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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh my cute Rithu...

First of all I am so so sorry for being late..plz accept my apology..got stuck up pretty bad in real life..



Now coming to update...

What a fabulous update...👏👏..I loved how you are explaining the intrinsic delicate details of their emotions..which we all missed in original RR..

I am saying again I am in love with your Mohini and Sumer version..

Now why did Mohini gave that saree for Paro to look more appealing...hmm...am I in for a cute PARUD moment ??!!!😳😳...If so I am eagerly looking forward to it as now both of them are almost clear in what they want..😉

How cute of Sumer to blurt out the news to Rudra..and am loving how Rudra stood his ground and not meeting her though his heart wants to...

Hope the whole Ranawats play their cupid session perfectly to get PARUD married before "selfish Mala" return...



How cute are the sisters Mythili and Paro...Lovely...😳😳😳...I wish i have one in real life..stuck up with brother but he is cute too😛...

Is Danveer in for a bash treat from Mohini ???😆😆😆..Looking forward...and i also loved how you highlighted that Dilsher in fact remained single inspite of his rash behavior which is one fact I loved about him in original too..
Oh how I wish to see what the CVs originally written Rithu..if we can get that info I will be so happy at least knowing the original RR will be like if not succumbed to TRPs...Again damn the colors😡

But am so happy to see that version in your writing..Thank you Rithu...🤗




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Posted: 10 years ago
Rithu,
brilliant update, actually this time I can save my comments as whatever I feel my sis Deeps already expressed.😃 Liking the way you are proceeding towards Parud's meeting.


Deeps... don't you think this is weird😡 as I'm asking you from a long time to write a letter to ST and get me the original copy of RR and now you are wishing the same instead of just asking him😲 ...😆 I'm running away ...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: KhushiParo

Rithu,

brilliant update, actually this time I can save my comments as whatever I feel my sis Deeps already expressed.😃 Liking the way you are proceeding towards Parud's meeting.


Deeps... don't you think this is weird😡 as I'm asking you from a long time to write a letter to ST and get me the original copy of RR and now you are wishing the same instead of just asking him😲 ...😆 I'm running away ...



😆😆😆 We are in fight Sis..me and ST..so letter communication till he manaovs me why he killed Paro in RR..I will forgive him if he rectify his mistake in next show if he signs Sanaya in it😉😆😆...

Where will you run??I know where to find you so don't even bother to hide...🤣🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: deepsel

<font size="2" color="#6600ff">Oh my cute Rithu...</font>

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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">First of all I am so so sorry for being late..plz accept my apology..got stuck up pretty bad in real life..</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">Now coming to update...</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">What a fabulous update...👏👏..I loved how you are explaining the intrinsic delicate details of their emotions..which we all missed in original RR..</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">I am saying again I am in love with your Mohini and Sumer version..</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">Now why did Mohini gave that saree for Paro to look more appealing...hmm...am I in for a cute PARUD moment ??!!!😳😳...If so I am eagerly looking forward to it as now both of them are almost clear in what they want..😉</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">How cute of Sumer to blurt out the news to Rudra..and am loving how Rudra stood his ground and not meeting her though his heart wants to...</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">Hope the whole Ranawats play their cupid session perfectly to get PARUD married before "selfish Mala" return...</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">How cute are the sisters Mythili and Paro...Lovely...😳😳😳...I wish i have one in real life..stuck up with brotherbut he is cute too😛...</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">Is Danveer in for a bash treat from Mohini ???😆😆😆..Looking forward...and i also loved how you highlighted that Dilsher in fact remained single inspite of his rash behavior which is one fact I loved about him in original too..</font>
<font size="2" color="#6600ff">Oh how I wish to see what the CVs originally written Rithu..if we can get that info I will be so happyat least knowing the original RR will be like if not succumbed to TRPs...Again damn the colors😡</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">But am so happy to see that version in your writing..Thank you Rithu...🤗</font>






Its fine deeps. Check your inbox.
Don't get me started on the number of things we missed, hated the TRP focussed Rangrasiya with all their laddoos and Paro killing plots.
One more Mohini Sumer moment coming up in the next update.
The saree was for Mohini's benefit, but I don't want to drag the story more than I already had. So skipped it and kept things practical. Parud moments coming up in the update after they discuss Laila.
Sumer is a bit of a clown, so made him blurt it out without getting Rudra angry.
Rudra is trying to be a gentleman and give her space to sort things out. Of course the longer she takes, his insecurities will plague him and he will end up assuming she is not interested in him.
Parud wedding will take place after an unexpected cupid intervenes, trust me you won't see this coming.
I like their sisterhood. Having a brother myself, I feel like I'm missing something special when I see Paro and Maithili.
Danveer deserves a bashng from Mohini, Dilsher and Rudra for keeping in touch with Mala. Haven't decided who will step up. Dilsher is the most loyal person on the show who honoured all his relationships even if he was a bitter drunk. That's the main reason I hated him being blackened to make a saint of Mala.
I want the original RR too. No matter what we were shown, I'm so sure Myrah would not have been a part of it.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: KhushiParo

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Rithu,</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">brilliant update, actually this time I can save my comments as whatever I feel my sis Deeps already expressed.😃Liking the way you are proceeding towards Parud's meeting.</font>


<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Deeps... don't you think this is weird😡 as I'm asking you from a long time to write a letter to ST and get me the original copy of RR and now you are wishing the same instead of just asking him😲...😆I'm running away ...</font>


Thanks Sush. I actually expected brickbats for keeping Parud away for so long 😳 .
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: deepsel


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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">😆😆😆We are in fight Sis..me and ST..so letter communication till he manaovs me why he killed Paro in RR..I will forgive him if he rectify his mistake in next show if he signs Sanaya in it😉😆😆...
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">Where will you run??I know where to find you so don't even bother to hide...🤣🤣</font>


Deeps, new show with Sanaya is not good enough. He should make a movie trilogy of RR with the original cast and original script. And while you are discussing this can you find out if Paro was supposed to be exposed to the family within 2 episodes? I was rewatching the old episodes when I realised there at so many possibilities if she was hidden in Rudra's room than have her in Sunheri's room as his fiance. I hope someone writes an FF about that.
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Posted: 10 years ago


Its fine deeps. Check your inbox.
Don't get me started on the number of things we missed, hated the TRP focussed Rangrasiya with all their laddoos and Paro killing plots.
One more Mohini Sumer moment coming up in the next update.
The saree was for Mohini's benefit, but I don't want to drag the story more than I already had. So skipped it and kept things practical. Parud moments coming up in the update after they discuss Laila.
Sumer is a bit of a clown, so made him blurt it out without getting Rudra angry.
Rudra is trying to be a gentleman and give her space to sort things out. Of course the longer she takes, his insecurities will plague him and he will end up assuming she is not interested in him.
Parud wedding will take place after an unexpected cupid intervenes, trust me you won't see this coming.
I like their sisterhood. Having a brother myself, I feel like I'm missing something special when I see Paro and Maithili.
Danveer deserves a bashng from Mohini, Dilsher and Rudra for keeping in touch with Mala. Haven't decided who will step up. Dilsher is the most loyal person on the show who honoured all his relationships even if he was a bitter drunk. That's the main reason I hated him being blackened to make a saint of Mala.
I want the original RR too. No matter what we were shown, I'm so sure Myrah would not have been a part of it.
Replied back detective Rithu😉 😆😆...hmm so laila issue is looking for closure soon..So we are pretty much left with Mala's story in this FF along with Tejawat..

Now who is that unexpected Cupid?? Will it be Nandhini??😲😳...Now my mind will be chasing all characters of RR to find out 😆😆😆..

Seriously I miss a sister figure in real life..even today I teased by parents why the heck they stopped with two kids?🤣...though I can share everything with my brother, its not like a sister especially after marriage..I am worried after my Mom, who can understand me as I have two sons only😆..

More than the unbearable acting, thats one reason I hated Mala's character more for making my beloved Dilsher black as u said..😡..

I am definite that the original story had only teju, mala, laila and of course Nandhini...and not Shantunu, Rohit & Myra
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rithureuben


Deeps, new show with Sanaya is not good enough. He should make a movie trilogy of RR with the original cast and original script. And while you are discussing this can you find out if Paro was supposed to be exposed to the family within 2 episodes? I was rewatching the old episodes when I realised there at so many possibilities if she was hidden in Rudra's room than have her in Sunheri's room as his fiance. I hope someone writes an FF about that.



If ever that happens Rithu, I will be the first soul inside that theatre to watch that movie😆😆..I think till the shivrathiri mela it was original story...after which the story went to shits..with burning dilsher and iron ladoos crap..

My two cents how the story would have gone.. (just my thoughts 😆😆)

* Paro believe Teju and go with him but with feelings for Rudra (because there is no logic for Teju to accept his crime to Paro when she trusted him blindly..so he surely could have used her later)

* Rudra furious that he need the witness to save his job goes behind them..and hates Paro more

* Then finds out she is happy with his Mom-Mala and gets furious

* To take revenge on Trio (Teju-Mala and Paro), somehow he forcely marries her despising her to the core..

* I believe Mala was indeed grey in original series so my mind still curious how they would have worked on that part..

* The great twist would be Rudra being Teju-Mala Son as it will justify Dilsher's cruel behavior towards him at childhood and Mala ignoring him completely as he was the reason for her marriage to break..and Rudra's trait certainly matched Teju in all dept😉

* Then Paro makes Jallad to Rakshak when he rescue Nandhini from across the border to believe Teju is indeed bad..and more story revolves around them..

* The story ends with the union of PARUD..


What say..I suggest you urself can write a story and I can help you out as we discussed earlier 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
@deepsel - I'm thinking of wrapping up this fanfic with Parud's wedding and Tejawat's arrest. Might do a season 2 with Parud's visit to Nandini, Mala's remorse, Sunheri's first love and Sumer's wedding along with Parud's domestic bliss if people are interested.
Start thinking about the next cupid, I won't tell you for now.
I know how you feel, brothers are fun when your growing up. But as adults your place in the world and the responsibilities don't help you connect. I know why your mom stopped with two, with two little boys of my own I can tell you, kids are not easy and more than two is exhausting. After your mom, you will have good friends and maybe a bahu like Paro or Maithili who are super sweet.
I don't understand why Mala had to be white and Dilsher black. They could have kept both grey and let the audience pick their favourite.
Shantanu is the most sensible addition come to think of it. A brother from across the border out for revenge. If he hadn't killed Paro, I might have actually liked him.
The story till the Shivratri mela is the original one except for the kidnap when Ashish was sick. Though I wonder sometimes if they rushed the wedding track as we wanted Sanish onscreen all the time going crazy with their chemistry.
Love your two cents, you should write about it. In my head, Rudra would have lost his job and married Paro. Then when Mala invites him to Tejawat's home post wedding, he goes and exposes what a crook he is, winning Paro's trust and gets his job back.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Rithu , liked the update 😊 Deepa Akka and others covered what all I wanted to say about the chapter .. so I will not bore you by repeating them .. 😊
I am very much in for your sequel of this FF as well .. please do continue to write ( the thought of this FF ending itself is quite indigestible for me 😭 ) .. so my request . do continue to write more 😊

I am happy you will be making PaRud meet in next chapter .. awating that 😊 ( I actually was a wee bit upset that they did not meet in this chapter itself .. but I understand that it is important Rudra checks his emotions and Paro understands him and herself better before they interact and end up discussing the delicate topic of Laila and Rudra- Laila relationship .😊)


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