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Aruni.

@Aruni.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Yay! Entwining stories - My favorite trick in the books.

What more can i say? Other than a nudge on Rudy boy 😳 to go ahead and fulfill your wife's wish ☺️

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#122

I absolutely loved it!

It was every thing i expected rudra's perspective to be, and so much more!

Loved the way you described the little traits of paro which attracted him and eventually led to him losing his heart to her...just beautiful!

Also, the guilt gnawing at his heart for the way he treated Laila and the powerful emotions he feels for Paro.. the way he alternated between those feelings, as he watched them interact...and finally the way his perception of his wife changes and he realises her inner strength...it was perfect, the way you depicted it all...

Awesome stuff!

Im upset that we have only one more story left in this series... 😭

So u must promise to write more stories after this... Ok?

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shagun-rocks

@shagun-rocks

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

i am at a loss...i don't know how to articulate my feelings after going through this...it was stupendous...that's all that i can say...i'm so glad that we have some brilliant writers like in this forum...

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Just came across your work ... read the first one as yet ...

Wrath ... it was just awesome ... you write really well ...

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Wow - that was so beautiful; Rudra feeling his Paros pain at her first time.

-Sona

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niyoti

@niyoti

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#126

I promise to come back 😃

Out of curiosity is "Pride" going to be on tejawat? If so I would love to read your take on him. Even if I'm wrong I'd still look forward to reading it. 😊

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1sarun

@1sarun

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Awesome writing. Love reading your work.

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zanayaforever

@zanayaforever

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

WOW dat was superb..
ofcourse lust can only suit rudra..
eagerly waiting for d rest..

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Anita

@neet2407

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#129

I love this series - read it first chance - you have a wonderful way with words! Looking forward to 'pride' and more from you 🤗

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Wonderful update
Rudra thoughts are so alike that of parvati. He too saw the pain in Parvati eyes n that's unbearable for him because he is the cause. He just bear the fact that he is the reason of any sort of discomfort n tension to his dear wife.
Laila's honest advice n confession will now change the meaning of love n intimacy between the too.
Waiting for the next part...

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