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The current track is kind of demeaning the female lead. Though paro is in the situation of proving her innocence in dhilshar issue. She really don't need to leave her self respect and throw her self off. Kaka Sha's plea was right. Paro was brought up with an assumption that BDS's are goons and they kill the innocent villagers. Where rudra was also in an assumption that she knows the truth of takur and she was also a traitor. He toruchered her and treated her like an animal. He was no way less in treating her so bad. They both are right from their sides.
Though Paro misunderstood rudhra it was absolutely fair and correct from her side. Rudhra misunderstood paro on the otherside. Both had equal hands in the crime. In the marriage track also paro was right from her place she want to escape from the jallad not knowing the real face of thakur. The moment she realized the truth about thakur. She immediately gave a statement against thakur and end all the problems. Rudhra was not grateful to that.
His feeling towards his fathers situation is right. But the evolution of the story is also looking too fast. Ofcourse we want fast screen play that doesn't drag. It doesn't mean the quicker evolution of the story. The quicker evolution of the story would make the life of the serial short. Realization of Paro's love for Rudhra is too early. In my opinion this track should be a revelation track of the dhilshar's attacker or proving paro's innocence. The doll part shouldn't have been revealed so soon. It should have been revealed after the dhilshar track. The evaluotion of loved could have been delayed and showed progressing slowly and the leads having confusion in the emotions that would give more opportunity to exploit the chemistry of leads more. And I loved that Sumeer part. They could have added little fun element using sumeer trying to flirt paro kind of things.
Lets assume a case the moment its revealed that the attacker of dhilshar is not parvathi.Obviously rudhra has to mellow down. And parvathi will not have the guilt. As she already declared her love for rudhra the relationship would evolve quickly. That would affect the life of the serial.
Otherwise, if the Cv's drag the revelation track by keeping dhilshar in coma for very long and bringing in daily drama between paro and rudhra again we will curse rudhra and Cv's for demeaning women and dragging the track. Everyone would get annoyed. So the love realization is too soon. This should have remained as a guilt track. Anyway at least now try to do the damage control.
I really expect the laila part to play vital role in controlling this damage. I expect the damage control soon before further more damage. These are my suggestions from my little brain.
Though Paro misunderstood rudhra it was absolutely fair and correct from her side. Rudhra misunderstood paro on the otherside. Both had equal hands in the crime. In the marriage track also paro was right from her place she want to escape from the jallad not knowing the real face of thakur. The moment she realized the truth about thakur. She immediately gave a statement against thakur and end all the problems. Rudhra was not grateful to that.
His feeling towards his fathers situation is right. But the evolution of the story is also looking too fast. Ofcourse we want fast screen play that doesn't drag. It doesn't mean the quicker evolution of the story. The quicker evolution of the story would make the life of the serial short. Realization of Paro's love for Rudhra is too early. In my opinion this track should be a revelation track of the dhilshar's attacker or proving paro's innocence. The doll part shouldn't have been revealed so soon. It should have been revealed after the dhilshar track. The evaluotion of loved could have been delayed and showed progressing slowly and the leads having confusion in the emotions that would give more opportunity to exploit the chemistry of leads more. And I loved that Sumeer part. They could have added little fun element using sumeer trying to flirt paro kind of things.
Lets assume a case the moment its revealed that the attacker of dhilshar is not parvathi.Obviously rudhra has to mellow down. And parvathi will not have the guilt. As she already declared her love for rudhra the relationship would evolve quickly. That would affect the life of the serial.
Otherwise, if the Cv's drag the revelation track by keeping dhilshar in coma for very long and bringing in daily drama between paro and rudhra again we will curse rudhra and Cv's for demeaning women and dragging the track. Everyone would get annoyed. So the love realization is too soon. This should have remained as a guilt track. Anyway at least now try to do the damage control.
I really expect the laila part to play vital role in controlling this damage. I expect the damage control soon before further more damage. These are my suggestions from my little brain.
