Short OS#6: Inevitable pain!

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Holla RRians! This is my second OS in this forum. Hopefully you all will like it 😊 It's the same as yesterday's episode's mirror scene. I was bored so thought of writing this short OS. Please leave your likes and comments.

Inevitable Pain!

It's been hardly few hours that she got married to Varun and now she is his widow. She wondered how can her luck be so bad. The BSD officers have snatched away everything from her. First her parents then her best friend Bindi and now her husband. She cried her out. She was now in the BSD's custody. Locked in the interrogation room. She laughed at her bad luck. She couldn't even share her pain with her dear ones. Life had made a mockery of her life. Her pain was inevitable. On top of that no one was beside her and it was really hard for her to keep the pain buried in her heart.

On the other hand Rudra who had always buried his pain in his heart since the age of 14 year. One of the martyr's mother had blamed Rudra for her beloved son's death and had also cursed him that his mother will abandon him and won't even be there when he dies. What an irony! His mom has already left him when he was kid. For him his pain was the greatest and no one would even understand it. And it was true. Whoever knew about it they made fun about it. His dad was so upset and engrossed in his own grief that he could never give Rudra that much time.

Both of them had their own problems and were sad but seemed like destiny wanted these two to meet. Rudra leaned his head on the mirror set in his cabin and cried his heart out. His eyes were closed and pain was evident in his face. That same time Paro came in the same place from the other side of the interrogation room and also leaned her head and cried. Probably it was their pain which connected them with each other.
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DN2012 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice OS.
Short and sweet..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow wat a lovely os...u r so good at writting🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vari3241

Wow wat a lovely os...u r so good at writting🤗

thanks dear means a lot to me 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very emotional os so sad both having their own set of pain amazing os thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Brilliant yet very emotional and painful one shot,

Written exceptionally well and a brilliant read,

Emotions and anguish was described and addressed perfectly,

Amazing writing,

Thanks for the PM xx


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi mally nice os , 1 request pls write a ss based on current situation as a regualr reader iam asking this pls dont mind
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinaya123

Hi mally nice os , 1 request pls write a ss based on current situation as a regualr reader iam asking this pls dont mind

I will write one as soon as I get time 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great Os
Describes their pain & situation really well

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifully written...Awesome...thanks for the PM

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