Rudra Ki Daastan - (Updating)

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Sumneet

@Zeffy

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Posted: 11 years ago

Updating, kindly please bear with me!!

Edited by zeffy2k2 - 11 years ago

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asmi279

@asmi279

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Posted: 11 years ago

Till today, I hated Rudra 's khoobsurat aurat syndrome..bt after reading this, I cn understand his mental state like never before..what he must hv gone thru in the initial days after the inc...thank u so much fr this insightful piece!

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Sumneet

@Zeffy

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asmi279
Till today, I hated Rudra 's khoobsurat aurat syndrome..bt after reading this, I cn understand his mental state like never before..what he must hv gone thru in the initial days after the inc...thank u so much fr this insightful piece!

Wow thank you for appreciating it, well they did show only bits and pieces of his flashback. Ofcourse, I had to add a little masala here and there!! Glad to know, it got you thinking!!

Edited by zeffy2k2 - 11 years ago

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DIVYA

@LetzLiveOurLyf

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Posted: 11 years ago

you are a good writer dear...👍🏼

Really loved what you wrote..amazing..😃

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Sumneet

@Zeffy

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LetzLiveOurLyf
you are a good writer dear...👍🏼
Really loved what you wrote..amazing..😃

Thank you so much for your kind words, 😃

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Sumneet

@Zeffy

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you so much for liking the post, tvluvr, -R-R-R-, asmi279, shreya_rc, LetzLiveOurLyf,

Apprecaite it.

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shutter

@shutter

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Posted: 11 years ago

I just by chance click on the Hindi link of your story and what do I see???? The impeccable Hindi gets yo into the real feel of the feelings and emotions... And you have mentioned proper timelines for each entry!!!!! WOW!!!!! 👏

P.S: Should I be translating my comment from the English translation to Hindi????? 😉

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Sumneet

@Zeffy

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shutter
I just by chance click on the Hindi link of your story and what do I see???? The impeccable Hindi gets yo into the real feel of the feelings and emotions... And you have mentioned proper timelines for each entry!!!!! WOW!!!!! 👏
P.S: Should I be translating my comment from the English translation to Hindi????? 😉

Really you read the english one first? I took more interest in the hindi version to be honest, the english translation had no thought into it, just plain word by word translation.

I guess now that I have an official 👍🏼, I should work on the aane wale parts.

Thank you for the lovely and sweet words, aakhir Mom as a Hindi teacher hone ka kuch toh fyada hua!!

Ha Ha, kyun? mhane bhi thodi thodi samaj mein aati hai angrezi.

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shutter

@shutter

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zeffy2k2

Really you read the english one first? I took more interest in the hindi version to be honest, the english translation had no thought into it, just plain word by word translation.
I guess now that I have an official 👍🏼, I should work on the aane wale parts.
Thank you for the lovely and sweet words, aakhir Mom as a Hindi teacher hone ka kuch toh fyada hua!!
Ha Ha, kyun? mhane bhi thodi thodi samaj mein aati hai angrezi.

Yeah, I found that one first, then saw the Hindi link... And since, the first discovery gets the priority, so I went ahead with it!!!! 😆

But the actual feel was there in this Hindi one...

Of course, itni shuddh Hindi ka kahi to istemaal hona chahiye naa!!!! Thaari to angrezi kamaal ki hai... par manne laga isme bhi to mhaare ko kuch bolna chahiye tha na???? Isiliye tanne pucha...😉