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aaliah3108

@aaliah3108

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

Awww !!!! u are awesome JJ... reading your RR version is so much better and gives peace to the mind and heart ...I got upset watching yesterday's episode ... Jealous Rudra did not click for me.. and if he is going to paw Myrah today and dance around in front of her own fiance.. I will barf all over the place so I shall not watch it.

Looking at how u are progressing the story, it was not difficult at all to show M as P .. the creatives just lost it and have just been taking shortcuts.

Your version is amazing and I love reading it. thanks for writing dear .. at least there is somethng to look forward to.

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zanayaforever

@zanayaforever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Lovely update..poor rudra..how r u planning to remind Myra she is paro??anxious to read dat...

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JJKKL

@JJKKL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

Some problem with page 25 !! Just checking whether new posts are visible

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_ResHma_

@_ResHma_

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#194

JJ, read chapter 8. Nice update. But I liked the previous chapters more. Don't take any offense please. I didn't find this chapter upto the mark. Too many questions. Amidst all this Rudra thinking about Kakisa, I found it odd. His sole concentration should be Paro and how to get her back.

Agree Rudra is not capable of thinking too much and most of the times act impulsively but he sure is shrewd and calculative in planning once he sets his goal. Would like to see that Rudra. Backing out and expecting Paro to remember everything just like that is not an option for him. Some drastic step from him is needed.

Again sorry. Do not take me wrong. This is just my opinion. Would like to see how have you envisaged the further track.

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JJKKL

@JJKKL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: psagars
JJ, read chapter 8. Nice update. But I liked the previous chapters more. Don't take any offense please. I didn't find this chapter upto the mark. Too many questions. Amidst all this Rudra thinking about Kakisa, I found it odd. His sole concentration should be Paro and how to get her back.

Agree Rudra is not capable of thinking too much and most of the times act impulsively but he sure is shrewd and calculative in planning once he sets his goal. Would like to see that Rudra. Backing out and expecting Paro to remember everything just like that is not an option for him. Some drastic step from him is needed.

Again sorry. Do not take me wrong. This is just my opinion. Would like to see how have you envisaged the further track.

Oh please feel free to give the feedback. Else how can I improve ? So no problems at all. I understand what you are saying.

I agree Rudra was not capable of thinking too much. But after the long call with the counselor where the latter advised him to take care of Myrah's mental health also - Rudra is scared. Scared to act. Earlier also he never took any actions. Just shouted and showed his anger. Now he is even more scared. And without Paro to guide in such a dilemma I would expect him to just sit and brood and go mad.

I do not yet have a plan for the future track in mind. Except that I know how the switch happened. Am trying to tie the pace with what is been shown in the episode.

Tying in thoughts about Kakisa in the middle was odd. Completely agree. But wanted to put it in somewhere so that I can use it later if need be. I am wondering how else it could have been done

Thanks again for the feedback. I am in fact quite happy that you put across your opinion. Will try to see whether I can address them in the future.

But please continue reading till the end.

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_ResHma_

@_ResHma_

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: JJKKL

Oh please feel free to give the feedback. Else how can I improve ? So no problems at all. I understand what you are saying.

I agree Rudra was not capable of thinking too much. But after the long call with the counselor where the latter advised him to take care of Myrah's mental health also - Rudra is scared. Scared to act. Earlier also he never took any actions. Just shouted and showed his anger. Now he is even more scared. And without Paro to guide in such a dilemma I would expect him to just sit and brood and go mad.

I do not yet have a plan for the future track in mind. Except that I know how the switch happened. Am trying to tie the pace with what is been shown in the episode.

Tying in thoughts about Kakisa in the middle was odd. Completely agree. But wanted to put it in somewhere so that I can use it later if need be. I am wondering how else it could have been done

Thanks again for the feedback. I am in fact quite happy that you put across your opinion. Will try to see whether I can address them in the future.

But please continue reading till the end.

Thanks. Ofcourse I will read it till the end and am eagerly waiting for further updates.
After all, this is the RR that we all wanted so badly and am glad that you took the initiative to put it into words.

About Kakisa part, a suggestion. You could have put across Rudra's mistrust of her when she too would have tried to bring Rudra-Myrah closer. As from the scene yesterday, she too detect something going on between Rudra-Myrah. Rudra could be apprehensive of her behavior from his past experience and also thinking that she is just trying to do it as Myrah belongs to rich and influential family.

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JJKKL

@JJKKL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: psagars

About Kakisa part, a suggestion. You could have put across Rudra's mistrust of her when she too would have tried to bring Rudra-Myrah closer. As from the scene yesterday, she too detect something going on between Rudra-Myrah. Rudra could be apprehensive of her behavior from his past experience and also thinking that she is just trying to do it as Myrah belongs to rich and influential family.

Yes. But I wrote my chapter based on Monday episode 😭 And was not sure what the CVs have in mind for Kakisa. I was just keeping my options open in case I continue writing next week also. 😉

Sent you a PM

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 37

Posted: 11 years ago

#198

Simply awesome.

Just read all the chapters till now.

Its amazing.

Sigh I wish the cvs had also carried the story a similar way.

For me its always parud all the way.

Thanks for such a wonderful story and for ur pm too.

T.c.

xoxo.

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antiquegold

@antiquegold

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#199

Dear JJ!

Lo mei aa gaya!

I read all your chapters.

I really like how you have taken the current story arc, but put your own backstory and spin on it. The main events are the same. but here is the crux:

It boils down to Shiva Parvati Sati. The CVs have taken the following stance - it looks like a duck, it talks like a duck but it is a different duck, and you have taken the stance - it looks like a duck, it kinda talks like a duck, but it is in fact, the duck!

Will Myrah have to go through a process of self realization? Will Rudra ponder over what makes someone someone as he tries to reconcile himself to the fact that Myrah may never realize that she is Paro? That he may have to accept that Paro is forever lost inside Myrah? But does not that circle back to what the CVs are doing?

I love your musings in the form of peoples POVs. I think this exercise is proving to yourself that it is not as easy as it seems. There are a lot of fault points to take care of.

And I am happy to follow you on your discovery. I think this is true characterization - they do take on a life of their own and eventually, their story will tell itself.

Please continue. And I am very flattered and honoured that you asked me for my comment and sent me the PMs.

Love and God Bless.

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eshi

@eshi.nl

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#200

JJKL awesome 👏
This is RR2.0
RR 1.0 ended with PaRud n their baby.to me RR 2.0 is this story.
Hope you don't end it after PaRud reunion. Do continue it dear 😳

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