PaRud FF The Last Leaf-Chapter 3 updated NEW (22/2/2013) page 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb start!!
Can't wait to read more!!
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Very promising!! Would love to read more!
Posted: 11 years ago
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Good start.👏👏👏
Continue soon.😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice prologue..!!!!
pls pm me..!!!!!
i m reading ur arhi stories too.. pls accept me request..!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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chapter 1 updated on page 1😃
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Awesome story !!!
Continue soonish & I have sent you a buddy request
Plz. accept it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks for the love guys! will continue😃 soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER 2


aman silently nodded as the jeep drove across the lanes...

Meanwhile in Rudra's house the door to Paro's room flew open as Paro looked up fear in her eyes and her body trembling as she asked " lailaaa"

" parooo" laila exclaimed surprised to find Paro here... She rushed to her as she went on her knees beside a shattered paro " they told us BSD walo had taken you captive after killing your husband " laila's words trailed into silence as Paro looked at her letting her tears flow

A confused laila held a broken Paro in her hands as she let her cry.. all the pain.. all the silence broke away in the tears that stained her cheeks as she clutched Paro's sleeves her hands caressing her hairs trying to console her

After a few seconds paro broke the hug looking at Laila " but how are you here? did that Rakshas captive you also?" paro asked innocently as Laila looked around " rakshas... whoo?"

" woh ... RUDRAAA" paro said regrets filling her voice as laila broke into Laughter " haa... RUDRA PRATAP RANAWAT " she said in between as paro moved a step back " you are not a captive...

Laila got up still laughing as she filled a glass of water and gave it to a confused paro who hesitatingly took it

" haan captive i am for RUDRA... but not like you " she said letting her smiles to rest

" means.." paro asked confused again

" leave it you wont understand " laila said brushing the question aside

Just then the door flew open and Rudra walked in

Laila ran her hands into her fringes in the hair as she walked near him with a seducing smile and before she could place her hand son him his voice made her halt in her steps " LAILAAA"

The voice sent a shiver down Paro's spine as she clutched the sides of the skirt and Laila exchanged her glances between the two

Rudra threw a bag on the corner of her room near Paro's leg as he spoke his voice stern and cold " this is your dress... Till you accept the truth you cant leave this place... going out to live or being ehre to DIe.. your choice " he said As paro looked at him her eyes widened " How many ever times you ask i dunno anything... you have already taken everything from me... My life is all that remains" she said with disgust

Before she could speak further Rudra had walked towards her and grabbed her by her shoulders making her wince in pain " nobody talks like that to RUDRA PRATAP RANWAT... understand" he screamed so hard that the tears in her eyes stilled in place as she stared into his... his hand tightened around her as Laila rushed to pull him back



" rudraaa rudraaa... her hands are bleeding... she will die..." laila pleaded holding his shoulders



" let her... anyway she is of no use being alive " rudra said as he let go of her with force as she fell to the ground few inches from hitting the wall



" come with me... i am telling you na " laila said her hand in his as Rudra removed her hands swiftly " i brought you here to ensure she does not escape or die... not to control me ... " rudra said fiercely as he stormed out of the room with laila following him as she closed the door behind her



Paro clutched her skirts as she brought her knees close to her chest and saw her hand which had his hand prints hurting her even now



" RUDRAA " laila said as she saw him sit on his bed rapidly breathing and clenching his fists



as she came near he looked up " how many times i have told you not to act like a wife to me... neither or you neither will you be " he said curtly as she pouted her lips " i din come here to ask why you did this... you forgot to get me my dresses" she complained as he looked up annoyed

she wrapped her hands around his neck as she said " if i was your wife i would have had my dresses here..." and she smiled as he pulled her hands down and walked out of the room



RUDRA PRATAP RANAWAT.. haan i am not your wife and will not be... but a small correction.. you never had a wife and you will never have " she imitated like him as she smiled to herself folding her hands

SHe opened the door to paro's room and with the sound paro looked up shivering and crumpling against the wall



Laila smiled as she closed the door and placed the tray she brought with her aside



she sat next to Paro as she lifted her hand asking for hers



As paro shivered moving back laila pouted her lips " oh .. o... I am not Rudra the rakshas...i just brought you medicines... " she said as she voluntarily pulled paro's hand and started painting the medicine over her wound



As paro oberved her taking care of her wound she slowly asked " I din know you were married to him"



Laila smiled again " married... to him... never.. RUDRA PRATAP RANAWAT never had a wife and will never have a wife " she said as Paro looked up suprised



" then who are you to him " paro asked innocently as Laila twisted her lips a pang on unknown pain hitting her as she changed the topic "his holds are terrible... very painful na" she said as Paro broke into tears again " not more painful than seeing my husband shot by him"



Laila knew she was right but she also knew Rudra never goes wrong...



" PLzz tell him to leave me.. i know nothing " paro pleaded as Laila looked at her " there is nothing i can do more than this " she said as she bandaged her hands and started cleaning the room around



TO BE CONTINUED!!

SO finally after a long time i am back! hope you liked the update! do drop your views if your liking the story!😳


thanks to all of you reading liking commenting and supporting!😳

Edited by coolbakes_PaRud - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Lovely story. Started reading just now. It's quiet different from the show and interesting.
Don't be disheartened by the number of likes and comments, since it is a new forum, it will take some time. You will get your share of likes and comments don't worry.

Please do continue the story
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
i loved it!
awesome banner..
amazing updates.👏😛
do continue ..

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