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Hello Dear CVs,
I know you work tirelessly to get a story together, try to weave different points etc, but I have a request:
More Paro and her perspective. You can give her some tears as well, because you know... those are always tolerable and justified- less Rudra and his back story, enough is enough since these emotions are getting irritating as hell.
Conflict, emotion, tears, angst, pain and hurt only work with Females. Not with Men. Let a man be silent. Stoic. Angry. Maybe even a bit too handsy...but don't ever let him shed a tear. Never in two consecutive episodes either- that's just disgraceful. Also, tears sitting in the eyes are very emasculating as well. I mean, I've never seen any male under the age of 12 cry. Haven't you heard of puberty? That apparently dries up their tear ducts .
Females are supposed to be the ones that can have long lectures and rants, males are not. They should openly glare, grunt and give evil eyes but no dialogue please. Unless they're doing some nok jok there is no need for them to say a word. Ever. Especially about any traumatic events. Didn't you know, your lead male is in the BSD? That alone means he has a no emotions
You promised us a passionate love story! So where are these wounds from parents coming in?! Focus on the love! Focus on the Alpha male and his submissive female. Actually no, the female can be strong right? We're allowed to break that stereotype but no other stereotype?
So yeah, can you just get to this ASAP, make him have the silent treatment for a few episodes, let his better half do the talking and people's sentiments will go back to normal around here.
Cheers,
Reeha
More Paro and her perspective. You can give her some tears as well, because you know... those are always tolerable and justified- less Rudra and his back story, enough is enough since these emotions are getting irritating as hell.
Conflict, emotion, tears, angst, pain and hurt only work with Females. Not with Men. Let a man be silent. Stoic. Angry. Maybe even a bit too handsy...but don't ever let him shed a tear. Never in two consecutive episodes either- that's just disgraceful. Also, tears sitting in the eyes are very emasculating as well. I mean, I've never seen any male under the age of 12 cry. Haven't you heard of puberty? That apparently dries up their tear ducts .
Females are supposed to be the ones that can have long lectures and rants, males are not. They should openly glare, grunt and give evil eyes but no dialogue please. Unless they're doing some nok jok there is no need for them to say a word. Ever. Especially about any traumatic events. Didn't you know, your lead male is in the BSD? That alone means he has a no emotions
You promised us a passionate love story! So where are these wounds from parents coming in?! Focus on the love! Focus on the Alpha male and his submissive female. Actually no, the female can be strong right? We're allowed to break that stereotype but no other stereotype?
So yeah, can you just get to this ASAP, make him have the silent treatment for a few episodes, let his better half do the talking and people's sentiments will go back to normal around here.
Cheers,
Reeha
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