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tinkleby

@tinkleby

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

This is just wow!!

The attention to detail you give is just amazing. His emotions, confusion and everything else was so beautifully detailed 👏

I could totally imagine them playing this out!

It was just perfect no more no less. I totally loved it.

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samarablog

@samarablog

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

hey!i loved it...i like the fact that u kept track of their unresolved issues and wrote accordingly...serial story writer seem to have forgotten about it!

loved loved it! :)

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Maya

@What_the

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Res

Are you responding to my request from yday? I'll know when i read... 😉

Unres

Me likes! Lots!!!

It is indeed likely that Paro would think the whole Jaipur experience was a show he put on in front of his boss... So he would feel the need to convince her that he has really changed..for the better...and it is no longer a show..

I liked how you wrote about his thoughts and his own realisation and acceptance of his change feelings for her...making her wear the hair clip himself, teasing her about the mice, calling her to join him in their bed...were all such awww moments...very sweet...!

But my (s)expectations are not fulfilled choti-si baisa...so more OSes..please please please!!

Love

Maya (IF name what_the)

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Meena

@chotidesi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: What_the
Res
Are you responding to my request from yday? I'll know when i read... 😉

Haw, What_The Di, I never write such tales. What are you talking about? I'm innocent and naive like Paro before daru. 😆

This one is not of that type. But perhaps soon... 😉

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SherryGS

@SherryGS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Just wanted to go aahhh at the end. Lol. It's just how they should be. Nice job.

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Sona

@sparikh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

That was superb OS - Rudra's feelings/thinking all in the open; how he wants to give into his feelings and start his life with his Paro.

-Sona

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Absoluv

@Absoluv

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Lovelyyy...I hope that monday night onwards they do sleep on the same bed and ALWAYS end up waking in each other's arms...😉

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Maya

@What_the

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: chotidesi

Haw, What_The Di, I never write such tales. What are you talking about? I'm innocent and naive like Paro before daru. 😆

This one is not of that type. But perhaps soon... 😉

Yes...i suppose i should feel guilty at making such requests from choti, innocent, sweet little baisa...but im shameless like that..when it comes to paro and rudra..and gutter thoughts.. 😉

Perhaps soon, you say?? Sure sure...we re all waiting!!!

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Meena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: What_the

Yes...i suppose i should feel guilty at making such requests from choti, innocent, sweet little baisa...but im shameless like that..when it comes to paro and rudra..and gutter thoughts.. 😉

Perhaps soon, you say?? Sure sure...we re all waiting!!!

Done. Kar diya. Link, is in your scraps. Dedicated to you! (I can't say that it wasn't fun 😆)

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Maya

@What_the

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: What_the

Yes...i suppose i should feel guilty at making such requests from choti, innocent, sweet little baisa...but im shameless like that..when it comes to paro and rudra..and gutter thoughts.. 😉

Perhaps soon, you say?? Sure sure...we re all waiting!!!

Ohhh...waittt!!!!!!!!!

Just saw your scrap!!!!!!!!!!

Off to read now...

Edited by What_the - 11 years ago

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