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Here is part 17 enjoy and please ignore any grammatical error
Part 17
Later at night after dinner
Every one retired to their room, khanak was tried after meeting with Jaanu
It was past mid night khanak woke up, she was feeling thirsty, bottle water in her room was empty
Khanak: pani bhi khatam hogaya ...kitchen se lana hoga
khanak went to the kitchen to drink some water and bumped on someone in a hall, she looked at him but didn't know the who that guy was, first she was scared and was about to shout
Guy: khanak right...
Khanak thought how he knows my name and stared at him, in her mind " yeah muje kese janta hai...shayad bhaa keh guest hai ."
Khanak: sorry woh ...
The guy: ohh !!!!!! i am so sorry, muje dekh kaar chalna chahiye tha
Khanak confused " Aap... still looking at him
The guy: haa woh me Raj, mmmhhh!!!!!!!hum pehle nai mile woh actually muje pyaas lagi thi toh mein kitchen dudh rahatha
Khanak stared him
Raj: tum khanak ho na
Khanak was in shocked and said " haa paar app koun ho aur mera naam kese..."
Raj: haa hum pehle nai mile but i know you, mein sunil uncle ke dost ka beta hu
Khanak remember, sunil told them about the guy, when he came all were fast asleep so their didn't get his intro earlier
Khanak heart beats raised fast and felt nervous
Shaan in his room, he couldn't sleep, he wake and thought to meet khanak and talk to her, today he wanted to clear all misunderstanding by hook or Crook
Shaan: aaj muje khanak se baat karne se koi nahi rokh sakhta ...ihse pehle galat fehmi barjae ...muje use baat karni hogi
Raj started conv with khanak in a hall, khanak was nervous and not interested, her heart beats were on high speed
Khanak and Raj in a hall small light reflect on them, shaan was walking toward khanak's room, he spot khanak with someone and stop midway
Shaan to himself " khanak yaha... inti raat ko aur yeh koun he uske saath " abee yeah koun hai yaar ." move little to get clear view
Shaan moved toward them and clear his throat; both Raj and Khanak looked aside and saw shaan
Shaan: khanak tum yaha aur... Looked at Raj
Raj: ohhh!! Hiii mein Raj...tum shaan ho nah right ( smiling )
Shanak looked at him, in his mind " yeah kaha se agaya mein neh kyu iske bareme nahi socha...aur khanak iske saath kyu hai.."
Shaan remember sunil has told about him about Raj but at that time he wanted to talk to khanak so he didn't pay attention, shaan was shocked and looked at khanak, he felt someone pinned his heart
Raj started to talk to shaan
Raj: woh...tume bhi pani chahiye ... ( smiling )
Shaan murmured " muhje meri khanak chahiye ."
Raj: kya huwa tumne kuch kaha
Shaan: nahi kuch nahi...ha woh pani
khanak move to the kitchen, after few minutes she came with water bottle
Khanak: Jee woh Paani ( to Raj and extended the bottle)
Raj: thank u khanak and smiled to her
Khanak: Jee apko kuch aur chahiye ...
Shaan to himself murmured " ha muhje chahiye na tum." looked at khanak
khanak and Raj looked at him
Raj: tumne kuch kaha ...( to shaan)
Shaan: mene nahi toh ...kuch bhi toh nahi
Raj: nahi Khanak thank u
When shaan heard him saying khanak his blood started boiling, he tighten his jaw and clutched his wrist into a fist.
Khanak return a small smile to Raj , she started to walk to her room but Raj called her again
Raj: Khanak... woh Good night and smiled
Shaan was fuming in anger, tighten his fist and control himself
Both khanak and Raj left
Shaan to himself " Meri love story shuru hone se pehle hi the end hojaegi agar mein asi speed mein chalunga toh , no i can't delay now Shaan kuch soch dude kuch soch.Yeh raj good night keh kar chalagaya aur meri needh uragaya ."
Next morning
At breakfast table
Sunil as usual with his newspaper and Khanak was serving, all were seated except Jay and Riya were not there, Shaan was staring at Khanak
Sunil: Raj beta, Yeh meri family hai inse milo Yeh hai mera bara beta Akhshay aur uski wife Khusboo, Shaan mera chota beta , maa aur Madhvi se toh tum pehle hi milchuke ho aur yeh meri beti Khanak ( Raj looks at Khanak and all another said hi to him )
Raj: Haa uncle me Khanak se milchuka hu
Khanak's heart beats started raise fast
Madhvi: Milchuke ho matlab and looked at Khanak surprised
Raj: Woh kaal raat uhse mulakat huithi, i mean jab mein Pani lene gayatha kitchen mein toh we met in a hall
Shaan was listening to Raj and felt someone is pinning his heart
Sunil: Areh yeh toh bohut acha hai and they continue their breakfast
Dadi:Khanak, Raj ko Paratha toh de kuch bhi nahi kharahahe
Shaan to himself " Muhje toh kisine kabhi bhi nahi pucha paratha ka ." and frown his face
Khanak moved to serve Raj served him and Shaan was fuming inside in eager but doesn't show to anyone
Shaan: Khanak woh muje bhi ek paratha and smiled to her
All looked at shaan, gesture each other and smile
Khanak: Bhabhi shaan ko please paratha pass kijie nah and looked at him
Shaan left bad and stared at khanak
Khushboo: yeh lo shaan paratha ...( smiled to him )
Dadi: Raj beta kaal needh toh achi ayi na tume
Raj: jee dadi ... thank u for arrangement ...( smiling at khanak )
Shaan looked at him the way he stared at khanak, he felt to give him a tight punch on his face
Madhvi: isme thank u ki kya baat hai beta...
Dadi: ha Madhvi sahi keh rahihe...
After some chit chat all finished their breakfast
Later few minutes after break fast Jaanvi came to Khanadelwal house
Jaanvi: Hiii Dadi ( and took her blessings) kesi ho aap,hello uncle, Madhvi aunty and greet all
Sunil and Akshay were about to leave for office
Khushboo : Kya baat hai Jaanvi aaj subha subha, Kahi Romit se phirse jagra toh nahi huwa and tease her
Jaanvi: Nahi bhabhi woh aaj hum shopping jah rahehe, aap ko toh pata hai 10 din baad ... shyly lower her lashes
Khushboo started to tease her " haa 10 din baad toh shaadi aur phir honey moon and all ."
Jaanvi: Bhabhi !!! app bhi nah acha yeh Khanak kahaheand search for
her
Madhvi: Tumein toh pata hai kitchen ke elawa woh kahi nai dikhti
Khanak came from the kitchen
Janvi: Lo agai... Khanak!!!!! tum bhul gai kya hame shopping paar jana hai aur tum abhi taak tayar nai hui
Khanak: baas abhi hojaungi 2 minute mein. Woh mein Dharam bha ko batadu gaari nikalneko
Madhvi: Arey meto batana bhulgai, Dharam ko mene kisi kaam ke liye bahar bhejahe
Raj: woh aunty agar aap kahe toh mein dono ko chordunga and looked at Khanak
Shaan saw him and his blood start boiling and closed his hand in fist
Janvi: Jee yeh...( looked at Raj for intro )
Madhvi: Raj yeh Janvi hai khanak ki dost aur Janvi yeh Raj
They both said hi to each other and started talking
Sunil and Akshay: chalo Shaan hum office chalet hai
Shaan: Nahi!!!!!!! ... ( almost yelled, all looked at him ) I mean dad, muje kuch kaam hai toh mein baad mein ajaunga
Akshay: chote eisa kesa kaam hai tuje ( and looked at him )
Shaan: bhaiya hai koi kaam aap jao na ok bye office mein milte hai
Sunil and Akshay left for office smiling
Khanak came from her room
Khanak: mein ready hogai aab chalo ( looked at Jaanvi who was taking to Raj )
Jaanvi: Acha chalo...lekin pehle muje yeh batao tumne muje bataya nahi Raj arahahe
Khushboo: koi baat nahi janvi abto pata chalgaya nah ...abh Raj yahi rehne wala hai kuch din keh liye ...( smiling at Janvi)
Khanaks become nervous and wanted to end khushboo conv with janvi
Khanak : Maa hum chalteh hai
Madhvi: haa beta jao, Raj tum indono koh chordonge nah?
Shaan: mom!! Mein wahi us raaste se hi jarahahu toh mein chordunga, and said "chalo khanak"
Khanak looked at shaan and said
Khanak: nahi woh, hum taxi lelenge Maa
Raj: are nahi shaan, tumein kuch kaam tha nah aur tumeh office bhi jana hai toh i will drop them
Madhvi: ha Shaan , Raj indono koh choordega , tum jao tumein der rojaegi
Shaan left bad, they all move out of the house
Khanak and Jaanvi were side by side, Shaan and Raj behind them
They reach their cars and Raj opened the front door for Khanak to sit beside him
Shaan was burning in anger seeing the scene of Raj and Khanak on the front seat
Shaan left for office but his mind was on Khanak and Raj
Shaan came to office and got to know he has to meet someone for the project , he was in no mood to do anything but he has to go for it
After few hours
Shaan saw khanak and Raj at the coffee shop and thought "Raj toh indono ko drop karke kahi jaane wala that toh aab yaha aur woh bhi akela khanak keh saath."
Shaan become angry and close his hand into a tight fist and clench his jaw
Khanak was grinning while talking to Raj and Jaanvi was not around
Raj was sharing some jokes to Khanak and at the little distance Shaan thought to pull Khanak from there and give a hard punch on Raj face
Shaan to himself " areh yaar yeah phirse khanak ke saath hai, agar khanak neh haa kardi toh mera kya hoga, meri love story ka kuch karna hoga warna the end laga dega yeah bura khandelwal aur yeah Raj ."
Shaan compose himself and move toward their direction
Shaan : Hello!!!!!! Guys
Both Khanak and Raj looked who called them
Raj: Ohhh!!! Shaan, hiii!!! tum yaha ihs waqt
Shaan: Kyu mein yaha nahi asakta while looking at Khanak
Raj: nahi woh baas mene esehi poocha come sit
Shaan: Mein yaha kisese milne ayatha for the meeting and saw you guys , Jaanvi kahi nahi dikhrahihe ( and looked around )
Khanak was quite didn't say anything
Raj: woh call attend karne gai hai net work problem hai yaha
They order coffee, Raj and Shaan started their conv ,raj told him about his business in India but shaan was disinterested, Khanak was just listening to them
Shaan kept glancing at Khanak time to time and after few minutes Jaanvi joined them
Jaanvi: Shaan tum yaha and to herself " Khanak ke piche piche toh nahi agaya." and them smile to herself to see how much he loves khanak but both are burthals
Shaan: areh tum bhi kya yaar, yaha ana mana hai ke mein yaha nai asakta Hadh hai yaar
Jaanvi smiled to him and said " ok baba sorry and took a seat "
Shaan: Raj tum indono koh drop karne wale the toh hum yaha
Raj: woh jis kaanse jana tha woh meeting cancel hogai toh mene socha indono ko thori company dedu ... ( and he looked at Khanak )
shaan notice him looking at Khanak his blood started boiling
Jaanvi: you know Shaan, acha huwa Raj ki meeting cancel hogai, isi bahane usne hamari shopping mein madad kih hai na khanak
Khanak just smiled and node
Jaanvi thought to tease shaan after seeing his reaction at the mention of Raj and khanak
Jaanvi: Shaan, humne khanak keliye acha sa engegment dress kharida, she was looking stunning in that dress hai na Raj
Shaan left very bad when Jaanvi mention Khanak's engegment
Jaanvi: Raj ne help ki dress select karneme aur aab sirf engegment ring select karni baki hai, aab tum bhi yaha woh toh muje lagta hai ke hum woh bhi karle
Hearing all this Khanak's heart beats raised fast and she said
Khanak: Nahi!!!!!!!
And all trio looked at her
Khanak: mera matlab hai ke engegment ko toh abhi time hai, to abhise hi kyu, wese Jaanu hum tumari shopping karne ayethe aur tum mere biche pargai
Jaanvi: What abhi time hai, just to tease her she said " Tumari engegment Parso hai and smile mischievous to herself
Shaan and Khanak : what !!!!!!!!!! ???? and looked at each other
Jaanvi: yeah aur phir 3 din baad tumari aur raj ki shaadi " how romantic yaar aur phir honey moon ayeee!!!! hayeee!!!!!!! She said all that dreamily and to tease them both
Shaan and Khanak just stare at each other shocked, Raj and Jaanvi were smiling
Jaanvi saw Shaan and Khanak lost in each other's eyes and she cough to bring them both to earth
After sometime they all left the place
Shaan in office couldn't concentrate in his work as Jaanvi words were roaming in his mind, shaadi , engegment, honey moon and all
Shaan to himself " dude apto bohut horahai kuch karna parega lekin yeh Khanak bhi mujse dur rehne lagi hai thikse baat bhi nahi karti. Mein dad se baat karta hu ( tried to move to his dad cabin then he stopped ) nahi pehle mein khanak se baat karlu phir dad se
Khanak at home in her room
Engegment aur shaadi itni jaladi, nahi ese kese and started getting worried, yeh Jaanu zaruru esehi kehrahi thi kyuki agar esa hota tho Maa aur Ada muje zarur batateaur uno sirf yeh kaha woh muje dekhne arahahe engagement kahase agai abhi taak toh kuch fix nahi huwa
On other side Jaanvi met Romit and narrate the story of a coffee shop
They both laugh
Jaanvi: Romit tumhe kya lagta hai Khanak shaan se pyaar karti hai kya
hum yeh toh jante hai Shaan bohut pyar karta hai khanak se. Kya hum saab joh karhahe woh thik hai
Romot: Jaan , muje lagta hai they both love each other tumne yeh nahi dekha jab Khanak shaan ki batein kiya kartithi collage mein toh kitna spark hotata uski ankhome , dono eek dusrese bohut pyaar kartahai lekini patanai kyu abhi taak nahi kaha ekk dosr se
Romit and Jaanvi talked for sometime about shanak and about them too
At Khandelwal house at night
Shaan didn't come early from office, coz of some work to be done and khanak was in her room doing her stuffs
Dadi, Madhvi, Raj and sunil were having conv his sunil's room
Sunil: Thank u Raj beta, tumne iss natak mein hamara sath diya
Dadi: Ha beta yeh dono pata nahi kaab eek dusrese kahenge ke dono ekk dusrese pyaar karte hai, pata nahi kya baat hai
Sunil: ha maa Shaan ki galat fehmi to dur hui par phir bhi pata nahi abhi taak khanak se baat nahi ki usne aur pata nahi kyu khanak neh bhi kuch nahi kaha isbare
Madhvi: Maa shaayad woh humse nah nahi karsakti kyuk ki humne use apne pariwar ka hisa banaya jaab uske parent nahi rahe
Raj: yeah uncle aunty is right, khanak neh shayad esa socha hoga isiliye kuch nahi kaha ... dono ese hi hai bachpan se, dono bohut care karte hai ekk dusre kih, jaabi khanak ko pareshani hoti thi toh shaan pareshaan hojata tha
Raj was shanak school friend, Raj full name is Rajveer Malhotra
Raj parent are good friends of khandelwal
They left Mumbai to London when Raj was in school with shanak,
Shanak were not in contact after few years with Raj but Sunil was with his father for some business activities
One day sunil got a call from Raj's father that Raj was coming to London and they want a nice girl for their son to get married
After some time Sunil thought and talk to Raj about Shanak and he agreed to make his old friends together
All were worried now that shanak didn't tell anything to each other
Raj: Muje lagta hai zarur kuch baat hai ya phir koi aur galat fehmi
After some talk all had dinner except Khanak who was waiting for Shaan to talk
Khanak was passing back front in her room and waiting for Shaan
She wanted to know everything today as time is slipping and Jaanvi word roaming in her mind
Khanak: muhje shaan se baat karni chahiye...woh kitna kehrahata use baat karni hai lekin mein ne nahi suni...kya baat hosakti hai ...aaj kuch bhi hojae mein uski baat sunungi...shayad woh kuch aur kehna chahtaha aur mein ne kuch aur socha
Every one left to their respectively room after dinner
Sometime later the door bell rang and Khanak ran to open the door
Khanak opened the door and saw Shaan .
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Edited by heer_85 - 12 years ago
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