YEH PYAR HAI(ss) pt 10 pg 24 jan 20 - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Saranya1990

Superb yaar... continue soon...



thanks a lot saranya...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shonai

Nice Update. love caring Shaan and irritated Khanak.👏👍🏼

Sanju already started flirting with Shaan. I'm sure we'll get to see more of Jealous Khanak in coming updates.😉

Thanks for updating and for the PM.😊

Take care.😊

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Priyasree



thanks a lot priya ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi friends..first of all Wish U all a Very Happy New Year... how r u all.. i am fine..sorry for not writing ..i was really busy..when i thought of writing my system made problems after it came alright current gone..when everything was alright personal problems and so on..sorry yaar... i will try to finish this ss...sorry for not replying r telling any messages..sorry guys..hope u guys understand...


pt 10

sanju : is that urbike...

shaan : ha...

sanju : its really good...i like this color...

shaan : umm..(smile)

sanju : and i like to tarvel in bike a lot...(smile)

khanak was damn shocked on wat sanju told...

khanak thought omg...wat a big liar...just now she said she hates bike travelling..

but now...within a second she is changing color...

tanvi : k..u told me u will make cake na...

khanak came back to real world...

khanak : ha...

shaan : khanak u cook..(with a broad smile)

khanak just looked at him no starred at him...her mind he has a cute timple na...

his smile..wow he looks handsome...

sanjana : ha..she loves to cook...

khanak came back to real world...

sanjana : she tries to make different items...

shaan : oh cool...i love to taste different varities...

sanjana : wat a match she likes to taste different items and she even tries it at home...

my nanai used to say the guy who is going to marry her is really lucky...

shaan in his mind s i am reallly very lucky to have her...

his face with full smile...khanak saw his face...she thought his eyes r sparkling...

wat is he thinking..damn why should i bother this...

khanak turned to walk inside...she stopped she turned around and saw

shaan was seeing her only and her sis was talking nonstop to him...

khanak : sanju come here and help me out..(stern and stick voice..)

sanju : umm.. i am coming...

sanju : ok shaan we will talk later...

she walked towards khanak...

sanjau : why di...i was talking to him na...he was really cute...

khanak : i saw that come and help me...(stern look..)

sanju : okay...

call came for shaan he talked in it watching khanak

entering the house..khanak felt he was watching her...

later khanak was busy in making the cake...kids went to do the work...

sunil and sharma vidhya and madhavi went outside ...

khanak took the cake and went and placed in the dinning hall...

khanak : okay now cream...she went again to the kitchen...

sanjana was coming from her room while talking in her phone...

sanjau : ha..ha he is really very handsome...s..s...(with a smile)

sanju : hey i will call u later...

sanju : hey shaan where have u been...

shaan : went to get some important things...

sanju : oh...

shaan : wats the smell...umm...its ...

sanju : its cake...di has finished i think so...

a smile appeard on shaans face...

shaan thought wow my angel cooks really very well...i have to taste it now...

sanju : there it is...

shaan looked around khanak was not there...cake plate spoon and knife was there..

sanju cutted a piece and placed it in a plate

shaan looked around the dinning hall..there were two beautifull paintings...

shaan : the paintings r really beautifull...where did u buy those...

sanju : we did not buy..di's work..she draws very beautifully...(while cutting a piece...)

sanju : here it is ...taste it...

shaan : umm...its yummy...

sanju: come here i will show some more of her works...

she took him to khanaks room...

sanju : its khanaks di room...

shaan entered the room ...he looked around it was very beautifull...

its like shaans room...black and white ...in the walll some of her childhood

pics were there...shaan saw those and his mind damn she is very beautifull...

while sanju was searching for khanaks drawings...

while khanak came out from the kitchen iceing pipe with creams init...

khanak : damn...who cutted the cake...

she saw sanjus phone was there...

khanak : sanju where r u ...(shouted)

sanju : i am in ur room di...(shouted)

khanak quickly went to her room...

khanak : why do u cut the cake...(opeing her bedroom door...)

she was stopped...shaan was standing with the plate...

shaan : uhh...its nice...

sanju : i only cut the cake...sorry di...

khanak : oh...

he was about to keep the plate down..

khanak : sorry ...u eat..if u eat it with this cream it will be rich...

khanak quickly went near him and started to put cream in his plate...

khanak : now u eat...khanak was shocked...

because she was standing very close to him his face was very near...

she can fell his breath on her face...his eyes were sparkling...

he was smiling...they were starring at each other...

sanju : hey i found out...

they both came back to reality...khanak quickly moved few steps back...

sanju was taking a notebook from khanaks cuboard...

khanak felt very nervous...as for her sense this was the first time standing very close

to a boy...her heart was rasing fast...

shaan : khanak...

khanak : uh...(looked at him..)

shaan : its reallly yummy...i love it...(broad smile)

khanak : thanks...(small smile)

sanju : shaan here look at these...

shaan quickly finished the cake ...

khanak : u want another one...

shaan : umm ya sure khanak..(broad smile)

khanak went and brought another piece of cake for shaan...

sanju was sitting near shaan in her bed and showing the pics...

on seeing that khanak did not like that...

from outside sanju mom was shouting ...phone for u sanju...

sanju : one minute shaan...she ran out...

khanak extended the plate to shaan...

shaan got it with a smile...she starred ar him...wow his smile his eyes..

its tellling something...wat it is...

shaan : i love u..

khanak : uhh...wat...

shaan : ummm i love it...(showing the plate with cake)

khanak : oh...(her mind okay move outside...her heart no...i wont go..

she was standing there itself...)

shaan : ur drawings r very beautifull..especially this one...

shaan showed her, her paintings...

khanak : hey thats my favorite...(with smile and quickly she composed..)

shaan just smiled at her...

shaan was looking at a picture..he was rotating and roatating...

khanak saw that she quickly sat besides him...

khanak : shantanu like this...

she helped her in viewing the pic...

khanak : is it nice na...(smile)

there was no sound...she turned her head and saw shaans face was near

her face...their hands were crossed with eachother and holding their hands...

its like hugging and they were holding each others hand...

they both were starring at eachother...his breath was caressing her face...

he was looking at her very passionately...she was hyptonised by his look...

she was out of this world...they heard sanjus voice outside...

they came back to reality...with sudden movement of khanak all the pics fell down...

they both bend down to take the pics...

her hands were really cold and she was tensed...

sanju: hey wat happened...

shaan : while looking the pictures all fell down...

khanak : sanju..u pic these i will come...

khanak went outside to the kitchen...she poured water in a glass..

and she drank a little...and she was holding it in her hand and thinking...

damn why did i sit close with him and that to in that position...

damn why i fell nervous...i can feel his colonge on me...his eyes...it was

shaan : khanak...

khanak turned and saw shaan was standing...no he was coming towards her...

khanak : wat...

shaan : water...(he was standing near her..)

shaan holded the glass from her hand and he took from her and drank it...

khanak : ahh...standing still...



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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it di!!! 😊 Khanak is talented in everything..From cooking to art..And Shaan so love her..She falling for him unknowingly.. 😳

Looking forward and thank you for writing an awesome update di..😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
Niki lovely update
Shaan loved everything that Khanak does. He likes her cooking and her paintings.

Loved the way Khanak lost herself in Shaan's handsome features, sparkling and passionate looks at her.

She didn't liked Sanju near him.

Loved the way Khanak served cream on Shaan's cake, helped him in seeing her paintings and lost in each other and how she felt nervous with his nearness and in other way Shaan wanted be with her.

Waiting to see When Khanak realises her love for Shaan,
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update... happy tat u updated aftr a long tym...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update Nikki 😊
so now khanak also has started thinking about him
hope they come close soon
i thought she will shout on cutting of a cake but its was opposite
i like it
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
yaayyy niki is back :D
love love love the update :D
khanak falling for shan is started yayayaa hehhee
update soon :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
Khanaks falling for shaan yayyy
Welcome back babe and dont worry i understand :):):)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow superb update niki...loved it...
missed u very much...hope everything is fine now...take care dear!!

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