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souryadeep

@Sanaya-hi-Rani

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

everyone misses the old rbo days manita

and you are synonymous with this forum

this is just proved by your aweinspiring writing which made me fall in love with it in the very first update

only you and aditee can write so well

(not that the others cant write well but their style is a little different)

you already have 32 likes waiting there and more to come

so please post the next part soon

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Manita

@-Manita-

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Heartfelt thanks for reading and responding to this attempt at writing a short story :)))

The following 32 member(s) liked the above post:

pooja.88, ONAego, Love_kryran, sweetcharvi, -Paridhi-, Alka88, vishalipoornima, ktymfan, virika-deewani, virika01, kp_yasharan, priyani143, ktym, aasma1, shonai, maneesha28889, diyak, heer_85, jaisyjazz, chandu8881, niki_rbo, k.krithika, nk.mail, DiehardYMfan, IF_rida, janavi07, -pranjal-, khushboo2006, Roshni_M, shalini_s, RB81, Deepali88,

Thank you sooo much !!!

@ aasma - I'll complete all FFs...don't worry,...I won't discontinue any of them.

@ Shilpa - @ your PS - 😛...To be honest, Shills, writers don't want to ditch anyone. It is the other way round. What do you do when no one reads, comments, interacts and gives feedback ? The writers work hard and feel ditched. This tale is written for IF...so I will definitely post it here...and will continue here, as long as people keep reading :))))))

@ Pranjal - your analysis gives a finishing touch to my update...I'm so used to looking forward to it...the aatma emoticon is EPIC...I'll remember it forever my life :))))

Thanks for the warm welcome everyone. I am not able to quote all and reply individually but my feelings are of heartfelt gratitude. Couldn't agree more with all of you ! I haven't interacted directly with many of you but am looking forward for the same in coming weeks.

I can see many new writers with their FFs on page 1 and 2 of forum. I haven't read any of them coz of time constraints and it is going to take time to read all one by one. I have a bad habit of attaching myself with whatever I read and like...I always like, comment, give feedback and can never walk away as a silent reader...so I will read them as time permits and will get back to you with feedback. Till then bear with me :)))))

I had kept the target of 30 likes just like that...but your likes motivated me and as promised, I am posting next few parts back to back...

Pleaseee keeep reading !!!!

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Maneesha Reddy

@Maneesha_Shanak

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Feeling bad for khanak...she is all alone now...😭

Nice update...waiting for shanak's first meet in the flashback...and the reason behind shaan's hatred towards khanak...

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virika01

@virika01

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

really nice poor khanak..

letss see hw shanak meet fr d first time..

update soon!!!!!!

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khwaish

@khwaish_245

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

😊

Edited by suchi_245 - 12 years ago

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jaisyjazz

@jaisyjazz

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

first of all i m dead seeing the siggie WOW great work its very attractive

khanak's flashback is very nice her bonding with her mom is unbelievable

oh so our khanak is the topper

so khanak and shan's marriage thing was going on when her parents where alived i thought that its after their death

but so sad she cried shan's words were really harsh ofcourse anyone will cry

waiting for ur back to back updates

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Heer

@heer_85

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Loved the update very much 😊

feeling very bad for Khanak, she composed herself after the conv with Shaan but she couldn't control any more and when she enter her room tears flood her eyes, i wish next time when shaan do somethings like that, she gines him more karara reply, ekk to pehle se she lost her parents and shaan treat her like that

Love the way u penned her last year interaction, the flash back with her Maa after reading that part and as she lost her parents i became emotional and tear slid my eyes

beautifully written how her mother scrod her seeing her messy room, how she told her to keep her room clean as one day she will go her husband and In laws house

Khanak did it and started dancing, she had been university topper and still her Mother asked i like what she told her mom how cute conv with her mother

her mom make her fast as its Vat-Savitri and she did it, at evening the way her mother wanted her to be dress she sensed some thing and at last she asked

her mother wanted her to meet her best friend son who has complete his MBA in America and that was Shaantanu

waiting eagerly to know how they meet and hoe they felt after meeting 😊

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Alka88

@Alka88

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Lovely update :) will be interesting to see we what follows so can't wait for the update!

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Nisha

@ABlank90

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Umm...Mani I don't know where to start. So I'll just go on with what I have to say.

Firstly: totally loved the fact that you're posting this SS on the forum.

Secondly: Really liked the 2 updates so far and waiting for more. 😃 Shaan is being judgemental...and I know you'll set him right! 😆

Thirdly: I am going to drop in a PM to you soon since I know you'll be checking the forum 😊

Love you lots! 🤗

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Manita

@-Manita-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: maneesha28889
Feeling bad for khanak...she is all alone now...😭
Nice update...waiting for shanak's first meet in the flashback...and the reason behind shaan's hatred towards khanak...

Thanks maneesha, hopefully you'll know the reasons and thoughts soon :)

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