUDRA:that's bcoz of ur...
Rudra stops there and
goes 2 sleep. Paro is upset.

Next morning.
RUDRA:pack the bags.we r going 2 a place
PARO:where?
RUDRA:no question.do what I say
PARO:ok

Paro thinks:suddenly what happened 2 Rudra?always angry

Parud in the car.
PARO:u don't hav a house right?then where r we going?
Rudra is silent.
PARO:Rudra!
RUDRA:why r u always keeping ur mouth open?just close it 4 sumtime
Paro is upset:sorry.since childhood I'm like this.i talk foolish things
RUDRA:ok ok

They reach a place.
RUDRA:cum out & luk carefully
Paro who comes out of the car was surprised 2 c a house:what is this?
RUDRA:I was on the construction of a new house 4 u.4 both of us 2 stay 2gether.i was planning 2 giv u a big surprise
Paro smiles:I got scared
Rudra smiles:open the door
PARO:u do it
RUDRA:no,u must do it as I believe that only if u do that luck wil cum
Paro smiles & opens the door.they hold hands 2gether & get inside.
PARO:wow!so beautiful
Paro is surprised 2 see lots of her framed photos kept there:how did u get all this?
RUDRA:I got it from ur dad.actually I keep these photos with me as seeing these only I fell in luv with u
Paro is shy.a carries her in his arms & keeps her on the bed.

RUDRA:this is our bed
Rudra lies down close 2 her.They share a romantic eye lock.





Bhavya-Esther thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
Wow I'm d first..
going to read and cmt here..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wowowowow a big supwr cute epi... rudr angry at first... and then his surprise was awesome... paru is really sooo nuce... she didnt get angry at his rudeness... she is very cute... and the shorts scene is superb... he made her feel comfortable tats wat every wife needs... superb...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Wowww excited for dis honeymoon I hope there will be something more thn eye lock 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
Very cute. Rudra gets angry so easily and Paro handles him even more easily.

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