PaRud SS :: The Love Story Part 3 up PG(4) (07/03) - Page 4

U write so beautifully...
Loved the 3 parts thoroughly
Loving this possessive Rudra
Eagerly waiting for the next part :)

OK. Like you said before this was going to be similar to one of your arshi stories so I wasn't going to read it but now you have changed the whole of chapter 3 I must say I am intrigued to read more.

hey nice concept yaar but u didnt give rudra s occupation plz give it clearlly

Mesmerized by Parvati's beauty, Rudra couldnt stop himself and went to her house. SLEEPING BEAUTY ... he saw the angelic face, soundly asleep.

Ghar tak gaya is fine... besarmi ki hadh hove h ! Choro, bawalo ho go tho, bee ki sundarta dekh k, kuch bhi koni soojhi ? aiyan hi parvati k kamr m khidki s ghus go ! ( sorry this part written in marwadi - rajasthani )
( translation... Besharmi ki had hoti hai ! He became mad seeing her beauty, without thinking just entered Parvati's room thru the window ?! )

Not only that, Rudra sat down next to her and slowly rubbed his fingers on her cheeks ! Koi bhi chori ghabra toh jaasi naa... Ik choro itni raat m bee k room m bee k ito kareeb aa k baith jaav ! Rudra felt hurt when a scared Parvati went to the corner away from him !

Whats your name ?...I want food... I am hungry ?! ... What the hell... Did he come near her to eat food ?!

Wow ! That was some guts Parvati showed ... Brought food and gave him to eat ! How innocent he looked, like a child while eating ! She thought... Then let him go out through the same window..!

Whats wrong with you girl, a stranger enters your room, instead of shouting for help or hitting him unconscious with something, you go ahead soberly, quitely and bring food for him ! Shivji bachhae Parvati ko !



sorry just read chapter 2...So commenting now

So Laila comes into picture now... Aa gi daayan ! Rodo atka n !

Parvati got lost in the mela and wondered far away. Some men started learing at her beautiful form. Poor guys, they didnt know that a person wearing a black kurta... Rudra was always there to protect her from prying eyes. One warning and folding up of his kurta sleeves made the men scurry away afraid of facing consequences.

Why does Rudra wear Black... While playing cricket, when he went into Parvati's room and now standing infront of her as a protector ! What does he do ?!

Laila O Laila, 8 long years and you are still waiting for a response from Rudra ! ... Sorry wait karna is your destiny, as Rudra toh Parvati s pyaar k r h ! ... Tere haath nahin lagne wala ab !

loved it...!!
read it in one go..!!

Beautifully written. Look forward to reading more from you!😊

I have read this Story in Lets make a movie competition, this story was between Sujal and Khushi, and you have written it on Arshi too?

hmm so Rudra is living with Laila

now he is fascinated with Paro

Ermmm... is anyone still interested in reading this story??🤔