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Posted: 10 years ago
Yayy awesome update rudra himself is confused about what he wants to... Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
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Posted: 10 years ago
when will Rudra realize his feelings for parvathi?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suji5

when will Rudra realize his feelings for parvathi?



Rudra knows he loves Paro sis...he's just battling between his heart and head at the moment.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Another wonderful chapter from you Zara😊..

I felt you are laying some foundation for some big dhamaka in following chapters with this one😉..coz Rudra is virtually at his boiling point now...am I right?!😆

Rudra - Mohini sarcastic encounter is one which I will miss always, very well written here too..and this is the Mohini I loved in RR too, totally vicious and cunning..I let out a huge grin with Mohini's mind voice when she couldn't get through Myra😆

Poor Myra..wrong emotions ..wrong timings..tsk tsk

Now my Paro, hiding that single teardrop..God😭 ..He has been brutal with this girl..Zara when you end this story I want Paro with so much joy and glee that I forget all her pains she endured so long...Promise me u will give that to me..

Now I feel little sad for Rudra too with so many close bonding hating him for marrying Myra..Well I can only pity him but definitely won't side with him..He has to clear the mess he created..Let me see how he manages that without hurting anyone anymore..or would he?😉

God bless your writing skill 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
@Mamue Thanks for your own opinion

Originally posted by: arshi_sarun

Yayy awesome update rudra himself is confused about what he wants to... Thanks for the pm



@Arshi_sarun
Thanks for your comment sis. Actually you're right. He's confused on how to express his love for Paro in the correct way, without doing injustice to Myrah. As I have said before Rudra will be having a tough time trying to do the right thing and tell the truth, while everyone will only see facts and not Rudra's feelings first. Everyone is right in their own place, but views will shift making everyone less and less confused, but more clear to what's right and that's the truth.
P.S As the writer of this story I can confirm Rudra is not scared/cowardly. He's trying to the right thing while also staying true to his heart. Thank you.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Lily30

Loved chapter 32👏 wow wow wow👏

Thank you for the pm🤗
Rudra needs to be upfront with Myrah before Mohini does something.
I agree with the decision of VK Singh regarding Paro protection as Rudra first needs to sort out his mess.
Love the way you write😃, can feel Paro's anguish and Rudra's desperation.



Thanks very much sis! Rudra will definitely make a mess before things get better. 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..RareGem..

Things are messed up right now. Its really difficult situation for Rudra. Nor he leave Paro on this situation neither he run away from his responsibilities regarding Myrah. Devyani is so sweet. And Mohini as usual scheming her evil plans. Looking forward to the next chapter. Nice update.



Exactly. Understanding Rudra's situation exactly. *thumbs up*
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NavyaKavya30

(1) Rudra curtly; " I don't want the kids to realize too soon that their Dadi is snake...nor did I want them to learn how to talk so sweetly as you do."
Hahaha...beautiful...sarcasm at its best...another hallmark of Rudra/Mohini interaction ...BTW, did Mr. Raghuvir Shekhawat manifest himself in you by any chance, Zara ? Um..unsure who that is but I assume it's a writer. I'm just me.😆😳 Of course Rudra/Mohini is a cracer to watch😉😆


(2) It was then Paro closed her eyes only for images of Rudra to appear from earlier today. She remembered fondly how he helped catch her kite, while reassuring her it would get fixed. Those words meant so much for her heart she didn't really understand how and why.
Instinct, familiarity, hope, surrender, trust, belonging...Wow...wow...wow... ...this is more than enough to tell how Paro's soul connects with Rudra...He has always been able to come up with solutions to the problems his dear Paro has faced & this time around is not going to be any different either & Paro knows it subconsciously . Yep this is the start of Paro recognizing that she is thinking of Rudra. There will be a delevopment of this...For her to realize what this feeling is towards Rudra won't be long, but her reaction to it is one to watch.

(3) " She quickly wiped a tear that quickly escaped from the corner of her eye."
Aww,felt like hugging Paro here...wanted to give her the tightest hug possible. Paro is breaking inside but she's a strong one as you know from the past.😳


(4) Regarding Myrah's awkwardness in getting close to Rudra...hmmm...was it because deep down she knows that Rudra belongs to Paro , he is hers & ONLY hers or was it because she herself ( deep down ) doesn't want this intimacy ?? This awkwardness with Rudra was more of one she didn't know how to really approuch Rudra after so long...and now with Paro alive it doesn't feel right...Though she hasn't realized it quite yet. 😆This will develop tiny bit by bit to the realization for what she truely wants inside.


(5) Loved the last part where Rudra bangs the phone after talking to V.K.Singh sir... his frustration came out so beautifully... Thanks sis *hugs*

(6) Your updates are never enough, Zara...I always get so engrossed in them that they always seem short & leave me wanting more & more...Looking forward to the next. Thank you. I'll try to update as much I can sis.

(7) So Mohini's grey cells are going to come up with some new plan,lol...oh,how I love that...her plans have always played Cupid between Rudra & Paro...this was another thing I loved about RR...evil never succeeded , their plans always backfired ...of course with Shantanu it was different but then we all know WHY it turned out to be the way it did...sob, sob...Ahh you remember it very well that Mohini's antics will only play cupid the way we want😆😆 Remember it.

(8) "He also felt Paro's voice also telling him to listen making him hmm grumpily."
If I am not mistaken, Rudra is subconsciously behaving , keeping Paro in mind as she would like him to behave, am I right Zara ? Correct. Over the years away from his beloved Paro, his main instincts now have been molded from pure rudra, to 'what would Paro do' as it understandably would with Dhruv and what's right and wrong etc. The frustration of the real impulsive him will spark through more time to time but this time...as Rudra will use it to his advantage.😉

P.S. So V.K.Singh sir has categorically refused to let Paro be under Rudra's protection...hmmm...Why am I thinking of this saying right now " things get worse before they get better " ... as of now it seems as if the world is closing on Rudra , with NO help in sight...but...but WHY am I feeling so optimistic about the whole situation...WHY do I feel it's just a matter of time that we will have our Major Saab back in BSD...the countdown seems to have begun...You are so right I want to come through the screen and hugs you.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Fimiramak

Zara,

Last two updates; I just loved them! You are such a great writer and this story is amazing! *tight hugs* Your word means loads. Thank you!

Both updates have been so emotional. And the kite scene, I just kept reading it over and over again.Yay!

The fact that Paro is remembering parts of her past makes me very happy. I know that Rudra is waiting for that too. He would like to see it more than anything else. It is so obvious. And I think, it is only a matter of time when her memory returns. But before that, she is living her current life with Naksh & Aman. I'm really glad that Paro has Aman standing by her side. Rudra is jealous, but Paro can't stay at Ranawat haveli because of Myrah. Myrah is now the main problem. He has to speak with her, he is lying to himself and he is lying to Myrah, and that is not right. And at the same time, if this situation continues, he hurts Paro too. Paro has feelings for Dhruw and towards Rudra too. And the more she remembers, the more Rudra-Myrah relationship comes to disturb her.You're right. Bringing Paro into the house would make things very odd without a reason...and also create an emotional mess...Interesting isn't it?😉

And the conversation between Aman & Rudra was marvelous piece of writing. Every emotion was there.Thanks sis! Aman and Rudra's scenes are truely effortless. bromance all the way!

I always liked Aman, and after this convo & the way he teased Rudra, I like him even more! Yep Aman back at it😆

There was something so beautiful and eternal when Paro and Rudra walked towards the car and Paro waving to him... so pure, so innocent... Rudra also thought so too :P Haiii.

I hope you continue soon!

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