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niharika

@nihamrm

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Wow that was heart wrenching

very well written

I would love to read more

please do continue

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prettypri

@prettypri

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Hey very well written...would love a happy ending for these two😊

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Lavender mist

@bluemoon255

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: IAmMayFlower
What a heart touching peace of work :-)
Please continue with updates... Rudra is shattered thinking Paro is dead.. Poor thing :-(
Please bring back Paro... I would want an emotional happy ending :-)

thank you for the lovely comment. I will definitely add another chapter😊

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Lavender mist

@bluemoon255

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: SherryGS
I liked this a lot. It made sense.Sad ending but very possible. 😭

thank you for liking the story😊

Edited by bluemoon255 - 11 years ago

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Lavender mist

@bluemoon255

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Santhu.The.King
Very Well Written... Please Continue...
Love to Read More From You... and Please Happy Ending.. :)

Thank you for the lovely comment baisa. I will add another chapter with happily ending 😊

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Lavender mist

@bluemoon255

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Jaz1990
Loved it!

Thank you baisa😊

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Lavender mist

@bluemoon255

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: shreya_rc
oii bluemoon ,
buddy add the much wished happy ending wala chapter !😆

definitely baisa😊

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Lavender mist

@bluemoon255

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Hunnybunny3
This was a fab OS.

thank you baisa😊

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Lavender mist

@bluemoon255

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: _Ms.Foxy.Angel_
very heart wrenching..
plzzz post a happy ending to this too..

Thank you baisa. will add another chapter😊

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Lavender mist

@bluemoon255

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: shirinfarhaad
It was really good, very well written, could you plz add another chapter and write a happy ending. It would be nice to see how you bring Rudra's emotion once he sees his Paro alive!

Originally posted by: Cara86
I could totally see Rudra on his knees distraught at losing Paro 😭

But Please write a happy ending ... i would love to see how Rudra is on seeing his Paro 😉