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Posted: 14 years ago
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update 1




Its recess time all are playing in the school but somewhere

Oh toh naya bacha !!! arre beta apna tiffin yahan toh dikhana

Sid is surrounded by the bad boys of he school*

Nahin mein nahin doon ga !

He is about to cry*

Arre sunai nahin diya kya ek baar mein!

Nahin aur mein sunna bhi nahin chahta

*he is starts sobbing*

Oh toh kuch zyada hi akad hai ! chetan zara isse batana ki school mein vishal koon hai

Someone comes from behind*

Koon hai ! hum bhi jaane

*its shaan , he is standing with his back towards vishal and then turns his head*

Shaan ! tum isse bahar hi raho

Kyoun too kon hai mujhe patane wala ki mein kahan jaon , kya karoon na karoon

He gives a sly smile *

Akash apne dost ko samjha le

*akash stamers *

Kya samjhaon ! to hi samjha le aa ke

*shaan pushes akash back*

Abe doosron ka tiffin kyoun chin ta rehta hai kuch zyada patla ho gya hai kya . weing machin pe chade ga toh machine hi toot jaye gi

*vishal gets angry*

Shaan ! bahut ho gya

*shaan gives a wide smile*

Toh nikal yahan se warna agar bahut ho gaya warna ! mein mam ke paas jaon ga

Vishal makes a bad face and goes from there with his gang*

*shaan moves his hand forward*

Hi I am shaan

*sid thinks that shaan is his hero *

Mmm hi shaan thank you

Oh yeh toh …… kuch nahin tha ! you are new in school right ! join our gang

aurmein akash

Hi akash I am siddhant .

Mmm sidhant kuch zyada lamba naam nahin hai lets keep it sid !

*sid smiles *

Ya fine !

Chalo ab khana khatein hai,arre sid waise to laya kya hai tiffin mein

*Sid looks at him surprised*

Par tumne toh abhi mera tiffin bachaya

*shaan smiles *

Toh kya hua mein kha nahin sakta kya !

*the three start laughing *

*the three friends are sitting in a disco its quite late night but not for them !. They are celebrating their anniversary ! of their freindship ! shaan is wearing a white shirt with his top two buttons unbuttoned with a pair of blue jeans and cool sneakers akash is wearing a dark blue shirt and sid the decent one is wearing white with a jacket !*


Hahahaha ! mujhe aj bhi yaad hai shaan doosron ka tiffin vishal se bachata tha aur phir baad mein unse le kar khata tha

*akash and sid do a high five *

*shaan feels emmbaressed*

Yar tum log bhi na ! yeh purani baatein hain

*he beats sid on his back*

Chalo dance karne ! yeh saari batein apne budhape ke liye chod do !

* akash is angry *


Hahaaha ver funny !

*akash teases him *

Buddha hoga too !

Chup ho ja aur chal budha budha kar raha hai aur sid toh ladki hai dance krne ke liye sau bar bolna padhega !

*sid shows shaan his tongue *

Kamse kam I am a human beign


*shaan laughs *

Oh ho to mein nahin ho !

*sid nods his head *

Haan to nahin he ! ja bahar being human ki tee shirts bik rahin hai ek apne liye bhi khare le ! hee hahaha!!!

Akash and sid do a high five*

*shaan smirks*

Uda lo jitni udani hai ! baad mein me bhi tumhe dekhta hoon !

*shaan gets up and winks at sid and akash *

Lets meet you guys on the dance floor girls hehehahaha !!


Shaan dances and move to the dance floor *

*akash and sid look at each other *

Chal bhai move to the dance floor !

Sid keeps his drink down *

Who toh janna padhe ga ! yeh shaan warna koi announcment kardega mike pe ! chaal mera mooh kya dekh raha hai !

*khanak is driving the car she is wearing a flowy white dress till her knees *

*pooja behind her is doing her make up wearing a pink dress she looks cute*

*ritu sitting besid khanak is looking outside she is wearing a sleevless top with jeans *

Khanak , you girls shouldn't have bought me ! mera matlab hai

Ritu di don't say anything bas bethi raho hum kaunsa aap ko chod kar jaa rahein hain !

*a speed breaker comes and pooja applaying her lipstick behind is disturded

Khanak !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dhyan se nahin chala sakti !

Mein kya karon to kitna makeup kargi ! aise kar rahi hai jaise wahan ranbir yaan shahid se milne ja rahi hai

*the topic in pooja's mind changes she think of shahid and ranbir and then winks at khanak *

Haan waise unke jaise koi mil jaye to ! chance nahin le sakti !

*khanak rolls her eyes*

Hey bhagwaan mujhe is ladki se bacaho !

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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
nice one prerna..
guys sharing their childhood memory n making fun of shaan..
abb mulakat hoga kya between the guys n girls..
when will u update next??

wat abt the other FF??
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
nice yaar loved dere convo... 😛
it reminds me of my school days...😆
waiting for shanak interaction...😛😛



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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
wow bacha thats good

yaar jaldi likh na m excited for there meet at disco

m super eager to knw wat happens next

love yaa

keep writin

muah...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
Hey Prerna gud start 😃 i was confused in the begining thinking it was sum school story😆 and i was thinking 'Oh God wen r they gonna grow up?'😆 finally when i read about the anniversary i was relieved😆...it was a cute update , actually not many friendship's last so long ,it's really nice if it does and people who find such frnds r really lucky😃...so wen is shaan and khanak gonna meet ????im impatient for that😈...plz update soon plz u disappeared after the introduction plz dont do that again😃...as a punishment u have to give us atleast 2 updates back to back😉...update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
good start
loved the friend convo
so they r going to meet at disco...m super excited
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
Hello Prernarbofan, 😊
Thank you for the PM. 😃
It was a lovely update. Nice start though, getting a glimpse of the start of the three's friendship.
And what is up with Ritu? Sorry, I couldn't catch the character properly.
Imagining Arjun in a shy kind of role is not new, because he has already portrayed such a kind in MJHT. And, it's good to see him back in that, as it suits him.
Looks like the disco thing will be a turning point in their lives...Can't wait!
Lovely Start and Thanks again! 😃
Looking forward for more updates!! 😊
Regards
Annie 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38

PART TWO-

"Waise khanak I just hope that rohit doesn't come ."

Khanak makes a dirty face . Only she knew how much she hated that over possesive rohit but what could she do her parents liked him so she had to be quite

Speak good pooja . don't say this . maine abhi gadi chalana sikha hai . Kahin takar kara de ge

Oh phir mein cup rehti hoon mujhe apni jaan bahut pyaari hai !

They both look at ritu . She was khanak's cousion she had been divorced from her husband just after one year of marriage . She was quite all the way . who knew how she felt . No one could understand her pain

Di ! aap fikar maat karo . aap ek baar wahan jao gi toh apni saari fikren bhool jayengi

Khanak gives her a warm smile

Gives a watery smile

Aa gaye tum loog ! good !

They both dance for some time . Shaan just turns his head and sees some one waving to him and shouting his name . He sees the face clearly

Oh my good ! yeh khushi yahan bhi pahunc gayi

The other too look back . and they give a wink to each other . Khushi had a crush on shaan since school days wherever shaan went she was there.

yaar mein bhaag raha hoon yahan se who puche gi toh bolna usne kuch ulta pee liya aur usse ulti aa gayi aur who ghar jaa raha hai ! FINE !

sid nods his head controlling his laughter .

yaar shaan ek baat bata too usse itna dar ta kyun hai apni sakaldekh aise lag raha hai jaise bheegi billi . kitni sweet hai bechari tujhe itna pyaar karti hai!

Shaan didn't like sid supporting khushi . come on he was his best friend

Agar itni pyaari lagti hai toh uske paas chale ja !. Too uske paas ja aur mein apni gaadi ke paas jata hoon

Shaan leaves sids hand and is about to go when skash stops him . he always liked to trouble him

Arre shaan aise kaise jaa raha hai ruk dance kar !

Dekh akash mein jo chahe karonga too mujhe jane de PLEASE!!!! Ab dekh who aa rahi hai mujhe jaane de

Shaan pushes akash back and goes and sits on the bar as he could not go to the paring lot . He ordered a beer . Just then a voice came from behind

HI ! SHAAN !!!!

Shaan spits his drink . He felt as if his mom was shouting .

Ummm h.. h.. hi khushi

He was stammering . he was afraid of this girl . for him she was wild . He had nicknamed her jungli billi.

Shaan !!!!

Khushi says in a husky voice getting closer too him

Tumhe pata hai you are looking very handsome

Shaan is about to get an attack .

Come on good itna torcher . Mein mar jaon ga !

Sid and akash see shaan from a distant and start laughing

Yeh doo bandar inhe toh mein maza chakaoon ga

Khushi sees that shaan is not looking at him

Arre shaan tum kahan dekh rahe ho ! chalo chodo tumhe pata hai mein tum se kush kehna chahti hoon

Shaan stares at her .

NO I CANNOT HANDEL THIS I HAVE TO DO SOMETHING

He thinks and after some time he gets an idea

Khushi tum jo mere bare mein sochti ho who mein hoon nahin

Khushi looks shocked .

What ! what do you mean !

Khushi looks at him . shaan proceeds with his plan

Matlab ki mein kisis aur se …… pyaar karta hoon

WHAT ! WHO IS SHE ! TUM JHOOTH BOL RAHE HOO NA !

Shaan mutters something

What did you say

Arre… mein thodi jhooth bol raha hoon mein tuhe jhooth kaise bol sakta hoon

He looks around and then he sees a girl .

Yaar shaan yeh risk lena theek hai agr usne ek thappad mara toh . no meri bezati ….. par akash kehta hai girls don't mind aur unhe acha lagta hai … chal ab yeh khushi ka chapter khatam karna hi hai toh risk lena hi padega

Khushi keeps her hands on her waist . she is in the full mood to talk with the girl

Shaan wavesto khushi to bring her back to her senses

Khushi tumhara luck kitna acha hai dekho she is here

Kahan hai who chudail….

Shaan makes an angry look

mmm.. mera matlab hai tumhari dost kahan hai

woh dekho wahan MUJHE WHO NAHIN DIKH RAHI HAI !

Acha baba calm down ! dekho …. Pehele mein uske pass ja ke baat karonga phir tumhe bolaonga theek hai

FINE !!!! PAR JALDI KARNA !!!!!!!! MEIN BHI DEKHOON KAUN HAI WHO !!!!

Haan dekh lena !

Khanak isnt dis a good place haina !!!!!!!

Khanak rools her eyes

Tumhe toh achi lage gi hi ! itne saare ladke jo hain

Pooja makes a scornfull look

Someone comes over and taps on khanak's sholder. Khanak gets a shock

Arre ! koon hai

Shaan doesn't find a way to speak

Well hi I am shaan

Khanak finds it weird I mean a stranger

Ummm…. Hi I am khanak

Shaan didn't mean to make her his friend but he had to . he and his weird ideas

Well can we be friends ?

Well….. but why ?

Dekhiye please ! mujhe aapki madat chahiye please !

Par mein apki madad kaise kar sakti hoon ! mein toh apko jaanti bhi nahin hoon!

Par aap abhi toh meri friend bani

Pooja sees shaan and likes his looks like any other girl

Mmm can I take her for a moment !

nahin dekho mujhe bas chothi si madad chahiye !

Khanak maan ja na please dekh kitna cute hai

Pooja looks at shaan with deep eyes

Shaan looks weirdly at her

Khanak says scornfully

Theek hai ! what do you want !

Shaan smiles at last his plan is working

Dekho ek ladki aygi who tumhe mere baare mein puchegi toh aap bolnw ki aap mujhe bahut passand karti hain

Khanak looks shocked

But why , I mean you are playing with her feelings

No I am not mein toh apni feelings pata raha hoon please aisa nahin that she is not good who achi hai par mein pyaar mein believe nahin karta

Ok fine bring her !

Thank you thank you so much !

Yaar akash ! who shaan kya kaar raha hai !

Pata nahin too aran se juice pe na !

Akash thinks . what can shaan do , ok he is with khushi and then he goes to that girl !

SID ! I got it shaan is using that girl to get rid of khushi ! paagal ! hamare rehte hue aise kuch ho sakta hai kya

No AKASH too kaisa dost hai that is not good !

Come on have fun !

He winks at sid

Sid is tired of the old drama since school ! he wipes his fore head

No not again !!!!



hey guys I am not happy with this update but I have to introduce the characters please don't be dismayed !

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Prerna what makes u think this update is not gud😕...it was lovely i liked their first meeting and hate to admit it but i feel so sorry for Khushi😆😆awww what a heartbreak😆...im waiting to find out wat mischief his frnds will b upto next😆aww poor khanak😆😆...well hope the first impression is gonna b good cause first impression is the best impression after all😆😆...thnx for giving us this funny and cute update🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
y do u think its not good prerna..
its fine..
first meet of our shanak..
arre yeh akash kyun itna pbm create kar raha hai yaar..poor shaan..
i want shaan to tease akash mainly..he is playing too much with shaan..kushi ko goli maar..phir panga karne wale akash ko kushi torture karein..
do continue soon..

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