FF Pyaar - part 37 page 109 ( 24/09 - Page 8

Originally posted by: IF_rida

lovely update
em lukin fwd to many shanak moments
and the misunderstanding to be cleared soon

Originally posted by: snigdhanagar

wow awesome...god dis chipkali har jagah aa jati hai..😡.

shaan is thinking khanak is having smething wid romit lolz...koi bhi soche dey y behaving lke dis...n onthe other hand khanak is feeling bad abt shaan n riya...😳..

whn will shanak talk??

ohhh khanak is going to shan room...hope smething happs dr..😉 jb tk riya hai i dnt think anything is gonna happ...😔.

waiting fr nxt..kya hoga room mein??

update soon...😊

Originally posted by: -pranjal-

Heeyyy Heer

Superb Update ,,,,,,,,I read it thrice since last night ...LOved it 👏

LOL this Jay is pakka bilindar 😆 confusion create karke chala gaya :😛 but loved his respect & love towards Khanak ...khanak ki har baat manta hain 😃...the cutest moment was when his phone rang & he turned its screen towards Khanak to show its not his girlfriend 😆 that was cute indeed 👏

I just want to kill this Riya 😡 muah band kyun nahi rakhti yeh apna 😡 she made Khanak upset again but i just loved Khanak today 😃 & specially her sharp answers to Riya abt beinga party person 👏 she is such a chipku yaar 😡 hated her ...😡

yar tum confusion badhati hi ja rahi ho ...shaan thinks Romit & Khanak likes each other 😃 LOL but these two are no less 😛...Romit & khanak are behaving as if they like each other ,,,,,,,Missundersdtanding hona is natural yaar 😆 LOved jay totally here 😆 he is a cartoon

waiting for Next ...Khnak is going to Shaan's room to wake him up ...its gonna be super fun ...but please us riya ko dur rakhna 😡

waiting for next ...Continue soon 🤗

Love
Pranjal.

Originally posted by: heer_85

Hello girlies 😊

i have planned the update after 2 days from current one but today will update 😊

Navratri tip to all

Happy navratri to all

update wil be tonight 😊

Originally posted by: chandu8881

Hey heer!!
Loved both the updates!!
haaye romantic dance between Shaan and Khanak
i was like let this momnet never ends, but there' the entry of troublemaker!!
i like jai's character!! Shaan is J, seeing Khanak and Romit😆
now he'll come to know...
precap dekhar mar rahi hain!! hmmpphhh!!
continue soon heer!!
im loving your tale!!

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Here is the 4th part enjoy 😉 and please guys ignore any grammatical errors

Part 4

Khanak was about to go and check khushboo bhabhi , Madhvi called her and told her to go and wake up shaan.

Mahdvi: khanak...

Khanak: Jee maa...

Madhvi: khanak...!!!!!! shaan koh zara dekho utha keh nahi kitni der hogai hai...

Khanak: Jee maa... mein dhekh lungi... woh khushboo bhabhi

Madhvi: mein abhi gait hi uske paas woh so rahihe... tum shaan to dekhe ao

Khanak heart beat fast at the mention of shaan and wake him up in his room

Khanak: thikh hai maa... mein shaan koh dekhti hu

Khanak head to shaan's room, she reached out of his room and had a long breathe.

In the room, Shaan was dreaming about khanak, she knocked the door but no response; she knocked again and see the door was open

Khanak to herself " darwaza toh khula hai... kya shaan uthgaya kya... Shayad nahi utha hoga warna niche agaya hota.. chaal khanak mission shaan... koh uthana shuru kar ." smiled to herself and blush

Khanak slowly opened the door, enter the room

shaan forget to close the door as he was in deep thought of khanak and Romit last night

khanak saw shaan's sleeping form and the way he was hugging a pillow very tight. Khanak smiled and shake her head " abhi taak naji utha ."

khanak: abhi uthati hui... nahi pehle parde kholdu... phir zaruru jag jaega .. ( Grinning )

in his dream shaan was hugging Khanak

(Poor shaan wo khanak nahi Pillow hai , sori i can't control lolzzz 🤣)

Khanak moved near the window to open the curtain to let the sun rays enter the room , She heard shaan was murmuring something but khanak couldn't hear it clearly, she smiled to herself turn to him and admire him, shaked her head and said " Burthal ."

When shaan was not in india khanak used to come in his room and talk to his photo and tell his photo what she did the whole day

Khanak was looking at his photo and shaan's sleeping form

She heard him again murmuring something, she moved close to his bed with a grin on her face

He was saying "I love..." and khanak heard it in a small whisper

When she heard I love u, she lower her eyes and smile spread on her lips , khanak felt happy and blushed

She moved close to his bed, shaan's half bed sheet was on the floor n khanak move more closer to hear clearly coz she didn't believe what she heard, her leg slipped on a bed sheet and she fell a little bit on the bed but not touching shaan, she saw his hair was mess but he looked extremely handsome, she aches to brush his hair more then it was messed, she raised her hand slight and touch his forehead with a smile and slowly caresses from his forehead to his check on his left side and admire his face , she didn't moved her eyes from his face and said slowly " I missed u shaan, i missed u so much ." shaan left a pillow and turn,
In Shaan's dream khanak was moving from his grip, so in the process of not letting her go in his dream, make him turn and grab khanak hand and turn under him forcefuly

Khanak was shocked, she was below shaan, her eyes wide open

Shaan in his dream " kaha jarahiho sweetheart." and started nuzzling her neck and tried to kiss her neck. Khanak was shocked and felt him on top of her and whisper shaan but he was continuously nuzzling her neck and kissing her lightly, leaving his wet kisses on her neck to shoulder and again from shoulder to her neck, khanak felt electric current pass in her body, she closed her eyes

Khanak called him again shaa... n she was feeling tensed and weak at his wet light kisses and nuzzling, she closed her eyes as shaan thumb caresses her lips, she tries to speak but lost her voice

Shaan moved his head from her neck with closed eyes and move to her lips where his thumb traces her lips, his breathe was near khanak's lips, khanak felt his breathe on her lips , shaan moved more closer to her lips

Khanak slowly whisper again shaaannn and her lips trembled

Shaan again murmed " I love ..." and brush his lips lightly on hers, at the same time Riya came in shaan's room with a loud bang

Shaan was trying to say " i love... khanak ." but Without completing his sentence, he said I LOVE U... then add Riya after he heard Riya's load bang in his room
khanak opened her eyes when she heard "I love u Riya..." and looked at shaan who too open his eyes in shock seeing khanak on his bed and that below him and turn in shocked seeing Riya in his room

Khanak felt very bad, shaan again looked at khanak, he moved a part, Khanak moved from the bed, she saw shaan and then Riya, she moved to left the room without saying anything with teary eyes

Shaan stared at her ... then Riya spoke

Riya: shaan ... u r still sleeping

Shaan looked at khanak who was leaving from his room

Shaan: khanak... ( raised from his bed)

But she move closer to the door without turning to him

Riya: areh khanak kaha jarahiho ... tumne shaan ko uthadiya... i thought woh abhi taak sorahahe...so i came to wake him

Khanak: mein jati hu woh ...maa koh shayad kitchen mein meri zarurat hogi ( teary eyes ) without turning to riya

shaan didn't complete his " i love..." statement, and khanak take it wrong and thought shaan said I LOVE U Riya

Shaan: khanak ...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ( called her but she was already left,

He took his hand at back of his head and ruffle his hair and said

" Shittt!." And turn to riya

Shaan: Riya what the hell, tum yaha kya kar rahiho aur woh bhi istara (angrily )

Riya was in her night short dress which was little above her knees with tinny straps

Khanak in her room, hot tears slid down her cheeks, in her mind it roamed " I love u Riya ." khanak thought shaan grab her thinking she's Riya and more tears rolled down her cheeks, she looked her self in a mirror tears didn't stop its way, she touched the place where shaan kissed her lightly and thought " kya woh saab Riya ya keliye tha aur mene socha ke woh mere liye ..." more tears slid down her soft cheeks.

Knock on khanak's door it was Harila who came to call khanak. She composed herself wipe her tears and thought " nahi khanak tum yeah kya soch rahihe woh shayad tum ne theekse nahi suna hoga" and again composed herself.

Madhvi and dadi were talking in the hall, they saw Khanak came there in deep thought

Madhvi: Khanak... shaan utha kya

Khanak didn't heard her, Madhvi called her again

Madhvi: Khanak...

Khanak heard this time and said " Jee Maa..."

Madhvi: meme tume shaan koh uthane ko kahata... woh uthgaya kya

Khanak: jee maa

Madhvi: Khanak tum thikh ho nah ...
( she asked as she saw her lost in some though )

Khanak: haa maa mein thikh hu...

At the same time shaan came after freshen up.

Shaan: Good morning dadi, good morning mom

Madhvi: good morning beta ...( dadi and madhvi )

Madhvi: acha aabh aur chalo nashta karlo

Khanak head to the kitchen

Madhvi: Khanak kaha jarahiho beta, chalo tum bhi nashata karlo chalo ( got up )

Khanak: Maa ...mein baad meh kar lungi woh kitchen mein kuch kaam hai ... toh mein...( not in mood to do breakfast )

Khanak didn't have her breakfast earlier as she wanted to do with shaan and talk to him

Dadi: ese kese baadh mein aur kitchen ka kaam saab baad men hota rahega pehle tum nashta karlo ( dadi said strictly as she knows khanak and her kitchen relation )

At breakfast table

Madhvi: shaan woh tumari dost ... Riya

At the same time Riya came

Riya: good morning Aunty...

Madhvi: good morning... ( smiled to riya )

Jay came too at the same time when madhvi was asking about Riya

Jay: Good morning to all ... wese masi this is not fair... aapne mera toh pucha hi nahi... ( nautakily )

Madhvi: acha... toh phir thik hai " Jay beta aap kaha theh ."

Jay: I love u masi... (hugged her )

Madhvi: aabh apni yeah nautaki chor aur nashta karne beto

Madhvi got a call and she left them all four doing breakfast

Khanak wanted to sit beside shaan but Riya took that seat, she took the opposite seat by shaan, she was very upset and didn't look at shaan

Shaan looked at khanak and wait for her to look at him, but she didn't

Shaan to himself " khanak please meri taraf dekho and talk to me i m dying to talk to you."

Jay: di aap neh bhi fair nahi kiya... aaj aap muhje uthane kyu nahi ayi... see i m late again today agar Akshay bhaiya hote nah toh hi would give me a big lecture ... ( Khanak served him Paratha)

Khanak had flash back of what happen in shaan's room while ago

Shaan asked Jay about his collage

Shaan: Jay... jaapse mein ayahu mein ne tuhme collage attend karta nahi dekha... ( eating paratha )

Jay: bhai... i m on vacation 2 weeks

they were talking, Riya was trying to involve in conv which offended khanak so much

Jay too felt something about Riya, and thought " may be shaan and Riya ke beech kuch hai." but then looked at Riya and thought nahi Bhai iske saath no way.

The way Riya was behaving anyone can think, shaan and Riya are in relation

Shanak were acting like stranger on breakfast table, shaan asked khanak to pass something, he wanted khanak to look at him, khanak passed him paratha without looking at him.

Shaan thought " yeh khanak ese kyu behave kar rahihe mana ke mein 3 saal baad ayah hu par jab bhi hum call pe hote the toh she talked nonstop, Shaan yeh, shaan woh aur abhi dekh bhi nahi rahi muhje."

He looked again at khanak and found the same reaction

Shaan thought " Kahi aaj subha joh huwa uski wajase toh woh esa behave nahi kar rahi, nai nai jaabse mein ayahu tab se ese behave karrahihe.

Later after breakfast at hall

Jay: di kya baat hai aaj aap kuch alag ho ... i mean no scolding on me ...how lucky i m today ... lagta hai aaj apka mood thikh nahi hai

Khanak give him angry stare

Jay: ok sorry ... ( chuckle )... thikh hai agar aap ka mood off hai toh... lekin useh thikh karnewala abhi ata hoga

As khanak promised Romit about their meeting

Romit came to pick Khanak , he enter and greet all and seat on couch

Jay: lo agaya... aabh di ka mood hoga dhinchak ( smiling )

Romit: hey shaan how r u ?

Shaan to himself " bad after seeing you ."

Romit: tumne kuch kaha...

Shaan: nahi kuch nahi i m good ... toh aur batao tum yaha subha subha

Romit: yeah as i told you last night khanak is taken and laugh

Shaan felt irritate at his " khanak has taken ." and he talk to himself " khanak koi cheez hai kya ke she is taken, woh sirf meri hai , mein bhi dekhta hu how she is taken ."

Romit: shaan kya huwa ... kuch soch raheho

Then khanak came from the kitchen

Khanak: areh tum agae ... wese kaha jana hai, (shout ) to call dadi

Dadi: kya huwa kya baat hai... (dadi came )

Shaan was listening to then disinterested

Khanak: dadi!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Romit apko lene ayahai... coffee keh liye and lunch keh liye bhi

Romit: what??????????? Mein neh yeh kaab kaha

Dadi knew khanak was teasing Romit so she joined her

Dadi: acha esi baat hai ...thikh hai chalo mein tayar hu

Romit: khanak ... i wil kill u !!!!!!!!!!!!

Khanak hide her smile and tongue on her cheek

Dadi knows very well Khanak and romit like to tease each other

Dadi: kyu ?? muhje kyu nahi leja sakhtah... mein itni bhi budhi nahi hui

Jay: Budhi... Dadi u r sweet sixteen, aur aap ... aaj bohut hot lagrahiho (smiling )

Dadi: chup badmash...

Romit: wese idea bura nai hai ... hamari paring sabko jealous kar degi

Dadi: hath badmash ... chalo jao tum dono, aabh mera shaan agaya hai toh woh muhje leke jaega kyu shaan

Shaan: yeah dadi and hugged her from back and said " I love u dadi ( looked at khanak who too looked at him and morning i love u scene flash at her again )

Shaan saw him taking to khanak and again felt bad as he saw romit and khanak are getting well and khanak ignore him , she smiled at him talking freely and khanak hitting Romit play full when he crake jokes

Romit liked to crack some jokes and khanak couldn't control her laughter

Romit: acha khanak aab chalo

Khanak: nahi romit aaj nahi... woh muhje kuch kaam hai ( she didn't want to go, she was upset after morning scene and feel to go out )

Shaan left happy when khanak refused to go out with him

Romit: areh ese kese kaam hai... u have promised for our meeting so abh no excuses

Romit convinced khanak to go with him

Khanak: aabh chalo... derr nahi hora hihe kya

Romit looked his wrist watch and said " haa chalo... lekin Madhvi aunty kahi dekhai nahi deh rahi ." then madhvi came

Romit: madhvi aunty kesi ho aap

Madhvi: mein thikh hu , wese tum dono abhi taak yaha ho, agar derr hogai tho ... ( smiling)

Romit looks at khanak angrily with an expression of " khanak tumne saab koh batadiya."

Khanak: what ???? mene kuch nahi kaha Maa seh

Romit: dekh lunga mein tuhme

Dadi and Madhvi laugh at Romit and told them to leave now

Khanak told Madhvi they are leaving, she call madhvi as MAA coz she misses her parents a lot. She called sunil Adda.

Madhvi told her to take care and come early, they hugged like a daughter and mother bonding.

Khanak said bye to all and left

Shaan didn't like it, khanak didn't talk to him or even looked at him.

Dadi moved to her room after bid bye to romit and khanak

Madhvi: shaan ... tum bhi aram karo apne kamreme jake mein khushboo keh paas jati hu

Shaan: wese mom bhabhi kahahai, dekhai nahi dehri

Madhvi: khushboo kih tabiyat thikh nahi hai...... isilye woh apne kamreme meh hai aram kar rahihe .

Shaan: kya huwa ... doctor koh dhikhaya (concerned )

Madhvi: haa... Akshay uhse leke janewala hai doctor ke paas

Shaan: thikh hai mein bhabhi ke paas jatahu

Shaan went to see khushboo and had a little chit chat with her mean while riya came to khushboo's room and told shaan she is getting bored so she force shaan to take her out to see the town and do some shopping, shaan told Riya many times not to behave like his GF but Riya didn't listen to him.

Precape : Shanak in coffee shop with Romit and Riya

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