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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi friends, 1st happy makarsankranti to all😊,

from many days i thought to write a Os on shanak 😛i think this is best day,n this is best way to say makarsankranti .

after reading the title don't afraifd this is a sweat Os, n s this is my 1st OS so plz forgive the mistake coz i'm not good in writing n plz comment if like it coz i think to write a FF also on shanak but only if u guys like my Os, so plz comment or hit like button.

OS: Khanak Ka Badala

all khanadelwal family is very happy after listening khanak's preganancy news, shan is so excited, madhavi give warning to khanak do not enter in kitchen. n khanak agree on it.

in next day evening in shanak room khanak resting on bed , shan is out of the room, at that time phone bell rings , khanak pick up phone their is khushboo on other end.

khanak: hellow,
khushboo: hi my would be mom kaisi ho, mom told me the news, i'm so excited khanak, aur shan kahan hain,wo khush hain na, ... arey khanak kuch to bolo main hi bole ja rahi hun

khanak: bhabhi ap bolane mauka dengi to main bolungi na, main thik hun, shantanu khush hain aur vo abhi ghara par nahi hain, mil gaye apake sawalon ke jawab... huush.

khushboo: khanak... aur kya kaha tumane shan ghar par nahi phir kahan gaya... aur wo aise halat main tumhe chod kar kaise ja sakata hain...waise bhi akhir bhai hain to akshay ka hi na... inse aur expect bhi kya kiya ja sakata hain

khanak: bhabhi aise bat nahi unki jaroori meeting thi isaliye..

khushboo: tum to usaki tarafdari na hi karo ... waise achha hain wo is waot waha nahi hain

khanak: kyun
khushboo: khanak mere dimag mein ek idea hain

khanak: kya

khushboo: tumhe yad hain shan ne preganacy ke bahane tumhein tumhe kitana pareshan kiya tha, to khanak ab tumhari bari shan se apna badala lene ki

khanak : badala... par bhabhi main kaise,.. ap kya keh rahi hain meri to kuch samaj mein nahi aa raha

khushboo: tum samajo mat ...bas main jaisa kahati hun wisa karo( she told khanak somehing)

khana k: par bhabhi...shantnu ko pata chal gaya hamare plan e bare mein to wo naraz ho jayenge

khushboo: usaki chinta tum mat kara ... hum sirf mazak kar rahe hain...aur waise bhi shan ne bhi tumhe bahut pareshan kiya tha apane preganacy swings dikha kar...to mission khanak ka badala start ajase hi...done

khanak: done

in the night shan sleep peacfully on bed khanak seat on the bed remebering bhabhi's plan

khanak to herself : kahak issase accha mauka tumhe nahi milega shantanu ko pareshan karane ka ... aur waise bhi shantanu ne bhi muze buhat pareshan kiya tha...to mere buthal taiyyar ho jaye

khanak to shan: shanatu ...uthiye na...plz...
shan: kya hua khanak( still in his sleeping mode)

khanak: utheye na...muze mitha khanak hain

shan:( in shock) tumhe meetha khana hain vo bhi abhi rat ko ek baje...khanak abhi muze neend aa rahi hain ,..main tumhare liye subhah dher sari mithai mang wa lunga abhi so jao plz( he engulf her to led on bed)

khanak: muze abhi khani hain...apako to meri fikr hi nahi hain.. sahi kehate hain sabhi ke pati ka pyar dheere dheere kum haone lagata hain...ap bhi unhi mein se hain...

shan: khanak tum janati ho na main tum se kitana pyar karata huin, aur tumhare liye kuch bhi kara sakata huin..

khanak: to mere liye kheer banaye abhi...agar ap nahi banayege to main banalungi aur agar mamaji ko pata chala ke unake mana karane bad bhi main kitchen main gaye thi wo rat ek baje to ap hi jawab dena unako.( she try to left the room)

shan: khanak..khanak...tum aram karo ...main kheer banakar lata hun...per kum se kum meri madad to kar do banane mein

khanak: ap chahate ho ke main mumiji ki adesh ki avahelna kar doon ..( make pouty face)
shan: (with irritation) khank tum meri madad mat karo lekin kum se kum aise dangerous words to istemal mat karo yar.( then he left)

shan in kitchen: shan beta ab teri khair nahi pata nahi khanak aur kitane ratein tumhe aise jagayegi

khanak call to khushboo: bhabhi ap ne jaisa kaha main ne waisa hi kiya...shantanu kitchen main mere liya kheer bana rahein hain...par muze unhein aisa tang karana achha nahi lag raha

khushboo: good khanak... aur tum thori der ke liye shan ki wife ko chod kar dhulwadi ki khanak ban jao...don't worry ek ,do din ki bat hain

khanak.: par...ap kaheti hain to theek hain.( then both r started chatting 0

while they chatting shan come near to shanak room n stay near the door , he listene all conversation of khanak n khushaboon n he is shock that khanak is doing drama to only make his fun...

shan to himself: dekha shan tuze to lagata tha teri bibibholi hain, tuzase pyar karati hain , lekin wo itani bholi nahi hain...khanak main tumhein abhi batata huin ke shantanu khandelwal se panga lene ka anjam kya hota haon ...(.he wanna enter in room but stop ...n mesmerised by khanak laugh)...nahi shan khanak kitani khush laga rahi hain, aur main usaki khushike liye kuch bhi kar sakata huin

then he enter in the room khanak immidiatly put the phone after seeing that shan enter in the room

shan sees her action but behave like he not noticed any thing.

khanak to herself: buch gaye khanak ..agar shantanu sun liya hota to...

shan: khanak lo ban gaye tumhari kheer ..aur main apani bb ko apane hanto se khilaunga...ab jaldi khakar batao kaisi bani hain

khanak: ( take seap) bahut achhi hain
shan: achhi to haogi na main ne jo banaye hain

khanak: acha
shan: ji ...achha( both laugh heartly)

next days night again same situation...but this time there is twist

khanak: shantanu uthiye na...plz...

shan: ( wake up) let me guess aj bhi tumhein meetha khana hain ... main abhi kheeer bana kar lata huin

khanak: nahi
shan: nahi...tumhein meetha nahi khana

khanak: khana hain par kheer nahi aj halawa khana hain

shan: ( shocked ) halawa
khanak : ( with cute face ) halawa

shan to himself:( he is irritated) main janata hun tum mera mazak bana rahi ho...par main tumhare liye kuch bhi kara sakata huin

shan: abhi lata huin

khanak: jaldi ana ..muze neend aa rahi hain

shan: abhi gaya aur abhi aya bas tum sona nahi...huuum

khanak: huum ( nodded her head)

shan left room...after 1 hr he come n see khanak is sleeping peacfully ... he come fast near bed ...put tray on table..seat on bed near khanak

shan: khanak...khanak utho( shaking her by holding her face)

khanak hold his hand n move near to him...shan try for some time then gave up ...he just look at khanak face she looks so cute as always...then he kiss on her cheek n say I LOVE U KHANAK he also sleep by engulfing her tightly

in the morning khanak wake up n see shan sleep by holding her waist ...she blush...but suddenly feel bad after seeing knief cut on shans hand...tears comes in her eyes

shan stear in his sleep n see khanak stearing at him with tears in her eyes...he immidiatly seat on bed ...

shan: kya hua khanak ...tum ro kyun rahi ho...

khanak: shantanu muze maf kara dijiye...main bahut buri ho ..main acchi bb nahi huin

shan: par tumane aisa kiya kya jo main tumhe maf karadoon
khanak: main ne jan buzkar apko pareshan karane ke liye ap se rat ko kheer aur halawa banwaya,...muze maf kara dijiye( she hug him tightly)

shan started laughing
shan: to tum isaliye ro rahi ho...waise to tum muze burthal kehati hi lekin ho khud...main sab janata tha khanak ye tumhari aur bhabhi ka plan tha

khanak:( shocked) kya

shan: han ..main tumhari bhabhi se batein suni thi
khanak: ap janate the phir bhi apne mere liye...shanatanu muze maff kara diji ye

shan: ( keep fingure on her lips) shhh... main ye sab kiya kuin ki main tumase bhut pyar karata hun samajhi( he hug her more tightly)...waise agar galati ki hain to mafi mangne se kuch nahi hoga tumhe isaki saja bhi milani chahiye...( having nauthy smile on his face)

khanak: kya

shan;(looking at her lips ) wo tum acch e se janati ho

khanak: nahi

shan: han( then he kissed her ..before she could say anything)





tell me guys how it is...n forget any mistakes...i'm waiting for u r replys

n 😊 HAPPY MAKARSANKRANTI😊

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dqkytm thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww!! so cutee! i loved it! :) you should write more!

hahaha that is SO kboo bhabhi and khanak! haha nice plans by both of them! and so cute of shaan! :)

loved it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowww i really liked ur os khanak ka badla...😆
shaan is sooo sweet...😃
do write more...😉
.sariminoz. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww it was so cute os ...khanak was so cute in this
sharon18 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey sorry i didn,t get ur name...

It was a nice OS ...awww how i wish i got to see all this in television ,only if RBO had not ended😔

but the update was really lovely especially the conspiracy...i pity Akshay,Kushboo is gonna be a terror when she gets pregnant😆

The way Shaan continued to bear everything just to see her happy was so cute😳

It was a really nice OS hope u come up with more😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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great👍🏼
khanak ka badala... wowww i really liked😛
i just fill i am watching the rbo...so nice...
each and every word...khushboo and khanak bonding...nicely describe...all khandelwal women was superb!...wow!what a plan...
shaan ko pareshaan kar diya... 😆
shaan so sweet...prepared kheer and halwa...for his wife...
great...
please write another OS...i am waiting for that...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very well written!!! Do write more.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww! this is so ture to our ShaNak and the adorable togetherness! Just Awesome...i loved how she reacted and got all emotional when she sees how hard he worked for the halwa...KT/YM would have been magical if RBO was on air for some time longer! Thanks and do write more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanx guys for u r rplys😊 n encouragement.

now i think i shuold start my FF.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: loveYM

thanx guys for u r rplys😊 n encouragement.


now i think i shuold start my FF.


yes of course !!!

go ahead👍🏼

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