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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Oldestfan


Lets also not forget that Paros life was turned upside down. She went through a strange kind of rebitrth, almost like becoming a different person with a completely different past. And now, now that the major has not done anthing to really hurt her since rhe pink bangles, her confidence is returning, and she is getting a little bolder, asking him more... And making grave errors, poor thing! Her restrained joy at the bangles, at his doming back for the puja, her prayers, and then more and more happiness at small things... Running out to just feel, at the thought of his thanking her, asking if she had reached, teasing her about jumping in through the window, saying she was his wife... Its all been building up, honey!

I guess then it comes down to the execution of that section. The build up must be too fast as I had to see it written to even link with how she could feel. I still think there is jump somewhere here that is inconsistent for such a reaction. I have yet to put my finger on it but I sense it being there.
Edited by puglet - 11 years ago

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