baGyaan: Meri aarzoo kamini, Mere khwab bhi kaminey

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Paro opens her eyes
The thought of Rudra leaving her bed makes her petrified
She screams and shouts
Paving way for the evil doc to finish the job

Major and doctor have a war of words
As to who understands better Paro's wants😳
Vijayanthi is the name of the nurse
The south Indian accent looks so forced

If background music wasn't enough
Paro decides to sing THE song
If this was the Roadies audition
Even Raghu would also have felt bad at P's condition

Ananya Khare plays the role of chachi
The name is Mohini and she's not a kamini
They have 2 sons Samrat and Sumer
So much for the unwanted details

Rudra ke naam se chachi go lagi mirchi
Point to be noted is that she's also his masi
She goes one step further
Rates the bichoo higher than Rudra

Even when sleeping R keeps his hands on his gun
I always knew boys were proud of their stuff
Evil doctor ne kiya mission accomplish
Only to meet R's chokeslam

That's what happens when hospital stuff is all over the place
Trolleys, vessels and scissors help the chor sipahi game
Stabbed but not out-Rudra saves the day

Paro begins her demands ki list
She wants new kapde
Coz all the fluid exchange have left these gande
She also says no more Rudra
But that's the first rule-there's a yes behind a girl's refusal

Aaj ka gyaan, medicine ke naam
When killing the patient make sure evil laughter is without a sound
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Last line 🤣
U r an amazing writer!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You're so good at this!!! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I salute your creativity :D I would like to reply in poetry but i suck so il leave that to you LOL Really enjoy your posts :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Whoaawww man!!!
Wonderful post! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bagwati.

Paro opens her eyes

The thought of Rudra leaving her bed makes her petrified
She screams and shouts
Paving way for the evil doc to finish the job

Major and doctor have a war of words
As to who understands better Paro's wants😳
Vijayanthi is the name of the nurse
The south Indian accent looks so forced

If background music wasn't enough
Paro decides to sing THE song
If this was the Roadies audition
Even Raghu would also have felt bad at P's condition

Ananya Khare plays the role of chachi
The name is Kamini and she's not a kamini
They have 2 sons Samrat and Sumer
So much for the unwanted details

Rudra ke naam se chachi go lagi mirchi
Point to be noted is that she's also his masi
She goes one step further
Rates the bichoo higher than Rudra

Even when sleeping R keeps his hands on his gun
I always knew boys were proud of their stuff
Evil doctor ne kiya mission accomplish
Only to meet R's chokeslam

That's what happens when hospital stuff is all over the place
Trolleys, vessels and scissors help the chor sipahi game
Stabbed but not out-Rudra saves the day

Paro begins her demands ki list
She wants new kapde
Coz all the fluid exchange have left these gande
She also says no more Rudra
But that's the first rule-there's a yes behind a girl's refusal

Aaj ka gyaan, medicine ke naam
When killing the patient make sure evil laughter is without a sound



Majjedaar kavita sunayi, bagwati sa. Parwati feeling pride and hum bhi!! 👏

Mharo fave lines...saare ke saare...but in bold 👏 👏... Too good sa!!





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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was wonderful!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you😳

Originally posted by: sushk123

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U r an amazing writer!

The doctor's evil smile made me miss Thakur sa more..nobody can beat his

Originally posted by: DiyaS

You're so good at this!!! 😆

Thanks ya=)

Originally posted by: -happilyunknown

I salute your creativity :D I would like to reply in poetry but i suck so il leave that to you LOL Really enjoy your posts :)

aww..thank you😳
i'm not really a great writer like some of the other members..so I just hide my inability by using Hinglish in the poems=D

Originally posted by: JazzyMohd

Whoaawww man!!!
Wonderful post! 😃

Thank you JM=D

Originally posted by: -miss-teeq-


Majjedaar kavita sunayi, bagwati sa. Parwati feeling pride and hum bhi!! 👏

Mharo fave lines...saare ke saare...but in bold 👏 👏... Too good sa!!




Thanks Miss-Teeq!
Paro Sa feels proud! *faints in her style*😆


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Brilliant post as usual...👏
looking forward to see Chachi's two sons...the daughter in law is very bholi 😆 don't know what torture Chachi will do with Paro 😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome!! Kya poetry hai!! Loved it!!
Stabbed but not out Rudra- he seriously is like the cat with nine lives..


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