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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 29

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Just read all the three chapters.

And I am taken back with the simplicity of this story.

Loved the characters of paro and rudra.

Bookmarking already.

Will be waiting for next upd.eagerly...

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-Disenchanted-

@-Disenchanted-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Loved the updates. Thanks for the double treat.
I loved the way your words flow. I could picture the way the part of how Paro was gazing out of the window when Rudra saw her. Looks like Laila is the self assured, confident woman we saw in the beginning of the show before she lost it.
I'm glad both of them were straight forward with each other and that it was the professor who suggested that he approach Paro for tutoring and not Rudra who was looking for an opportunity. Speaks a lot about his character.
Waiting for the next update.

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Ah so he asked her to tutor him

Hmm he realized that students were being snotty towards her

Waiting for more

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Lepzy

@Leprechaun

Moderator

+ 21

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Nice updates. Sorry for the late reply.

Thanks for the PM>

Edited by Edna_Philip - 10 years ago

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KhushiParo

@KhushiParo

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Awesome chapters Alyssa.

Rudra observing Paro oops Parvathi for now and trying to figure out why she's not laughing and the behavior of others with her.

Glad he turned down Laila.😳

Still want to read more and more 😳

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bhavi.k

@bhavi.k

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

thank you for the double dose...the wait was totaly worth it...thanksss..
it was great...i wonder why parvati said no for the house...intresting intresting.. i hope u disclose her past soon...now cant wait for the next update...update soon...

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Sumayya Ejaz

@Sumayya_Ejaz

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Wao that was great paro is now tutor of rudra this is going to be fun 😉 Will wait for the next update 😊

Edited by Sumayya_Ejaz - 10 years ago

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Angel1312

@Angel1312

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Loved all the three chapters !!!!!!!!👏👏👏 Loved your description Rudra in Ch1 👍🏼 a very observant Rudra already noticing things about paro

Eagerly waiting for the next update !!!!!! Pls update soon...

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Brishti

@brishti84

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Two chapters?! 👍🏼 So Rudra is going to be tutored by Parvati. Can't wait. Loved that Rudra gave an angry glare to those staring at Parvati. I'm SO curious about her past. And Laila equals major 😡

Edited by brishti84 - 10 years ago