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arshi_sarun

@arshi_sarun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Very nice update thanks for the pm

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Navya

@Navyya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Thanks Zara for two updates & that too big ones..👏

How do I compliment you in showing so beautifully the beauty of 'mother's love'...it was breathtakingly magnificent...Paro knew ( without Dhruv telling her ) that the homework will keep playing on his mind & he wouldn't be able to enjoy the ceremony whereas despite her telling this to Myrah ,Myrah still took it easy & couldn't understand the urgency...her yoga & other stuff was more important ...this is the difference

Rudra's eyes were focused only on Paro when she was coming down the stairs with Sunehri & in my mind I could see this entire scene being played to perfection...Paro's sparkling smile spreading light like thousand stars and her beautiful silky hair complementing the elegant face & our Rudra bana being totally mesmerised by her...it was .....

Naksh & Myrah scenes you have narrated are with a great flow towards the ongoing as well as upcoming moves ahead ! Looking forward to see how it will unfold.

Fine words and natural emotions depicted in regards to showing the 'jealous' Rudra... ...excellent description of his feelings...and what always matters to me is character consistency...could imagine Rudra's reaction & expressions,lol... very well written Zara...it's a treat to read...

And at this crucial juncture I am eager to see the outcome of the presence of Myrah's parents along with Mohini's 'brilliant' plan...😆

Edited by NavyaKavya30 - 10 years ago

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Wonderful updates
Loved them
Well written
Thanks for the pm

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Arshi143143

@Arshi143143

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Thanks for the PM of these two wonderful updates Zara ..
Druv is selecting saree for her mom that's nice. Rudra is proud of his son,as what he want to do his son is doing that for paro.
Thinking is there any relation between Paro and myrah parents. Myrah father looks fond of Paro and in thinking mode.
Might be myrah mom would make myrah see the real truth that rudra in real doesn't love her. He has his love only for his first wife Paro. Feel sad for myrah, but naksh is made for myrah. So happy for myrah too!!!

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pree_28

@pree_28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Dear Zara😊,
It was so satisfying to read back to back two chapters😳 thankyou for that..
Enjoyed the celebration in house, Naksh's hum sath sath hai wala game 😆,
I could picture Rudra and Dhruv in same navy blue sherwani and Paro in pink,
enjoyed the chapters and the coming up chapter's name' are giving me happy wala feel..
😛
PS- also it would be interesting to see what role Myrah's parents play now😉

Edited by pree_28 - 10 years ago

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Member100

@Member100

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Awesome update
Loved Rudra's jealousy
Thanks for the PM

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Superb chapters 51 and 52...thanks for the PM

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Parudfannew

@Parudfannew

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Y can't I see the CH 53! So so want to read.

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603840

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Parudfannew
Y can't I see the CH 53! So so want to read.

Hi,

I don't know why you can't see the chapters I'm afraid. I've asked a few of my friends if they can see my chapters fine and they said it's fine, so I can't really understand why you and a few others can't. :( It might be a tech issue for which it might be best for you to speak to the MOD who might have a beeter idea why you are unable to see my chapters.

Sorry sis.

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