Rockerchic thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#1
No. They were burning them.

I had to stop them.

Maasa and Bapusa, they can't be gone.

I had to stop them.

They would burn.

But I'm so cold.

I had to save them.

I can't breathe.

I feel like I'm falling and there's no one to catch me.

It hurts.

It hurts so much.

But it's still so cold. And I'm alone. All alone. Falling.

They were burning. They were gone. Gone forever. Alone. Forever.

Then I hear a voice. Just one.

Shhh.

Then there's warmth. Abrupt and engulfing warmth. I'm not falling any more.

Someone's caught me. I can feel a heartbeat against my own.

Someone's taken away the darkness. I feel it, a calming pressure on my hand pulling me away from it.

Just for a moment, I feel no pain.

- RC.

A short, first person perspective of what transpired today.



Edited by Rockerchic - 12 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

11

Views

2.3k

Users

7

Likes

84

Frequent Posters

-WalkThatWay- thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#2
So poetic...love the way you write



Always there for each others turmoil knowingly and unknowingly..that's what destiny holds for them
Rockerchic thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#3

Hugs abound🤗

And kisses.

And mustache turnings.

And butterfly catchings.

And the-closest-we're-ever-getting-to-sex bed hugs.
GeoS thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#4
Just for a moment, I feel no pain.


beautiful.
Sidda8 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Thanks for this beautiful poetic piece.
Rockerchic thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: m_zaks

So poetic...love the way you write




Always there for each others turmoil knowingly and unknowingly..that's what destiny holds for them


Thank you. 😊

He's her protector, grudgingly yes but protector none the less.
Rockerchic thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#7
🤗
Rockerchic thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: GeoS

Just for a moment, I feel no pain.


beautiful.


Thanks. ❤️
Rockerchic thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: GeoS

Just for a moment, I feel no pain.


beautiful.


Ah ha! your DP is that exact instant!

Thanks.😊
rafaya1 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#10
loved it.. nice peom ! hey u write good ! He is her protector and the way she calmed down !

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".