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Posted: 12 years ago
Hiii girls 😊
i know u all are waiting for update but i got very busy in work
will update tomorrow
will try to give updates twice a week 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you so much to all who pressed like button 😊

(sweetchrvi, khushboo, Poo, Ona ,Priyani ,Jaisy, chand, suchi, Mounika, Diyak,

sneha, Gia, Rida Maneesha, Saranya, Aasma, Nikki, )

Thanks to all who comment 😊

Here is part 24 enjoy and please ignore any grammatical error😊

Part 24

Khanak: mila kya tumara handsome ………………… ( and wink at her)

Khanak and Jaanu gave Hi5 to each other

Jaani: wese tumare sapno ke raja…….. ka kuch naam hai ke nahi

Nidhi: shaan!!!!!!!!!!!! (Without wasting any time and smile )

Khanak was drinking a cold drink she split it and started to cough

Jaanvi : kya………!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! she looked at khanak

Nidhi: Khanak tum thikh ho nah…….( touch her shoulder )

Khanak was still coughing; Nidhi passed her a glass of water

Jaanvi looked at Khanak with a cheeky smile and to herself " Khanak toh abhi

gai…… lekin ise pehle yeah dreamy queen Shaan ke piche parjay ise saab

batana parega ."

Nidhi: kya huwa Khanak tum thikh ho nah

Khanak nod in yes

Nidhi: wese tum toh Madhvi aunty keh paas rehti ho toh tumne kabhi

mujse Shaan ke bareme kyu kuch nahi bataya ?

Khanak: woh……..!!!!!!!!! Nidhi mein abhi ayi…… (left from there )

Jaanvi laugh and Nidhi looked at her confused

Nidhi: kya huwa Jaanu tum haas kyu rahiho…..( confused )

Jaanvi told Nidhi about shaan and Khanak , and family playing a game with them

Janvi: wese tumne bechari Khanak toh shock dediya ..( stili laughing )

Nidhi: kya matalab…………( looked at her )

Janvi composed her self

Janvi: shaan khanak seh Pyaar karta hai aur khanak bhi uhse pyaar karti

hai aur tumne yeh kaha use keh who tumara rajkumar shaan hai …….

( laughing )

Nidhi opened her mouth in shock

Nidhi: OMGEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sach Jaanu " khanak aur shaan"

aur mein neh …OMGEEE!!!!!!! Lekin phir uski shaadi ki baat Raj she kese

….( confused looked at Janvi )

Janvi told her everything and Both had a good laugh

Janvi: lekin acha hai…..khanak shayad abh confess karde warna shaan koh

aur churalega ………..( smiled )

Khanak to herself looking for shaan " yeah shaan bhi pata nahi kaha hai…hero

banke gumta rehta hai aur ladkiya uspe fida hojati hai …….Pehle woh Riya

aabh yeah Nidhi."

Khanak passed near Jaanvi's room and someone pulled her into Jaanu's room

She was about to scream a palm cover her mouth

Shaan: mein hu ……………….. kyu chila rahiho………………. Jaab I LOVE U

kehne ko kahu hu toh bolti band hojati hai

Shaan: aabh chup kyu ho……..( hand still on her lips )

Khanak gave him a stern eye look

Shaan: ohhh sorry !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and remove her palm

Khanak: Shaan itni zorse koi khichtahai kya…… ( and catch her breath ) wese

kabse mein tumehi toh dund rahihu kaha the tum ….( angrily )

Shaan: wah!!!!!!!!!!!! gussa muje tumpe hona chahiye lekin yaha toh ulta

hai

Shaan: Khanak ….. ekto kabse tum seh milne ki koshish karrahahu aur tum

ho ke yaha wala tenti ho

Khanak: acha……..muje dund rahethe yeh Nidhi se batein karrahe the

Shaan to himself " Nidhi."

Shaan: yeh koun hai ..aur mein use kyu baat karunga …( confused looked at

her )

Khanak: acha tum aabh Nidhi koh nahi janteh …..( looked at him )

Shaan : sweetheart tum yeh kiski baat kar hahiho…..( looked at her )

Khanak became upset and turn her back to shaan. Shaan move closer and hug her

from back

Shaan: sweetheart ….aabh batao kya baat hai ……gussa kyu ho ( hug her tight )

Khanak: shaan Nidhi seh kya baat kih tumne ……. ( still in shaan's arm)

Shaan: khanak ………….pehle tum muje yeh batao yeh nidhi koun hai

( shaan didn't pay much attention to Nidhi when she was introduced by Akshay ) aur

woh hamare beech mein kese agai….mmmhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

( squeeze her tight in a tight hug )

Khanak looked side way to shaan

Khanak: tum sachmne use nahi jante……..Jaanu ki bua ki beti …Nidhi…

Shaan thinks and said " Nidhi……..ooo!!!!!! woh !! usne kya kiya…bhaiya neh

introduce karwaya tha uhse ….( looked at khanak)

Khanak: woh tumeh dekh kar uske dimag meh khandiya bajne lagai

Shaan: matlab…..( looked at her )

Khanak: usne tumeh apne dil kah rajkumar banadiya ……….

Shaan: what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ( shocked )

Khanak: shaan tum eseh kese kar sakteh ho …….( moved from his grip )

Shaan: isme mene kya kiya …..

Khanak: yeh saab tumari wajese huwa……..kisne kaha tha hero baneke

gumo har waqt

Shaan: what!!!!!!!!!!!!! Khanak aabh yeh kya baat huwi agar muje dekh kar

uske dimag mein gantiya bajne lagi toh isme meri kya galti…

hadh hai…….yaar ekto mein tume kitna miss kiya aur tum ho keh ………

think hai ………….

And start to leave but khanak hold his wrist

Khanak: Shaan !!!!!……………….I missed u so much mein dar gaithi agar

kisine tume mujse churaliya toh………..( her eyes became watery )

Shaan turn to face her and said " I missed u too sweetheart ." ( smiled to her )

Shaan: wese shaan koh khanak seh churana itna asan nahi hai………( in

naughty tone came more closer to her )………kyuki meri Jhansi ki rani yeh

honehi nahi degi

Khanak smiled, blush and hugged him tight shaan hold her tight in his arms

After few minutes their move a part

Shaan in a tease tone " wese khanak woh dance joh tumne kiya ……….. kya

woh mere liye tha and raised his eye brows and move again little toward her

Khanak slowly move backward, she didn't meet his eyes

Khanak hit the wall, shaan raised his hands and caresses her cheeks in a slow motion

up to her chin and lips, khanak closed her eyes, felt shiver by his touch

Khanak: Shaan!!!!!!!!!!!!………………….." slowly still eyes closed

Shaan moved more closer to her, his breathe blow on Khanak's lips, he brushes his

lips slightly with hers, then he heard someone voice, he move little apart

Khanak eyes were still closed when she didn't get reaction of kiss from shaan ,she

opened her eyes…., before she say some thing

Shaan: shhh………………….

Khanak: kya huwa?... ( looked at him )

Shaan: koi arahahe………… chalo……

Khanak: kaha………

When he heard the voice approach near the room door, shaan hold khanak's hand

and hide with her behind the curtain

The door opened

Romit: Jaan suno toh sahi………….( rush into the room calling Jaanu)

Jaanvi: Muje kuch nahi sunna……tum jao yaha she ….( upset )

They enter the room still arguing with their childish fight

Shaan behind the curtain " kya yaar yeh dono hamesha larte rehetahai aur

mere kaam mein rukawat banjate hai , koi kaam thikhse pura hone nahi

dete

Khanak smiled shyly and giggle

Shaan: aur haso mere halat par……… tume toh………….

Khanak : shaan …………. Sshhh………

Jaanvi was facing the mirror and both were still arguing and suddenly, Jaanvi saw

khanak behind the curtain from the mirror, khanak was slightly looking out from the

curtain.

Jaanvi got an idea and she started

Jaanvi: Jaanu!!!!!!!!!!………………… ( to Romit and move near him, Romit was happy

but confused)

Romit to himself " yeah achanak ise kya huwa hai , kher muje kya ." and he felt

happy and move closer to Jaanvi

Romit: Jaan …… and hugged her from back shanak were behind the curtain watching

them

Shaan: ise dekho bindass kese apni Jaan koh hug kar rahahe aur mein…….

. Jab bhi tumare paas atahu toh koina koi ajataha hai ."

Khanak giggle seeing Shaan face and his irritation

Shaan give her look of its not funny

Romit was hugging Jaanvi from back and Jaanvi spoke. " Romit wese Tuhme kya

lagtahai Khanak aur Raj ki Jodi kesi rahegi ."

Romit to himself " Khanak ………… yaar yeh Khanak beech mein kahase agai ."

Romit: Jaan iss mein Khanak …... kahase agai

Jaanvi elbowed him slightly and then looked at him and told her to see from the

mirror ( this time shaan was looking from curtain )Romit got it and he too start

Romit: Jaan……… wese dono kaha baate karte hai muje lagta ha hame kuch

karna hoga

Jaanvi: muje lagta hai ke hame undonokoh humeekk

romanticcc!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Date peh bhejna hoga ……( smiling )

Romit: aur ekk romantic long drive peh bhi……

Shanak behind the curtain looked at each other and said in low tone " nahi !!!!!!!……

date!!!!!!!! ……………. Drive!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... ."

Jaanvi gave Romit a look of muje kabhi leke gayeho kya long drive peh

Romit understood the meaning of her look and in low tone " hum jaenge nai …

. Kisi din ……" and gesture him about shanak present in the room

Jaanvi: yeah dono idea undono keh liye perfect hai iss bahane dono paass

to ayenge, toh phir yeh teh hogaya keh hum Khanak aur Raj ko long

drive aur ekk romatic date par bhejdenge ,"said in big tone that shanak can

hear it clearly

Shaan: indono koh to mein…………….. and try to come out of the curtain khanak

hold her hand

Khanak: shaan …………… kya kar raheho

Shaan: meri Jaan koh bhejenge date par aur drive peh…………… uss Raj keh

saath , chorunga nahi inlogo koh mein, khud romance nahi kar rahehe

aur muhje bhi nahi karne deteh

Khanak giggle and shaan give her a look

Romit and Jaanvi kept talking about Raj, Khanak and shaan was fuming in anger

Shaan: pehle muhje iss Raj koh mere raste se hatana hoga phir indono koh

dekhtahu mein …………( irritated )

Khanak: shaan ahista bolo…..dono sun lenge

Shaan: wese khanak hum dono yaha bhi romance kar sakte hai…..( in a

husky low tone …….

ekk kiss toh banti hai sweetheart

Khanak blushed and slightly whacked shaan on his arm

Khanak: shaan sharam bhi karo aabh ………..( blushing )

Shaan: isme mein kyu sharan karu………..dekho in dono koh kese khulam

khula romance kar rahehai……..

Few minutes later Nidhi came to call Romit and Jaanvi as she saw them arguing and

moving to Jaanvi's room

Nidhi knock the door

Shaan: aab koun hai yaar pura gar iss room mein rehta hai kya ( in irritated

tone ) yeh dono janeka naam nahi leh rahehai aur abhi pata nahi koun hai

Jaanvi opened the door and Nidhi came in

Nidhi: tum dono kahogaya ho toh….aab chale bahar… saab intezar kar

rahehe…….woh saab jah rahehe aur yeah Khanak pata nahi kaha chaligai

Romit was about to say Khanak is behind the curtain and at the same time Jaanvi

stamp his foot , Romit wink in pain and Nidhi gave Jaanvi a confusing look

Nidhi: Jeeju aap think ho nah …..( looked at romit )

Romit: haa mein think hu…….( wink in pain and looked at Janvi)

Nidhi: thikh hai…..lekin yeh khanak kaha chaligai

Janvi: woh bahar kahi hongi………

Jaanvi: Abb chale tum dono

They left the room and few minutes later shanak came out from the curtain,

Shaan was still in annoyed

Shaan: sabse badla lunga mein har bar mera romance beech mein reh jata

hai aur yeah curtain toh meri famous jaga bangai hai chupne keh liye

Khanak ginggle …shaan gave her a look.

Khanak: mein jarahihu..tum thori der baad ana………..( she turn to leave )

Shaan: kaha jarahiho………( hold her wrist pull her toward him, she bump on his

chest )

Khanak: shaan!!!!!!!!!! Kya kar raheho…saab hume dund rahehe .( her hands

on his chest )

Shaan: mera romance abhi baki hai…….( naughtily moved to her lips )

Khanak: kya!!!!!!!!!!!! Shaan pagal hogae ho kya…koi ajaega ….

Shaan sooted his lips with her in a fraction of second, he nibble her lower lips khanak

moan, he kiss her on her full lips khanak shiver and respond to his kiss which started

smoothly and turn to hot passionate kiss, khanak hands move to his nap and she

caresses his hair to bring him close shaan deepen the kiss after few minutes their

broke from the kiss breathing hardly

Shaan: aabh mera romance pura huwa……I love u sweetheart.( breathing

heavily rest his forehead on her's )

Khanak blush deep red, move apart left him and move to the hall. Shaan smiled when

she left, her cheeks turned red he caresses his hair at his name thought of their kiss

which really hot

Nidhi: Khanak kaha thi tum , kabse dhund rahihu…..( looked at her )

Romit: haa aur yeh shaan bhi pata nahi kaha chalagaya……( smiled and

looked at her ) tumne dekha hai kya uhse

Khanak became nervous and at the same time shaan came there

Akshay: chote kahe tha tum……( kabse dund rahehai tumeh )

Shaan: woh bhaiya baas mein call attend karne gayatha…….. ( looked at

khanak who shyly lower her gaze )

Romit and Jaanvi looked at each other and smiled

Sunil: agar tum logoka hogaya ho toh abb hum saab chale

Madhvi hugged Jaanvi and Sudha

Madhvi: chalo Khanak…….( smiling )

Jaanvi: nahi aunty Khanak koh yahi rehnedo jab tak shaadi nahi hojati

Shaan heard that and to himself " what !!!!!!!!!!!! no way" then shanak looked at

each other shocked

Shaan gesture her not to stay there but Madhvi said ok " Khanak tum yahi ruk jao

wese bhi kuch dino ki toh baat hai "

Khanak looked at shaan who tighten his jaw and control his irritation

Dadi: haa beta……… Madhvi thikh kehrahihe hum saab kuch waha sambal

lenge tum yaha Jaanvi ke saath rukjao……( smiling caresses khanak hair )

Sunil: toh phir thikh hai…….aab hum toh chale

Jaanvi, sudha, Mr Sharma, Nidhi n khanak moved out of the house to see them off all

other were first to go out khanak and Nidhi were back, nidhi moved forwar suddenly

shaan pulled khanak before they reached the car

Khanak: shaan!!!!!!!!!... ( panicked looked around )

Shaan: tum yaha nahi rukongi………..samji tum

Khanak: shaan hum baad mein baat karenge……koi dekhlega hame..

( nervous) mein bhi nahi rukna chahti lekin Maa neh kaha hai toh rukna

parega, aur phir Jaanu bhi………..( now look into his eyes )

Shaan: khanak….tumein saab ki pari hai lekin meri nahi………..

Khanak: shaan please esih baat nahi hai…2 din kih toh baat hai

Shaan: think hai…..lekin uhse pehle nuje meri good neendh kiss chahiye

Khanak: shaan!!!!!!!!!!! ( whisper ) nahi koi dekh lega…….( nervous looked

around )

Shaan: koi nahi dekhega…….come on ekk kiss ……..( looked into her eyes )

Nidhi: areh khanak kaha hai ……..( to Janvi)

Janvi : shaan keh pass hogi……..bechara khanak keh bagar kese rahega

Both girls giggle

Shaan caresses her cheeks slowly

Khanak whisper " shaan nahi please koi…." she didn't complete shaan interrupt

her by kissing her lips fully, khanak respond and within 2minutes they move a part

,shaan kissed on her forehead

Shaan: good night sweetheart …………( looked into her eyes )

Khanak looked into his eyes hug him and said " good neendh ."

Shaan: how unromantic

Khanak pushed him " Jao .." smiled shyly

Shaan moved toward cars

Akshay: chotey kaha reh gaye the

Shaan: woh……….. phone …….

Sunil: dekh rahahu……..aach kaal tume har waqt phone arahehe

Khanak joined them

Sunil: acha khayal rakna ……….( to khanak put his hand on her head )

Khanak: Jee Adda…….

All left the from there after saying good bye to all, and shaan left chuckling

Khandelwal house

Dadi: bhagwan kah shukar hai saab kuch sahi se hogaya

Madhvi: khusboo tum jake apne kamreme aram karo beta

Akshay and Khusboo move to their room and all others members

Shaan in his room

Shaan:Khanak koh bhi wahi rukna tha …uhse toh baas bahana chahiye

mujhse dur rehneka , abhi call kartahu uhse

Shaan called Khanak but she didn't picked up the call, he called her again and this

time someone receive the call

Nidhi: hello!!!!!!!!!!

Shaan: yeh Khanak ki awaz koh kya huwa , nahi lagta hai yeh Khanak nahi

hai

Nidhi: hello!!!!!!! Hello!!!!!!


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heer_85 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
i forgot tomorrow i have to go to a graduation of my niece n nephew
n at night to attend a wedding
so i completed writing and posted early
enjoy reading suggestion are welcome😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey

loved loved loved it a lot
shaan and his witty comment is hilarious
they were in a room and there came romit and janvi, lol
yeh dono khud toh ladte rahte hai aur upar se shanak ko bhi shanti se romance nai karne dete, hmph

while peeking from behind khanak was visible to janvi

and again janvi and romit started about khanak and raj , god ! Yeh dono itni planning khud ke liye karte toh kitna acha hota , hmph

shaan is hilarious

oh no yeh janvi toh hadd hai, ab khanak ko aur rok liya usne , aur sabne haan bhi kardi , tch
kya hoga ab shanak ka , tch

arrey yaar pls yeh dono ab jaldi se confess karle yaar hadd ho gayi hai ab toh , poor shanak kab tak

contnue soon


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Posted: 12 years ago
aww... lovely update...
thnk goodness nidhi knows d truth now...
romantc shanak ...loved it...restless shan ...blushing khanak...


Edited by monika_aa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
sweet and very hot
are yaar why they all r after shanak they have confessed to each other when they will feel they will say to the family u jabardasti kyun kar rahe ho hmm
oh ho she will stay till wedding now janvi and nidhi dono bahut tang kar renge use thats not fair
ab kya hoga phone pe
waiting :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
lol nice update heer...
loved it...
the kiss was very hott...
awesome...lol nidhi is also joining the khandelwal's game...😆
khanak will be in jaavi's house till marriage...oh no shanak are going to stay away from each other for 2 daz ??
lol nidhi called shaan...😆
update next part soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!!!👏 Such a cute and lovely update!!! Thank God..Jaanvi said that ShaNak are deeply in love with each other..😃 Shaan has no clue about Nidhi though Akshay introduced her to him..what to do!! His mind is always occupied with Khanak's thought!!!😳 Shaan is right..Jaanvi-Romit duo always disturb them.. ha..ha..how cutely they both irritating Shaan..Poor guy..😆 The kiss was hot!!!☺️ Awww!!! Khanak needs to stay with Jaanvi.. Poor Shaan..😆 Oops!!! Nidhi took Shaan's call.. Where is Khanak??? 😕
Looking forward and thanks for writing ..😊
Edited by poo_j - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow heer update was aoswem love it
ktym thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update heer😃
shanak kisses are hot!!!
Love their romance!!
romit and jaanvi lol...these two stopped their romance and started irritating shanak with their plans!😆
poor shanak...they are unaware that everyone are playing with them!!!!
waiting for the next update...😃

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