FF: The Beautiful and the Condemned (Completed) - Page 27

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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you so much for this lovely chapter. I was desperately waiting to know how trust and relationship is growing between them . You have portrayed Paros character so beautifully . It's her radiant heart that can remove darkness from Rudras life. Her pious , selflessness character not only puzzled rudra but he trusted her. Loved the part when paro explained him that he is not a jallad but being jallad is a shield for him. And a smile on rudras face is indeed a miracle that only paro can do.waiting eagerly for the next chapter .
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey bhagwan..my heart is already broken with our RR storyline...can't stand much more..this is so heart wrenching...I'm n emotional puddle.. And ur writing style is so..simple n elegant...luv it... I can phangurl over u forever..but stopping now
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Posted: 11 years ago
u know i can actually picture ashish as ur 'rudra'. the slow tentative smile, the angst, the anger
and sanaya - ur precious paro - his light and his saviour
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww that was so sweet! Rudra has finally started opening up to paro! And she made him smile!!!!

Can't wait for the order to be given. Rudra will struggle a lot and just won't be able to do it. Aaah can't wait now!
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Posted: 11 years ago
You just had to play with my heart! It saddens me, the fact that regardless of being killed by him, she loves him. But I mean, seriously.. you're such a kind hearted writer.. you wouldn't let that happen. Imagine, just imagine with me for a second.. the various twists you can bring by keeping them alive. What if they both ran away or something or maybe Rudra kills tejawat.. ending up as his successor. I'm just spitting out examples.. please don't have our paro or rudra dying. Not even if they die together ;p
Anyways, I'd like to apologize for not being an active commentator. You know I never miss reading a chapter, but I recently I couldn't the chance to comment + I often read from my phone so.. hard to type long comments!

You beautifully weaved they're progressive relationship, surprises me how she finds shelter and safety in her once a cell. Their trust is ironic, which makes it more appealing. In the hands of her killer she finds love and trust and with the presence of his prisoner, Rudra finds happiness. arey wah. See why I love your FF so much. These little things always pop up, grasping my undivided attention.

As always, thank you for PM'ing me. Hope this comment brings a huge grin on ur face and makes you feel the love and appreciation!

This comment was for chapter 14! :)
Edited by rupao21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Pari just wants rudra 's happiness even if it mans getting killed by him
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG...!!!
lovely update...
They both trust each other...
Rudra smiled for Paro...
That was sooo cute...👏😊😃
Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ahhh I cannot deal. This is just too much . The emotions, the honesty, THAT SMILE
Plus they keep going closer to one another and cupping each other's faces!! It's so tender, so intimate, I think I might just cry ☺️

I'm so glad I have this to read especially because of the current track of Rangrasiya 🥺 I love that Paro trusts him and I love that he trusts her too, now it's just time for them to realise that they can't live without each other, then Rudra needs to kill Teju and they can be together!!

Keep these updates coming, I need this FF in my life LOL.
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Posted: 11 years ago
😳 OMG he smiled. This is such a heartfelt chapter which both sharing some more of their pasts. And the biggest revelation that both trust each other. This made me smile all the way. So next chapter huh? I can't hardly wait. Please update soon. Thanks for the PM.
Edited by brishti84 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved this chapter...building of the trust, smiles, happiness ...waiting for more

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