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Posted: 10 years ago
Hmmm so Rudra re-joined the BSD to protect his Paro

Crap he can't wear his uniform but I think that is the only way Paro will remember everything
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pree_28

This chapter was "MAJOR" in every sense of it..
Paro got a 'major' glimpse of her past memory with 'major' in it 😎 .
It has brought doubt in her mind also- things progressing!

Very soon 'ex' will be removed from 'Major RPR' 🥳
On behalf of Aman I did fist pump in the air.. yayy.. I was grinning reading
last lines of ch. Vk singh- 'lets see Rudra if you still have it',
Rudra-'what time do I start ?' 😎 Bring it on! Its in his blood..
( I can never imagine Rudra not being in BSD, it was part of his life.. I
never liked him seeing as body guard.. thanku for giving us this
pleasure in your story 🤗 )

PS- I love this story & I don't want you to rush it. I appreciate you
are considering readers demand but its not like there is deadline
you have to meet for updates 😛 . I can understand you getting less
time on chapters if you update frequently. I personally want you to
write story wholeheartedly to ur pleasure & satisfaction without any
pressure 😊 .I don't mind getting weekly updates, as I don't want
Any compromise with the story. & I like long updates 😳 .
(Oops I wrote so much..but its just my opinion! Hope you understand!).



Thanks so much sis for understanding. I want to take my time too, but sometimes I get frustrated a little at people picky comments making me either want to finish this story in a rush or just stop writing this without finishing. Because to be honest I'm happy and content as I know the end to my story and how it happens and the time I spend on writing this FF I could be doing something else. I sometimes wonder why I am even writing as it seems the cons dangerously outweigh the pro's of writing here on the forum. Anyways that's just my random thoughts. :P

Thanks again for your comment sis. Hope you like what's to come.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Roop_P

Simply superb👏

I am late for this response but way busy these days.
Now some last updates.
I am so obsessed with this and want to see what is store in the future for Rudra and Paro and of course Myrah.
I will talk about this girl first because she is innocent all along in this mess.She loves Rudra and she is getting ready for heartbreak for what? What is her fault in this? Rudra , I'm sorry seems to marry her just because of her same looks like Paro and now he is suffering because he has to see Paro with some one else.
All this is a BIG mess and all these lives are attached to each others. Exactly a very big mess, that rudra is finding hard to untangle himself from. The twists and turns to come will make it even more difficult for the banna.

Now Little Dhruv , he is going through with another emotional ride.Adults , put aside...he is just a kid.His wish for Mama's hug made me cry 😭 The voice of reason yes Dhruv. But the turn of events will make him happy.😉

Very emotional update

Take your time dear

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DevdasiSingh

Hey Zara,

I know it's been a long time since I've replied, but I've been busy! Thankfully, I had some time to spare and can leave a comment for you! And boy what can I say. heeyyy I haven't seen you in like forever. 😆 Hope your well sis.😳


First of all, I am loving the relationship between Naksh and Paro. They are so cute. He is so sweet to her, and a part of me just wants to pinch his cheeks! Their relationship is as cute as Aman and Paro's. Naksh and Paro are a cute pair of buddies. Naksh is particularly protective for Paro as you'll see in the coming chapters as Paro has no one of her own, in his eyes for now anyways. 😊


Okay, so anyways. I'm so conflicted when it comes to Rudra. A part of me feels bad for him because he has to live with the fact that Paro is alive and he can't be with her. I mean, not being able to be with the one you love? That's pretty much existing without really living. He has to watch Paro look at Naksh the way she used to look at him, with that sense of BSD familiarity. He wants to scream that she is his wife, have her in his life again, make her his again, but can't. That pain and rage is definitely going to come back, and I hope it doesn't effect Paro (but it probably will). That pain is definitely effect everyone in a big way, but your right some way or another Paro will feel it too.


Then again, a part of me doesn't feel bad for him. I don't know why, but I feel that he sort of brought this upon himself. And in a way he deserves to watch her be with someone else. Sounds cruel, right? But that's how I feel! He married Myrah because he felt that's what Paro wanted. I just think he's trying to justify his actions. I don't think he even really loved Myrah ever, but I also question his love for Paro because of this. I'm not saying he doesn't have a right to love anyone after Paro, but I mean...come on. No matter how much he doesn't want to admit it, I feel that he only married Myrah because she looked like Paro. Your right. Rudra is guilty of the fact of marrying Myrah when he actually doesn't love her. He married her feeling thats what Paro would have wanted which is wrong. He should have done what he wanted. But Myrah as you'll see in the coming chapters, isn't one to speak either when she says she loves Rudra...You'll see what I mean in waay coming chapters.


Now, let's talk about Myrah for a moment. What was her fault in all of this? This girl is going to have to prepare for heartbreak. She has faith in her and Rudra's love, but is there really any love to begin with? She can see him becoming so fixated on Paro, but she fails to accept it. Why? Because she knows the minute she does, her relationship with Rudra is pretty much over. Myrah's living in a bubble basically. But the difference is she's not oblivious. She deep down knows but avoids to think that way. But when she realizes her own true heart's desires, she might then be able to see her own reflection in the mirror.


And Dhruv. This boy is just going through an emotional roller coaster. First, he accepts Myrah as him mother. But then his real mother is alive. Even though he loves Myrah, his mother is his mother. It broke me when he was talking to Myrah about the hugs! He was like "Mumma's hugs feel like home." That probably crushed Myrah, even though Dhruv meant no harm by it. I was like "Awww Dhruv!" Dhruv is a very innocent version of Paro, while also having that impulsive anger like his father. A true joy to write.


Zara, you have me on an emotional roller coaster. And I simply love it. I wonder what is going to happen next. Can't wait for the next update!



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Posted: 10 years ago


Superb update...
Rudra can go to any length to save Paro...
loved the update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sis, you do not have to write a day after 80 likes . Please take your time & do it as & when it's convenient. You do not have to stress yourself to update faster. You will not hear any complaint from any of us.
Awesome chapter it was. Thank you
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Posted: 10 years ago
Rudra back in BSD, a big shout out for that.
Take your time ,Zara in updating. Do not let this noose of 80 likes hang on your head. Update as per your convenience.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Baisa, loaded thanks to you for this treat. Don't think about 80 or 90 likes. Update when you feel you are ready. Don't sweat yourself for it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yes! Major Rudra Pratap Ranawat is back. And this time around for Paro.
Mohini is hiding something. My hunch is she is responsible for what happened to Paro. She is driven by greed and is ready to go to any extremes to get what she want.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update
Loved it
Thanks for the pm

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