OMG! The SINDOOR SCENE is freaking similar to my FF *check out*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG! 😲 i was shocked seeing the sindoor scene in RR...

It is very very similar to one of my FF on a different lead.

I am posting the scene with Rudra and Paro because i am not allowed to post any other names or links.

This FF i wrote a year back and the name of the FF was One Night Stand Part II

I definately have the link to prove it. If anybody suspects i am lieing can pm me to ask for the link 😆



A Part from the FF


Rudra thinned his lips and fisted his palm, making his own nails dig painfully in his palm.

He walked angrily and pulled Paro along with himself and took her in his romm. He threw her inside and pinned on the cupboard.

Paro i was now very nervous. She very well knows that when he is mad she starts forcing himself on her.

"LOOK UP!!" he growled.

"I SAID LOOK UP". He screamed.

"What do you think you are trying to do, haan?


"Yeh kya natak hai Parvati?


what are you trying to prove?


He looked at her maag and pointed her finger towards it.


Why didnot you remove this bloody stain?


You think you are very smart?


You think you try to act all bichari and then gain sympathy?


You think by coming close to Gul (his daughter) you will impress me? How cheap and middle class mentality Parvati? Well, what else can I expect from you?

Parvati was struggling in his grips trying to move him away from her. She was again getting hurt by his words.


"You slept with me despite of having a boyfriend.You dont even look worried for him. I have never heard you talking about him. Kya ho tum? How can you remain so carefree when your loved ones is dying?


Paro shot a look towards, her tears beaming out from her eyes. "How could he think so cheap of me?" she thought.


"So is this some kind of a web that you are trying to put around me? Parvati, dont you dare think that i will fall onto you web. And keep this innocent seducing tactics with you. This is not going to work on me".


With that he wiped the dried blood-stain from her forehead. Paro was too shocked to say anything before he wiped it off. But when he did that she retreated back in anger.


"Who are you to ask me this Rudra ji? Do I owe you any explanation? Why do you think I am answerable to you? firstly I have never tried to seduce you, secondly I slept with you because (she gulped the lump which formed inside her thoat) because I had to save my pulkit's life and only my only option was you, isse aap meri durbhagya hi samjhiye (my bad fate)


"How dare you talk to me like that?", he dug his finger in her skin. He jerked her more towards the cupboard making it shake and everything started falling which was kept above the cupboard. A metal bowl fell and hit khushi's forehead just near her mang making her forehead bleed yet again. Her forehead was filled with her own blood in no time and she yelled in pain.


Rudra saw the blood and immediately released his grip on her.


Before she could hold her forehead he pressed his hand on her forehead just near her mang to stop the blood from coming out.


"Shit! You are bleeding Paro!"


Paro just stood looking at him, her pupil still on his eyes, her heart racing yet again.


"Paro!" he jerked her a little

"Paroi!" He jerked her again


She lowered her eyes and held his hand, which pressed her forehead and slowly started removing.


Just then Rudra understood her silence. It could he her blood this time but the very fact is he spread that blood with his hand this time in her entire forehead unknowingly.



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Posted: 11 years ago
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i have read this... i have read this... before, from before time... you are that who wrote this!... Wow... u a bloody ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sara_in

i have read this... i have read this... before, from before time... you are that who wrote this!... Wow... u a bloody ⭐️


thank you 😳
Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Yeah I remember the scene😉
Love this FF so much.
You changed it to Paro and Rudr kya?😡😆

Congo shongo Appy kakisa :P
Edited by KeerthuKiarshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: KeerthuKiarshi

Yeah I remember the scene😉

Love this FF so much.
You changed it to Paro and Rudr kya?😡😆

Congo shongo Appy kakisa :P


abey i cannot post with the other lead here amma 😆 visha will throw my out 🤣
Posted: 11 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: appy_indy-KD


abey i cannot post with the other lead here amma 😆 visha will throw my out 🤣


I know that Kakisa. :P
Visha is too strict na? Then let her be Kakisa and you be Maithli jeeja :P😉😆

What the hell :/ Amma? Kaun amma?😡

Main toh Paro baisa hoon :P😆

Waise we both have the colour of sindoor in your Usernames 🤗
Edited by KeerthuKiarshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: KeerthuKiarshi


I know that Kakisa. :P
Visha is too strict na? Then let her be Kakisa and you be Maithli jeeja :P😉😆

What the hell :/ Amma? Kaun amma?😡

Main toh Paro baisa hoon :P😆

Waise we both have the colour of sindoor in your Usernames 🤗


nahi nahi visha and dts are doing their job an i have no intension of breaking the rules 🤣

maithili nahi tumko masi nahi banna hai kya?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's really nice to read... may I know witch Drama is that one. If you don't mind... What is the meaning of FF. Please let me know
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sivanayani

It's really nice to read... may I know witch Drama is that one. If you don't mind... What is the meaning of FF. Please let me know


pmed you 😳
Posted: 11 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: appy_indy-KD


nahi nahi visha and dts are doing their job an i have no intension of breaking the rules 🤣

maithili nahi tumko masi nahi banna hai kya?


Matlab? OMG!!!! ARE YOU PREGNANT??????????????? LOL😆

Haan banna hai mujhe maasi :/ so you be Laila🤣 K?😉

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