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rangprab

@rangprab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

breathtakingly wonderful... he need her desire to want him to want her... so beautifully so effortless penned...

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Meena

@chotidesi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: AngelTeen
You cannot stop there! Not after making me feel the pain of their separation, you cannot take away the joy of their reunion! Come on!

It was beautiful writing! One you could feel in your heart and wanted to just become Paro's secretary and write that letter for her! Sigh. Amazing!

I demand a sequel!

This was meant to be a sequel! 😆 It's sort of a companion to Khamoshi- Paro's view on her leaving. I'm very glad you liked it- I'm actually rather fond of this piece myself, and it's something I'm happy with as a writer.

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Sona

@sparikh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

that was heart-wrenching; Paro too chocked up to write - even finishing up his name...awww.

But he came!

-Sona

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ICanDoThis

@ICanDoThis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

So beautiful

Please please tell me there is more to cum!

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Lavender mist

@bluemoon255

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

beautiful. so glad he came. pls do write a sequel. really want to read more of this.

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

How gorgeous was that!
Choti, you write beautifully dearie ❤️

I felt so sad, then alas he came. Tell me it wasn't a dream!
Hope to read more from you.

Love
J

P. S. Can you scrap me the link to your ArHi fic?

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Maya

@What_the

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Meri pyaari choti,

Once again you touched our hearts with your beautiful words..

This was such a beautiful idea...the letters of the alphabet ...and how those few syllables of each other's names comes to signify so much to them...

That she left a piece of her with him..by tracing her fingers in the pattern of her name on him...

That she wants to be his in every way...wants his name imprinted on her...mind, body and soul...

And that he accepts the fact that her name is the only thing on his mind...as he traces it on his arm with her fingers..

Such poignant thougts...

I demand another OS...you have to write about their reunion...

I love reading your OSes...idea and execution both are so important to a story...and you are so good in both departments...

Love,

Maya

Edited by What_the - 11 years ago

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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

U wicked wicked girl! You torture us with such pathos and end it when he comes for her?? Not fair!

But beautifully written.
But badly need a sequel to soothe my heart! please with puppy face!

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