Parud SS: Somewhere Beyond Unreachable *Chapter 2**IMP NOTE ON PG14*

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.LiveLaughLove.

@.LiveLaughLove.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Yayyy! I'm the first to comment on your first chapter... 😃😃

This FF has amazingly started and am sure that you'll rock with this story! This was an awesome chapter. Loved it... Try to make your updates longer. And it wasn't at all boring. I would like to see how the story will unfold. Can't wait to read more of this! Please continue ASAP. Take care! ❤️

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Prabz

@Pribz

Sparkler

+ 16

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Congratulations for starting a SS and for posting the First chapter👏

Really liked the starting of the chapter its just a mystery of who she's going to sit next to 😆😉

but no really it was a good read :) loved it 👍🏼

My only complaint is make the next chapter longer and update quickly 😳

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Mahnoor

@Ssmmnnaa6

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Its good. :) update soon n thanx for pm

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custodian75

@custodian75

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Very nice start. Quiet different. Waiting for more.

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Tacker_Holic

@Tacker_Holic

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Though I don't watch the show girl I will read this SS just for you! A superb start...it wasn't boring at all infact you kept it to the point and it was gripping cant wait to read more! ❤️